ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread One* Completed - Page 35

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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh my god... This has a political backdrop... You have got me all the more excited now... Lady I just can't stop phangirling you... If you are doing this professionally, I am sure you can give a run to all the creatives, script writers n screen play authors in our Bollywood... You are one amazing writer...

What an amazing start... They had an interlinked past and he just can't stand her presence... She had her core shattered 10 years ago and she has built herself up in a totally different city and gave her career n aspirations life...

And now after 10 years they meet up to work together... Their face off was so good... He gave her n she gave it back to him... Tit for tat n you have shown them as no less or no more to each other... They are equally strong headed n that's where the fun lies... I so can't wait to read further...

Ps: Juhi you have grown as a writer... With every new story, you just make me go more awe for you... I am proud that I get to read your works...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow..felt like Rajneeti...really awesome...


This tale seems so intense...I'm already getting chills...very well written...loving it!

You already have made it feel so real...what to say...amazing!
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
that was really a great update...though the 1st chapter's suspense still remains with more suspense followed in chapter 2...really a very interesting ss :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
politics! ah! this is damn interesting!!
and the fact that they had a past 10 years ago is even more intriguing!

i will be waiting for the next update!
thanx for the happy reading moment!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome chapter. Arnav as Minister and Khushi as IAS officer, well, a totally new concept. I really liked the name you have given for his sports business' Active Risks'. So the story has taken a leap of 10 yrs. Well, looking forward to know what exactly happened on that fateful day 10 years back that made him to hate her so much and move to US while she moved to Bangalore with her family.You always write so amazingly that its always a pleasure to read your stories.
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Posted: 12 years ago
freaking awesome chapter
👏

He's the minister and she's the private secretary!!!! 👏👏

can't wait for wednesday

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Posted: 12 years ago
oh teri so they had some history it seems
so much so that they now hate to be with each other
well he sure does right
but this is all leading to the prologue
this hatred this coldness
this hostility and what ever else was there
it seems that this shall be hard for them both
wonder what had happened that he is behaving this way
so much so he wants to get rid of her
and it seems it might just have worked
sach mein this is even more intriguing than the rest of the stories
and more scary than that too
but like you said it aint dark and no sad ending so i hope for something better to come out of it in the end
and am sure it will
so this time he aint a business tycoon but minister
hmmm politics can be real tricky you know
and this just goes to show it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Spellbound...I am after reading this Update...

My goodness...You actually play with words and the emotions hidden in that..and The way they are conveyed,,I felt as if it Was Happening in front of me..
Really Really Commendable Job...

The way they were throwing daggers at eachother in the form of words...
Waaaooo...

MashaAllah ..such a beautiful writer you are!!

I dont think i can explain what i actually felt after reading this story..
i am not good at words lol..

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