Jane kiss aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai;epi-pg 27 - Page 14

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Fantastic update Lara!! Cute and funny.. Manvi is totally lost in Virat! She forgot everything after seeing him .. She was staring at him dreamily, admiring his features, smiling at him.. And here Virat thought that she had lost her mind because she was scared .. Loved it .. OMG Manvi is about to kiss him & Virat is also admiring her.. Can't wait to read the next part.. Thanks a lot for the pm.. Take care

Thanks a ton meera... 😃 😃...Wait a bit more for the next part dear...😊...I really do appreciate your regular comments yaar... thanks again...

Originally posted by: .Yamin.

Awesome update !!! waah kya style main hero ne herione ko bachaayaa manvi toh total fidaa hogayii aakir who can resist this much charm loved the way manvi trust virat :D omg where did u end !! mujhe aur parnaa tha~~~ virat was loosing himself in manvi eye !! that's great ;D haww manvi leaning towards virat !!! ab kya hogaa !!! excited ;) looking forward for next !!~~ waiting waiting !!~~thanx for the pm :D

Ohhh ... thanks yamin... 😊 ...You are right , no one can resist our viru boy...😳 ...Will try to updt soon... 😕...

Originally posted by: anu0555

lovely update <3

plxxzzz update soon..!!

waiting eagrly 4 ur nxt update..!!

dnt make us wait too long cox

ur updte is jst gr8 !! so,

i toh cant wait too long

update plzz...

Thanks anu... 😊 😊...You are a new reader I guess... welcome dear... 😃...Myself devil...hope we will also be good buddies...And I am preety busy these days, thats why giving late updts... hope you understand but will try to updt asap...😊

Originally posted by: jannat89

loved the whole update
poor manvi she only watched him certainly oblivious to her environment
and virat... awww its not his fault and her also
atleast he saves her
thanx 4 the pm
waiting for next part
update soon

Thanks a lot jannat... 😃 😃...No ones fault... its the law of attraction... 😆 😉...

HAWW U AGAIN STOPPED AT WRIONG POINT DEVIL N U ASK ME NOT TO B ANGRY😡😡

Originally posted by: Huma0301

wow wow wowso cool the way he saved herlove at first sight for manvi - oh god virats been betrayed here alsois she really gonna kiss him- hope this dnt cause problems for herso damn excited for next part- continue soon plz

Thanks a lot dear 😊...But I owe you a sorry... 😭 sorry am so late but will try to updt asap I get time ...

Originally posted by: nrithyao

loved it
the way manvi was admiring virat with her mouth open even after being in fire was so lovely
cant wait for next part
please continue soon

Thanks dear ... thanks a lot... 😃...Sorry for making you wait fr so long...😭

Originally posted by: richa002

Awsome update...
Manvi was enjoying view of virat besharmili...
Nd virat's thoughts abt manvi being crazy nd he is going to be tandoori in fire... Hillarious...
It was really interesting... Nd u stopped at wrong tym...
Plzzz update soon...
Nd thanxxx for pm

Ohhh dear... thanks a lot se bhi jyada... 😃...Will try to updt soon yaar...haa haa haa...

Originally posted by: kashmirbeauty

it's awsome :)

continue soon...as u've stopped at right moment!

Thanks buddy...😃...sorry fr being so late but will try to updt soon... 😊

Originally posted by: prathe

oh god you always stop at the correct time must say perfect timing
pls do continue soon...wating to read how the story progresses...
and yes your update was short but effective one...hats off

Because I am devil, you already know tht naa... 😉...Thanks for th comment dear... 😊 😊