D3 SS: .||Twisted||. Chap 3 Pg-7 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dis is something very intriguing.. N ofcourse Fresh !
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Nice Start!!!
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wow u r back wit a d3 ss🤗

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Ur writing style is simply awesome.
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amazing start
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AMAZING

INTERESTING START

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Apologies for the late update had to make many changes and also somehow the whole chapter got deleted y'day so wrote it gain and it got all messy. Anyway here's chapter 2,Enjoy! :)

Chapter 2

A faint bang at the window at first and then the bang got louder and heavier. She got up startled. Her first impression was it's a dream but again the bang was heard, sharp and shrill. She looked at the clock, 3: 35 a.m. it read. Slowly she got out of the bed and moved towards the window. The night was dead quiet. No voice just regular bangs. Gathering all the courage, she moved forward and removed the curtains.

She stood rooted to her place but as soon her senses knocked in; she quickly opened the window seal.

"Stop staring and pull me up dumb ass! I'm literally hanging here"

And that was her roommate.

"Are you completely out of your mind Kria Ghai?" Vrinita barked at her.

"Easy Lady, people are sleeping. Plus the warden maybe on round; she is crazy" she said lying down on Vrinita's bed.

"And so are you! Where were you all night?"

"Oh I met someone at the downtown alley bar and we hit it off right and enjoyed" Kria said thinking about the last few hours. "And we just PARTIED so don't give me that look". She added seeing her roommate's face.

"Whatever! Get off my bed. Have a shower. You have a project submit due tomorrow, final deadline".

"Aye Aye captain!" she mocked her and went towards the cupboards.

Her cell phone beeped indicating a new message and she couldn't help but grin when she read it.

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It had been 2 weeks since he was here. The surroundings and the people nothing effected him much and thankfully wasn't as harsh as he had expected. Sipping his cold coffee and occasionally glancing out of the window of the cafe, Swayam patiently waited for his new friends.

"Hey there" Neha said pulling a chair for herself "Others will be joining after sometime, Aram had to grab some books".

He nodded slightly, finishing the last sip of his coffee as Neha ordered the same for herself.

"So you like the place?" Neha asked.

"You mean the cafe?. It's good and otherwise this place, I mean this city is okay. Being in a new place and knowing not a single person gets a little weird but its okay now. You got a cousin coming here, right?

"A friend of friend actually, she's joining ST Patrick's. She would be boarding her flight tomorrow.

"Everything else is fine but 16.5 hours flight journey gets hectic!"Swayam said as both paid their bills.

"Oh yes and when you have luck as mine, it just makes the situation worse"

"What do you mean?"

"Actually, a guy, who was a complete moron sat next to me in the flight. He was so damn irritating and listening to his endless chat, not to forget the numerous times I had told him to shut up or mind his business; he wouldn't care and being with him for the whole 16 and a half hours, real test of patience.

"C'mon, entertainments in flight are well entertaining and rare" Swayam commented.

"He wasn't an entertainment, he was a headache. He talked about how awesome this city is; his cars and most of the time himself! I swear I would have hit him if I meet him again, hopefully I won't.

They got out of the cafe and were walking on the sidewalk.

"Do you know his name?"

"Nope but I know who he is"

"Who"

"Him"

Swayam turned around, Neha stood dumbstruck and was standing with her jaw dropped opened, looking across the street. A guy and a girl were standing, and the guy waving at her-the idiot, of course.

Swayam stood beside Neha as the duo from across the street came over.

"Neha hey, didn't really expect I would see you here"

"Trust me neither did I"

"But as fate may have it, here we are. And I suppose that Ms Nerdy's boyfriend?"

"Friend!"

"Okay, hey, this is Vicky" he forwarded his hands for a handshake.

"Swayam here" and he shook his hands.

"We rarely get Indians here, we should definitely hangout together sometime" the girl with him suggested.

"I think she is right, we should definitely meet up. Tell you what, we are going to this new club with friends, you guys want to join?" Vicky offered.

Both Swayam and Neha couldn't agree; the former because of college work and the latter for no reasons at all.

"Okay then let leave"

"Swayam, you have got nice hair, makes you looks..Sexy" the girl complimented.

"Thanks" Swayam grinned, after which the other two left.

"Hey!"Marah called out. Marah, Aram and Ruhan finally reached. "Sorry had to get some books" Aram spoke apologetically.

"By the way you guys know them?"Ruhan asked, looking in the direction in which aforementioned duo had left.

"Not really, why you know them" Neha asked.

"The guy is pretty famous around here for being the cool spoilt brat" Marah said.

"And the girl Kria, they were the ex-flame of the town, in and around the club all night together" Aram joined in.

"Okay, that's a lot of information" Swayam commented.

"But Neha, you didn't hit him like you had earlier said, change of plans, huh?" Swayam said smirking.

"Shut up"

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Bwahaha Like that? 😈
( we really wanted to do that 😆)

3rd chapter will be updated soon-ish.

Au revoir,
Shreya and Kanishtha

Edited by muzzy_sk - 12 years ago

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