ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread One* Completed - Page 70

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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update...I can see that you have done a lot of research on this...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Frankly speaking, I CANNOT wait to read the whole..whats this history mystery and is our hero (well as usual) negative towards our heroine.. :(

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Posted: 12 years ago
Urrreh baap re!! Juhi ji...phod daala, tod daala re!!! Frikkin hell you write amahzing or what! Enddd tak hili Nahi main, ek position mein lock! Brilliant Hun! I loved the way you are weaving this..by the time I'm dealing with their chemistry, their past comes derailing the train of emotions, plus this sexy word war is pumping things up! Whatta ishtory baby... Loving it! Do u HAVE to make us wait for so many days?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Too awesome...two completely different person...I'm literally dying to know the past...and now his condition...cant wait enough...loved the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
The plot is one thing, the suspense is another but what is more blatant is that despite the two not standing each other they are similar in so many ways.

To start with, he is honest...truly honest and this is being evident in so many scenarios; they recent and the most prominent being his reluctance to spend department funsd on foreigh trips. She on the other hand is one fish who wishes to swim against the flow and that is really commendable for she's trying her best to put her thoughts into action.

Secondly, its their attraction. From the three chapters what I have concluded is that she was at fault and accepts his hatred but is not entirely comfortable about him either. The occasional flashes of attraction happen together and seem in sync...which is what makes me wonder about the past (again, I may add)

Ah Mr. Jha makes an entry. Vibes or no vibes, it is hard to consider him as a good person.

I know what his suggestion is going to be and I'm eager to know Khushi's response.

Another thing I want to add is about the duration. You know I'm excited about the prologue so all I can say is one week down, three to go!
Edited by Eccentrica - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
So Mr. Jha has made his entry ;)
Omg!!! Arnav n khushi!!! 1 week trip!!!! Wah...Wah!! Kya baat hae!! ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb Upd..
Reveal the past soon...I hope its a misunderstanding whatver it is...
"i will go on one condition...you will have to come with me..."
:P :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just never seem to be satisfied with the updates Juhi! *sigh*

The story line is fantastic! leaves you with no choice but to stay rooted to the chapter not even allowing your eyes to wander here and there for a second!

Like i said before this is the best phase in the story! the pull ... the tension ... the underlying current... put it the way you want .. at the end of it .. its f&@#ing bloody awesome!

oh why did the middle class locality draw his eyebrows close?
were they to be married in the past? and then she left .. but thats absurd... they must have been so young!!!
this is too alluring!
Now now! whats the condition? that she will have to join him on this trip?
whoa! cant wait to know! :)

waiting for Tuesday already!
Edited by LeenaRocks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This story is very interesting..

Love the suspense, mystery, and of course their obvious attraction to each other. Guess he has going to require her to come along as well. Looking forward to seeing the story unravel ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is so interesting. I'm so curious about their past.

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