ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread One* Completed

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Natalia

@Natalia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#621

I see that you are building up a mystery which I can't get head or tails of (usually I have things to guess)... Hope it unfolds soon...

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Frida

@Frida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#622

Superb update!!

So this time they have a bitter history between them!! This makes it all the more fun & appealing..

I think it's the very 1st time your Khushi has stopped ASR from man handling her.. This is going to be extra hot I suppose where she is not going to give in easily..

She also seems to be very good at her work & ASR is new to the field.. He will need her to be on his side to succeed..

Eagerly waiting to for their past to unfold!

Thanks for the pm.

Once again a very happy b'day to you!!

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#623

Read both chapters 1 and 2. We can feel Arnav's and Khushis' emotions just by reading. Arnav, a Health minister and Khushi an IAS officer?, there is no boundary to your imagination isn't it..! What I liked the most is you are trying to include elements from the promo that they said was the essence of IPK but it never was..

I tried to rake up my brain as to what could have happened 10 years back, but couldn't. His parents were already dead, its not them. Is it Anjali? did Anjali elope during her wedding and did Khushi help her do that? It seems like Arnav hates her more than she hates him. I think she is willing to give him a chance and based on the prologue, is slowly falling in love with him in the next month?

I will just stop myself now looking for reasons for thier animosity towards each other since I know they are in good hands 🥱

Can't wait for saturday, thanks for the pm. If its too much work for you, you can take me off the list, I'm stalking your thread anyways 😛

Love & hugs

Edited by kclovearshi - 12 years ago

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ruby-red

@ruby-red

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#624

i cant tell you how much im enjoying this ff, its brilliant.
i really cant wait to find out what happened in ythe past.
please continue soon and thanx for the pm

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Sisbamboo1

@Sisbamboo1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#625

Power packed. This has everything. Mystery, suspense, anger, attraction, grief, agony...wow. And we're only into the second chapter! What happened 10 years ago that it is still an open wound?

I can't make heads nor tails of the hints you've put in with the flashback and their own responses. 😕

If you hadn't said that you will be otherwise very occupied in the near future, then I would have requested you to make this an FF. Saturday can't come soon enough!

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quicksand

@quicksand

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#626

Wondering what happened in past...
Loved the way story is progressing...will wait for next part😊

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Akira Singh

@tinsel_akira

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#627

Omg It was like a bomb blast
The way it has started.. Its as if theres just one emotion and it is hate!!

Whatever happened between them is maha huge
I just have s guess that maybe Khushi was responsible for some one's death really close to Arnav and that someone might be Anjali or Arnav's mom ( if these teo characters really exist in the story)

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#628

Chapter 1

Seems like they both have spent the 10 years running away from their past and trying to find a closure for it but fate has other plans for them.

They're treading on a fine line between love and hate.

I refuse to believe that they hate eachother because you can't hate someone you once loved. I maybe assuming this part but it seems that at one point they did love eachother, only that can explain how affected they are by eachother.

There is a spark between the two which is hard to ignore.

They way they acknowledge eachother is on another level all together.

They both are wearing masks.

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AASHI

@aashi_taichi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#629

A brilliant chapter
i really liked d name of d chapter
Both are connected to each other through a rough past i guess and surely hate d sight of former
so Asr comes from a political background n succeeded as a education n health minister but in place of akash and Khushi as an IAS officer working as principal secretary now dts a interesting proforma for dis character
Arnav z acting very aggressive towards khushi.She didn't do it intentional to harass him anyways been in politics u should be aware of current state of issue
so arnav own AR n sheetal z working with him n interested in him no dts shows how d prologue connection
i like d way khushi retort back to arnav 's comment her comment as cliff hanger was like😆
i like d way u hv nurtured khushi's character
d way she laid out d plan for him to carry out his 'fire them' mission n reasoned out its after effect really shows her capability n her shrewdness in this field 3 claps for her👏
luking forward

Edited by princess_aashi - 12 years ago