ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread One* Completed - Page 62

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Posted: 12 years ago
you are amazing Expell , like seriously ..
How does your brain work ?
This story is so intriguing , what the hell happened 10 years back ?
Please Don't make khushi weak , hate to see her being the one goin down ,
pls pls pls write soon , can't wait & thank you sooo so much for messaging ,
Waiting :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Juhi ji, now that's what I call a story...intriguing characters, beautiful layering of the plot, hitting home dialogs n situations...after a long time reading something that's making me wait for the next update like never before! Fantastic writing hun...waiting for the next one 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
zabardast update...

Waao what a backfiring ..there is going on between them/..

Were they supposed to get married 10 years back??

did she leave him under unavoidable circumstances??

eager to know...

this is another version of Love Hate relationship...

Loved it :)



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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome story...

i love the character of this khushi.. i dunno wat was in their past.. but she presents herself as a very confident, independent, strong and sophisticated lady.. applauds for her..👏

i wonder when would be the rite time for u to reveal their shattered pasts...

thanks for the pm..

waiting for saturday nite already..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice dear😊

both parts r nice😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb part...loved each bit.. marvellous ...such an amzing concept...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsm update

i hope arshi get back soon watevr happnd in d past

nk is khushi's bro?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh Juhi this is just too good! I read the 2 chapters together. The political setting and its details are just fabulous! Now I am dying to read on and find out about their past and what happens there on.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi thnx for d pm. This is story is intriguing n seems abt betrayal. also there is a lot to arnav n khushi relationship in the past.

Ch 1

It had uncurrent of hatred n passion too. the moment he said unless i dismiss you do not walk away frm me(it hd another connotation) apart frm the other thngs he sd like theory practice all areas of my life.

Khushi too lost her cool when they came bck frm the inaufuration n told him clearly tht he's behaving her with her coz of the past. she specifically told him dnt u touch me ever again. arnav also asked her d same why was she so careful tht they dnt touch each other.

After their 1st dy they both were thinking abt past n each other. arnav almost thot abt sheetal nt bein like khushi which surprised him tht he occupied his mind n affected him so much.

Ch 2
Arnav n khushi as decided tried to have a fresh start nt before arnav reprimanded her abt performing rituals during office time n her dress tho khushi replied befittingly.

After the meeting arnav got a reality check abt the political scenario n the state of affairs. he ws flabbergasted with wht he saw n heard frm khushi. He being a business man n adventure sportsperson believed in work ethic knowledge in the field of expertise performance n efficiency bt here there were no such rules people selected who hd 0 knwledge n non performing n wasting funds.

khushi however after his permission advised him against makin any drastic changes n told him the right way abt doin things in this place.

arnav who so far held grudge is impressed by khushi who is gr8 at her job n knw how to tackle bottlenecks in the work. arnav ended up assurin her abt her job despite everythng. khushi also is taken in by him as in his looks n then when he smiled.

Arnav hd his nightmare which gave some insight on their past. Its clear there ws a wedding tho arnav hd picked up a gift before he cud give it there ws a scream tht she's missing. then someone came n he looked at wht he ws holdin n fainted. ao who did tht HE u refer to the person's hand or arnav hand as in whose hand did arnav look at. also earlier he sd khushi hs taken a new name of her adoptive parents tht means even khushi's parents are nt alive.

End of ch 2 however signals towards new beginnings!!??

i hve a question wht are arnav n khushi"s ages khushi has passed civil services in 2009 bt tht does nt indicate her age..also she's young in her field.

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Posted: 12 years ago
And the suspense keeps building up! I read the chapter in a hurry yesterday, but wanted to reread it again before commenting. It is so well written...A perfect potrayal of Indian politics and bureaucracy...I wonder how Arnav is going to survive Indian politics with his US minded business approach! He needs to learn a lot from Khushi! Can't wait to read more...

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