ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread One* Completed

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I_Dont_Know

@I_Dont_Know

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Posted: 12 years ago

#601

Finally got time to read both chapters..something happened too bad, and I can feel that somehow Khushi has moved on but not Arnav..Now we have to see if Khushi was the reason..And everyone is aware what happened in that past..interesting. Thanks for the pm Juhi.

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marleylerner

@marleylerner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#602

Dono hai alag disha indeed!! Nice titles you've used. And you brought out all the contrasts between them so well. Yet when it comes to working together they make a great team. And Khushi gives him a rush like his adventure sports. Minister ji is in for the ride of his life.

"With all due respect, Sir, by that criteria, the ministry of health and family welfare should be headed by a Doctor, and not by someone who jumps off cliffs for a living"...I just loved it!!!

Sheetal has made her entry. And she is a good responsible COO who has been pining for Arnav for all this while. Kinda feel bad for her. And I really DON'T like the feeling.

So this past thing is something huge since Lavanya said NK would make Khushi quit. And its linked to Arnav's nightmare, then toh pakka big deal. The mystery is making me all tingly with anticipation as is the tension between these two.

Oh you do it so well. Loving it. Just can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks so much :)

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manusmithcl

@manusmithcl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#603

gripping story line and excellent depiction of emotions...love it

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Aishwarya

@EmpressSarayu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#604

Oh the drama. And I love it!

How many chapters in the story again? I feel restless already!

Politics. Hmm.

Can't wait to read more.

Oh oh! Do I sense a full shocking Rabba Ve in White Kurta sequence? Huh? huh?

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-SI-

@-SI-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#605

wow, amazing!! Can't wait to know the past now... good job Juhi...Loved it!!

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Srishti

@dereksmith

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Posted: 12 years ago

#606

you are amazing Expell , like seriously ..
How does your brain work ?
This story is so intriguing , what the hell happened 10 years back ?
please write soon & thank you sooo so much for messaging ,
Waiting :)

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Sweety

@Swty_arshionly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#607

very intriguing... Loved the updates...

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Pari

@ammavedu80

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#608

Amazin story with the politics background
Liked la and kushi conversation
The suspense is killing I can't wait for the flash back story
Beautifully written

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serendipitylove

@serendipitylove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#609

U R a truly amazing writer!!
I can't help but comment on ur story!!
I'm so intrigued by this plot...
Seems as though 10 years ago they loved each other...and some kind of big misunderstanding has come in the way... The kind of jibes your arnav is throwing at khushi so reminds me of the epic ASR barun created in the show! Its a perfect match!
Such a realistic story...I've never taken well to love at first sight but I love the hate-love concept!

My only request is that I hope this story carries a redemption sequence too for arnav... Seems as though he has misunderstood her bigtime and is now giving her hell...And going by ur prologue seems as though another misunderstanding is on its way...I only hope Khushi doesn't give in untiil he has earned and proved his love aaannnd also properly wooed her!

Also pleeeaaase consider making this an FF...please pleease try to go longer than 10 chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Can't wait for ur update on saturday! Thanks for the PM :)

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Srishti

@dereksmith

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Posted: 12 years ago

#610

you are amazing Expell , like seriously ..
How does your brain work ?
This story is so intriguing , what the hell happened 10 years back ?
Don't make khushi weak , hate to see her being the one goin down ,
please write soon & thank you sooo so much for messaging ,
Waiting :)