Swaron FF: Destiny and it's Funny game [Chapter 14 UPDATED]

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Mehvash Naazneen

@dashinggirl

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

nice,small and lovely update 😊

but next time big update plzzz

really the bonding btw swayam and sharon after their breakup

u ended the part on right point 👍🏼

there is so much of suspense now

very curious to know who is the person

plzz update soon

want to read next part ...

pm me when r u updating

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@Death_Memories

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

read all the updates in one go
the plot is really interesting till now
the way you have penned this one is amazing
i think swayam lied about his room cuz there nust be sharon pic all over there(just a guess)
loved how swayam being the selfless one is hiding his pain just for her happiness
the choupati scene was nice
i really like how the story is shaping up
hmmm finally sid is here i guess
thank for the pm
update asap and do pm me
-Harshita

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Twinkle_d3

@Twinkle_d3

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Nice update loved their bonding..
Kr r fab as always pls update soon..

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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

It was lovely update

Both swayam nd sharon having gala time at beach.
They enjoying their chaat nd each others company.

Swayam nd sharon living their moment bt kriyaansh lil bit worried for them.

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Shanaya Patel

@shanaya_shanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

arre waah yeh tho bahut awesome hain dear👏👏

but it was small...its okay😳

loved SwaRon😳😳

kya suspense diya yaar😆

superb...but update soon dear😉

waiting for next chappy eagerly😃😃😃

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

chotu update but one says short nd sweet.

but didnt want the cliffhanger of an ending!!thanks for the pm nd update soon.

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

nice update

swayam and Sharon as a friend nicely written

thanks for the pm

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#158

Amazing update!!👏

really liked the chaupati wala part..😊

waiting for the next chapter eagerly...

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

now sid ki entry?

bahar nikalo yaar smarty, sid ko entry ke baad jaldi exit karvana ha?

i m not gonna pounce on u for chotu updt---just update karne ki kripa ki bahut hai(yeah thats sarcastic)

and i loved it. the beach eating scene was fab.

continue soon.

lots of love--medha

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Heena

@kamlesh32

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#160

Very nice ff...i read all five chapters in one go. I hope sharon and sid dont get married. I wonder who is this new person...is it sid? Well please update soon and do pm me.