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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh boy...you just jumped straight into it. So much bitterness,anger,resentment..you name it

Akash obviously has a secret..and I shall wait for that to unfold. I can't even guess what happened between these two. I love the Arnav theory...sad..move to another country LOL. Trust me I've seen that in a lot of FF's I've read
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting .can't wait for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very intriguing start...
The political backdrop sounds very interesting...can't wait for the story to unfold 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Arnav and Khushi in politics - loving it! Wonder what happened in the past that they have so much hatred between them! Eager to read more...
Active Risks...nice play on AR!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow, a brilliant start, I'm so excited to read this political Nafrat story.

The update was awesome and brilliant, simply fabulous.

Written exceptionally well and a fantastic read from start to finish,

So Arnav is a minister and Khushi is his principal secretary, very different but very interesting.

Wonder what occurred ten years ago that has led too so much hatred from Arnav, the only clue is the poolside.

Love the fact you included that wonderful scene from the advert they use to show for the serial, which i am going to admit I have watched a millions times.

Wow, the hatred in Arnav in quite strong and he is not leaving any opportunity to insult Khushi,

So Khushi has had enough of Arnav's anger and decided to talk about the main reason for his anger, eager to find out what it is.

Loved the update, eager to read more.

Please continue soon xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awosome update , as usual , sounds very different , unique and intresting , excellent narration , impatiently waiting for we'd
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Posted: 12 years ago

Juhi,

What an AWESOME start!! It's a pleasure reading your stories.👏👏

I have to say this in Hindi…

"Aap Arnav aur Khushi ki nas nas se vaakif ho" BAS!! 😳

You are one of the bery few writers who really got into skin of the characters that were introduced to us 2 years back and you are giving us the same Arnav and Khushi consistently.

You create a completely different world for them, weave a different story yet stay true to them and I like how you always tie it to an element of IPK (E.g. the promo in this case).

Arnav as a politician, say it's one of my fantasies, he in white cotton crisp kurta, traditional sholapuris, short hair and his aviators. Uffh….

Khushi in a sari and hair in knot; if I have to pick one regret from the show then it was Khushi as woman, who is mature, strong and somebody who stands up for herself. I see that Khushi in your story and I am thrilled about it. 👍🏼

Even before Khushi's entry, right from "Fire her" I could feel the gleaming tension, anger, and their usual currents. You brilliantly bring out the core of these two characters together.

Arnav is being Arnav, rude, arrogant, headstrong and always ready to provoke Khushi but what really delighted me was the way Khushi gave it back to him. She is never the one to incite him but never takes it lightly when backed into a corner, the tigress rises and never refrains from clawing.

Khushi seems levelheaded and poised whereas Arnav comes across who reacts by instincts and jumps to conclusions – whatever happened 10 years ago might be result of their conflicting personalities.

I am really excited about this story!!🤗

PS: AR = Active Risks, that's exemplifies "OUT OF THE BOX THINKING"😉

Cheers

Geeta

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Posted: 12 years ago
that is really a scary prologue.
Except Sheetal, you didn't mention the other names.
Don't want to predict the character yet.Cause you sometimes mislead us in your tale.
So far I understand the man is Arnav and The woman is Khushi. If the man is Arnav and the woman who was narrating the story was Khushi, then I'm shattered as much as Khushi is.
Can't wait to read the story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wohooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! beautiful...i love this khushi...thank u so much for the update...loved it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
bookmarking .. comment later .. 😊

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