Swaron FF: Destiny and it's Funny game [Chapter 14 UPDATED]

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

super!!

after such a long time did shivam do anything good!

liked the faceof

also now kriya nows it all so hope everything becomes okay now1!

nice writing!

ty for the pm:)!!

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Ria

@Ria_SwaRon

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

This was wonderful update..

couldnt comment lately.. Bt I religiously follow ur FFs..😳

The story is intriguing and I am waiting to see how it will shape up..

Swayam and Sharon..both soon I guess will face some twists.. 😛

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anushka1129

@anushka1129

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

supreb update..
shivam😡
but thanks to him we go our swaron awesome dance😃.
finally kria know both still love each other..
so hope there is something good for swaron on the way..
plz update soon ..
thanks for the pm :)

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

res

unres

swaron dance 😳😳.

hai dreamy !!

thanks for the PM

waiting for the next PM

PS. sorry for the short comment

GTG..

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

this was an awesome part.
Shivam🤬ki entry was unexpected mera to mann kar rha tha ki swayam use lagaa hi de do chaar but dance face off was nice idea and the way you put it it was easy to imagine as we have seen it in dance fest.Awesome choreography.
Loved the last duet part.swaron and tango are always treat to read.
GLAD TO KNOW KRIA NOTICED SOMETHING DIFFERENT WITH SHARON TOO.LAST PART WAS FUN AND RELAXING
ALL IN ALL BRILLLIANT UPDATE
DO UPDATE SOON
P.S-thanx for the pm

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Chaitra Joshi

@-Chaitra-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

great update...

swaron dancing tango...

and swayam lecturer😆

well written...

update soon

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Awesome update 😊

Loved the Swaron dance

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Varada

@damonTVDrocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Awesome as always...👏

Now that Shiritating Shivam...😡 But for the 1st time I found him of some use! As that couple dance from Swaron was worth it... I could bear his presence due to that!! He actually, in my opinion, helped get them closer..😳 I hope Kriya does something to get them back together!!😉Update soon n do pm me...😊