Swaron FF: Destiny and it's Funny game [Chapter 14 UPDATED] - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
Need an update weekend b gaya iss weekend me b nai mila aaj to update chahiye anyhow
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hey hi 😉
it was just amazing dear👏👏
continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rohan_smile

res...yaay!!!!


it was nice as always...
loved the flashback...
everything was again described wonderfully...
gud job..!!
second room...suspicious...??
ets see wat happens ahead..

Rohan :/


Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: sadafarsha

Hayye it was awsum

Funally saw swaron together in ur ff toh kya hua if only for sumtym abhi toh starting but plzzz han i want more and more swaron scene in every update plzzz
Plzzz update next part sooon and do pm me
Thanx for the pm


Swaron scenes toh milenge hi as FF Swaron pe hai 😆
And yes more and more Swaron scene pakka 😉

Originally posted by: vrushan11swaron

wow...finally u updated.
dis was gr8...hope room mein kuch special ho...
update nxt son


Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: Twinkle_d3

Nice update..
Really lovd rey here...
Swaron startd new being friends
waiting for nxt part


Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: -spongy-

res

unres

really nice yaar
i loved it a lot...
swaron being new friends
👏👏

finally ur back 😃😃
waiting for the next update thanks for the PM


Thank you 😃 and yes finally I'm back and will give update soon now 😉

Originally posted by: sanstina

Awesome update 😊

Swayam is happy being friend with Sharon


Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: raj_tanha_fan

wow!! kya dhaasu update tha!!

very well written!!
hope in the room kuch zyada hi special hoga!!


Dhaasu!!! 😆 Well thank you 😃

Originally posted by: anushka1129

awesome update..
swayam was so happy atleast sharon is his friend n he can stay like that forever aww..
like rey am also so happy to see swayam happy 😳
flashback was so cute..
something special is there at that room for sure😃
excited to read further..
thanks for pm..
update soon :)


thank you 😃

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

Soo u finally updated.. Hope ur exams went fine..😊
The update was superb as usual.. Swayam and sharon trying to be friends with each other..👍🏼
Swayam happy on getting sharon back as a friend and sharon reminiscing their old memories as lovers..😃
Their moment at sharon's place was awesome remembering their old college days.. Sharon being the hitler in college hehehe aur swayam ka woh dialogue kaam pasand nahi aaya toh shaamat aayi..😆
That room has some special memories related to sharon maybe no wonders swayam was stammering while telling sharon about the room..
Waiting for more swaron moments and sorry for the late reply..😊


Yes exams went wel... Thank you 😊
And thanks for the comment too 😃

Originally posted by: d3fan4eva

Nyc update!!😊
I wonder wats the story behind that room!!
Update soon!!:))


Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

humm---they are still very much in love.


chalo lets see aage kya hota hai.

nice writing smarty.

love--medha


Abhi dono love main hai yeh toh dikh rah hai but will they ever confess? 😕
Well lets see 😉
Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: 8085548022

it was nice update

thanks for the pm 😊


Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: austen4ever

great update though it was kinda weird to see them behave like best friends.
swayam stole my heart with everything he said to rey.
sharon has me pretty confused though, has she really moved on😕
i thought meeting him would incite at least a shadow of regret or wistfulness in her but she seems to be doing perfectly fine.
guess it'll become clearer with the upcoming updaytes so update soon.
glad to know your exams went well.


Has Sharon really moved on yeh toh pata nahi because she claims that she has!
Yes things will get pretty clear in the up coming updates 😉
Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: damonTVDrocks

Awesome as always...👏 The wait was worth waiting...😆So, Swaron are now friends (?)...😳 Wondering about the room on the left side...😲Update soon n do pm me...😊


Thank you for waiting 😃

Originally posted by: trisha19

Awesome Update!!

update the next part soon..


Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: vrushanharshi

sorry for a short comment as i dont hvso much tym

the update was super awesome
n finally got a swaron scene n hope to get more of it in d upcoming updates
the room thingi is increasing my curiosity to read
plz update as soon as possible


Hey it's fine don't be sorry about it 😊
And thank you 😃

Originally posted by: lassipriya

ausum update..

convo b/w swayam n rey was good.. waitg for nxt update


Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: Suni1986

It was nice update Reyam convo was too cool nd rey happy for his friend. Sharon nd Swayam getting comfortable with each other as time goes.


Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: shanaya_shanu

hey hi 😉

it was just amazing dear👏👏
continue soon😊


Hey thank you so much dear 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey guys pata hai thoda late ho gayi par kya karti ws caught up with some work...



Chapter 5


Sharon: Swayam hum jaa kahan rahe hai?

Swayam: Ummm'.. Your favorite place'.. Maine socha thodi masti ki jaaye!!!

Sharon (excited): What are you serious!!! It's been 3 years that I've been to the beach'.. God Swayam you are the best'.

Sharon was continuously blabbering in excitement and Swayam was admiring her while driving'..

Swayam (in mind): She hasn't changed a bit'.. Abhi bhi wohi excitement!!! Wohi bachpana!!! Wohi farmaish ki list'.. Sharon, tum chahe jitna bhi dikhava karlo lo but andar se you are still My Sharon'.. MY SHARON?? Dude tu yeh kya soch raha hai? Dost hai woh teri!!! Just a FRIEND!!! Tu apne feeling ko over-power nahi karne dega'.. Usse dekhna band kar aur gaadi chala'..

Swayam shifted his sight on the road and continued driving yet listening to Sharon'.. Yes Sharon loved beaches'.. In the past many a time Swayam had taken her to the beach just to have some fun with all sorts of eating competitions'.. Making sand castles'.. They having their hilarious conversations etc etc etc'.. They reached Juhu beach on the right time for sunset'.. All thanks to the Mumbai traffic'.. Both got down the car and walked to their first stop'.. Chaat center'..

Swayam: So Pani-puri ya humesha ki tarah pehle bhel?

Sharon: Ummm nahi aaj Pani-puri'.. Bhel baad main!

Swayam placed the order and both started enjoying their pani dripping puri's'.. Swayam was enjoy the sight and his share too'.. He just loved the way Sharon went 'ummm' at each puri'..

Swayam (giggling): Tum aise kyun khaa rahi ho?

Sharon: You know Swayam, pani-puri toh Delhi main bhi milti hai but Mumbai main chaupati pe chaat khaane ka jo maza hai na woh aur kahin nahi'..

Swayam just laughed at her reply and both continued their chaat feast'..

Swayam: Oh hello! Sirf chaat main apna peth mat bhar lena! Aage bhi bahut kuch khaana hai!

Sharon: Tum mujhe yahan maaze karvane laaye ho ya sirf khilana?

Swayam (acting like thinking): Ummm let me think!!!... Dono karane'.. And hello tumhe khaane main hi mazza aa raha hai'.. Kab se Idhar hi khadi ho aur aise khaa rahi ho jaise ke saalo ho gaye chaat dekh ke!!!

Sharon: Haawww! You are so dead Mr.Shekhawat!!!

Swayam runs for his life as Sharon was right behind him'.. He was giggling and teasing her while running'.. in return she was just increasing her pace'.. After they both were out of breath, they stood in front of each other panting'..

Sharon: Tum ab bhi mere pakad main nahi aate na!!!

Swayam: Ab yeh ek hi toh cheez hai jis main, main Swayam Shekhawat, The Sharon Rai Prakash Ko hara sakta hai!

Sharon (making faces): Ha ha very funny!!!

Just as they were breathing normally Sharon's phone rang'..

Sharon: Hey Kriya!

Kriya: Hey Sharon, where are you? Main tumhare ghar tumhe lene aayi thi!

Sharon: Haan wh main Swayam kesaath hu, but kya hua tum mere ghar kyun gayi?

Kriya: Woh hum sab ne aaj Bandra ke XYZ club main clubbing jaaneka ka plan banaya toh main tumhe lene aayi thi and I was just going to call Swayam also'.. But now as you both are together, toh tum dono jaldi aa jaana!

Sharon: Ok sure! Main aur Swayam aa jayenge!

Both hang up the call'.

Swayam (confused): Tum aur main kahan aa jayega?

Sharon: Woh sab ne clubbing karne ka plan banaya hai toh hum Bandra bulaya hai!

Swayam: Ok cool! Let's go then!

Both of them were disappointed that they had to leave but avoided showing it on their faces'.. Swayam and Sharon got in the car and left for Bandra'.. They was funny'.. Both spoke about the latest movies' Bollywood actors and actresses'. Etc etc etc just like friends do'.. Luckily both were dressed up in decent clothes so they didn't have to go back home and get changed'..

At the club'..

Vishakha: Hey Guys whats up!

Swaron: Hey Guys!

Gang: Hey!

Vicky: Kidhar the tum log!

Neha: Neha asking same!

Sharon: Woh bkuch nahi Chaupati pe the!!!

Rini (disgusted expression): Sharon tum aur chaupati??

Sharon: Ya so?! Kyun koi aisa rule hai ke Sharon Rai Prakash whan nahi jaa sakti?

Aashi: Nahi woh Rini keh rahi hai ke aap aisi crowded types jagah pe kaise gaye?!

Swayam: Aare par iss main burai kya hai?

Sharon: Aur waise bhi this was not the first time'. Anyways can we stop discussing about me and enjoy?!

Rey: Ya guys!

The all settle down and to everyone's shock Sharon and Swayam were sitting next to each other'.. Both were busy chatting'.. There was an instance when Swayam said something in Sharon's ear and she broke into a fit of laughter'.. They were busy in their own world and two of their friend were busy observing them'..

Rey: Aaj kitne time baad Swayam ko dil se hass raha hai'..

Kriya: Haan aur Sharon bhi ktina freely baat kar rahe hai!

Rey: You know mujhe toh laga tha ke jab yeh dono milenge toh tum aur main dono ko sambhalne ke chakkar main lag jaate'.. Par inn dono ko dekh ke aisa lagta hai jaise inke beech woh sab hua hi nahi!

Kriya: Haan baat toh sahi hai! But Rey mujhe kahin na kahin darr bhi lag raha hai!

Rey: Matlab?

Kriya: Bhuliye mat Sharon aur Sid ki engagement ho gayi hai aur kuch hafton main shaadi bhi hai'.. Main khush hu Swayam ko itna haste hue dekh ke par yeh khushi kab tak uske chehre pe rahegi?!

Rey: I get what you're saying! Maine Swayam se baat karne ki koshish kit hi par'..

Kriya: I guess hume Sharon se bhi baat karni chahiye'..

Rey and Kriya were busy discussing about Swayam and Sharon and here these Newly found friends were having their fun'..

Swayam: What would you like to drink?

Sharon: ummm a cosmopolitan should do!

Swayam: Ok main abhi leke aaya!

Swayam excused himself and walked to the bar to order their drinks'.. Just as he was about to take the glasses someone patted on his shoulder'.. Swayam turned back to look at the person

Person: Hey buddy! Long time no see!!


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Before you'll pounce on me saying ke kitna chotu update diya I

would like to say ke abhi tak toh you'll must have

understood na ke mujhe suspense rakhne main bahut maza

aata hai 😆

But yeh wala suspense jaldi khol dungi but for that jaldi jaldi comment karo and like karo 😉
Edited by smartypantstanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its awaum
I luved it alooot
But chotu tha
Swaron are really cuming close slowly but jab dur hongey toh kitna sad feel kereinge am feeling bad for them
I wish kriyaansh unko phirse swaron banadein
Plzzz update next part sooon and do pm
Waise apne abhi tak pm toh but phir bhi
Thanx in advance for pm
Next tym plzzz update lamba wala plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was nice and cool going...
waiting for the update...
to read the next part...

Rohan :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arrey yaaa a chotu sa update and a cliffhanger then not unfair girl nainsaafi hai bilkul.. .
Love the growing friendship between swayam and sharon it is refreshing to read them enjoying themselves and unwinding making new memories together..😃.
Kriya's worries about swayam are very right swayam will breakdown seeing sharon married with someone else mat hone dena sid and sharon ki marriage..
Now who is this new guy?? Update fast eager to know it may either be sid or shivam just a random guess..
Update soon girl..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
😕 A cliffhanger... First of all, long time no see n then you update a small one...😕 But coming to the chappy, the way SwaRon are bonding is awesome... KriYaansh convo was meaningful... But hope this doesn't affect their long lost n newly found friendship...
Wondering who that person is...😲 I think that might be Sid.. But, we'll see...😊 Update soon n do pm me... (This time reached before the pm..🥱)
Edited by damonTVDrocks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
waoo veryyy nic update...

rey aur kriya shai soch rha ha...

swaron close a gay as a frnd

nd dis new person i guess sid hoga ...


plzzz update fast...
Edited by swaronlove001 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb yaar
amazing
wow
what an update
it was amazing
im so happy that ur back
and swaron chose a gay as a friend 😆
this mught be sid 😕😕

want the next update soon
phata-phat PM karna mujhe 😉

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