MG,SS HEAVEN IN HELL, THD-2. PT- 43,PG 132, JAN 8

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Mitu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

Heyyy update will read and comment ... in some time

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Geethanda87

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

wow yaar... superb update
maaneet momment its too gud n romantic
precap new entry i hope positive entry😊😊😊😊😊

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Geet88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Romantic update
They r craving fr each other badly
Maan teasing Geet

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Pihu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#264

di very romantic update...
Maaneet moments were awesome...😊
Their first kiss in their senses...wow...👏
U hv done justice with the update di...😊
Bs ab koi prb na ho...n koi regret na kare..
N new entry koi prb ya differences na laye dono k beech...
Agr new entry cupid ka role play kare to it will b awesome...
Continue soon..di..😊

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ns.1

@ns.1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#265

awesome,superb,mind blowing update dear👏😛 i just loved it so much😊 it was so romantic and sensual...maaneet's kiss and romantic moments gave me goosebumps😉😛 i just loved the whole part a lot😊 maaneet are missing each other and craving to be with each other 😆 hope they soon confess their feelings for each other 😛maan is fuming because he can't spend time with geet and daadi is taking her and anniee out😆 bechara😉😆 pata nahi ab geet bechari ko kya punishment dega maan for making him crave for her😉😆 very well written dear and it doesn't look your first attempt to write a romantic scene😊keep it up as we want many more such scenes from you 😛...hope the new entry is a positive one and will not effect maaneet's life...eagerly waiting for more...continue soon😊

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priya

@priya111111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#266

how romantic the way he kissed her and all the way her blushing and craving for more dreamy.

both missing each other and maan teasing geet and dadi taking the chance to irritate maan lovely

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#267

Fantastic update. So glad they at least crossed the first barrier. Glad geet started to realize that maan cares for her so much. The beach scene. Awww. Absolutely loved the bf room scene. Poor maan tortured by his wife. Especially having her room locked. Wow. How will he manage whole day without her. And dadi. Indeed she is naughty

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usha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#268

awesum...loved it...loved their first kiss and also their moments...continue sooon

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#269

That was a beeeaauuutifully romantic part buddy.

Each and every moment of Maaneet closeness was serenely described.Every step was slow and sensuous.Most importantly Geet loved d feel as much as Maan did.

And after returning fm Goa,we can see a naughty-naughty Maan.Already in mood of mischiefs.

Loved d part buddy.