FF: Episodes(UPDATED) *Chapter-9*)Pg-17

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933191

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: blueocean
Arnav really was a monster in the first few episodes... You portray everyone's emotions correctly
great update!!!

P.S- I cant wait to read the poolside kiss😆

thank you I was really afraid that my reactions were out of character for the characters but I am glad you don't think so and of course the poolside Kiss😉 but I will kind of be omitting some intimate scenes in the future like Arnav Singh Raizada once said "Kisi ko yeh janana zaruri nahi hai ki jab hum dono akele rehtein hai hum kya kartein hai."

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933191

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Posted: 12 years ago

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AneesahJabeen

@AneesahJabeen

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Awesome hun
But i think u shud include characters reactons more? Just a suggestion lol xx

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Bahaha!this is great! I loved it!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

trust me you guys will be shocked as to what he did after this confrontation
hence making sure that creep entered her life
awww he will finally know that it was him who caused snake to enter her life and make their lives hell
well of course she want committing suicide but making jalebis
remember her stress buster
funny he wanted to make sure that tape wasnt released and then he did
where did his brain go on holiday at that moment
you will see the impact of your actions of releasing that tape
goons harassing her and her being sent to delhi
see thats why she picked fight with ya
as due to you her mom was mad at her
wonder if they will be able to see what he has done to her
awww jadoo is so funny right
ASR was and will be rakshash to KKGSR jadoo
cheers for pm

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Abi

@Abi.Na

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Love it!
Thx for the pm...

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Tulipdulip

@Tulipdulip

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

That was so nice... Loved it!!,

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Devika

@WaterIce

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

great update!!!

And it seems that Jaadu doesn't really like Arnav...

The Dargah scene is one of my favourites and you have written it very well

update soon

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archa2810

@archa2810

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Aweaome... Of course... Not alien but a rakshas... Only khushi can call him that... Lol

a request... Next time on, please mention the page no. on which chapter is posted so that it is easy to find