ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread One* Completed

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VYGA

@VYGA89

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#331

Awesome !!!! Simply loved it.
Wow!!!Khushi is an IAS topper?
Loved the way u described their inner feelings.
I could actually sense the rage
and tension brewing between
them...
Really want to know what happened 10 years ago.

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Itu

@simi58

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#332

first of all extremely sry for being this late.. 😳

the promo u used for the inspiration is by far the best promo of ny show i hv ever seen and of crsz my fav promo of ipk.. it had given me goosebumps and still does whenever i watch the promo.. So thnk u for choosing it and i am sure it will b a fab ss..
the prologue was way tooo awesome. I was holding my breath throughout.. The details of ur update was fabbulous.. sheeshmahal as the background , the posh society parties.. u described it awesomely and i am hooked to it alrdy..
his eyes tells her he loves her but his actions doesn't. Well its ASR..and qouting barun, "even when the guy made eye-contact, he spoke volumes.." tht's wht made us all fall in love with him from the promo..the looks he gave throughout the promo.. *dhak dhak*

So arnav and khushi shared a past resulting in kash mai tumse nafrat kar pati.. kash mai tumse muhabbat kar pata..It can't b either arnav''s or khushi's fault whatever happened in the past.. Coz khushi fled but still is confident enough to stand before the Arnav Singh Raizada...And neither can it b Arnav as he seems to b insulting khushi and trying very hard not to remember the past. And his guilt came coz he were not with his family nd not because of the past.. But still what did happen in the past *Biting nails*
arnav belonging to a political family and khushi as an IAS officer is certainly intriguing.. 😃 and the underlying current tht was present throuout the update was just wow.. And the strong khushi at the end surely earned some 👏 from my side..😃
AR= active risks 😆😆
PS last ss for a while? 😭😭
hehe wake up wake up.. My super long blabbering has finally come to an end..😳

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#333

I love this already...

First chapter was very tense and I could literally feel the tension going on between A and K...

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#334

Loved your prologue and first chapter!

Very intriguing indeed and the political backdrop sounds very interesting. Can't wait to read another one of your short stories...

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-MIMOSA-

@-MIMOSA-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#335

Hey Expel,

I can see another masterpiece in making...

It was poignant all through...

Khushi is fireball here...loved her...

Have to know about Arnav yet...

very much eager to read next parts...

Edited by mimosa658 - 12 years ago

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#336

really intense... and beautifully written...

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Mahnoor

@Lalaland222

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#337

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! NEW STORY!

Can't believe I didn't read this earlier.

Shoot! But the Prologue was so amazing. :O I mean seriously. I loved how you explained everything. And Arnav and Sheetal.. :O And Khushi saw them. I wonder what happened one month before. ^_^

Can't wait to read any further. ^_^

I really loved how to described the whole room thingy. I imagined everything perfectly. :') I don't why but I got a vampire-ish kind of house in my mind. Lolz. :P But yeah, I loved it. ^_^

And the mention of Sheesh Mahal! Oh! makes me think of all the good old episodes. Made me remembere everything. :') I miss it.

Looking forward to Chapter One, doll! ^_^ Just simple can't wait. Update sooon. :D

Waitinggg ..

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sarthshru

@sarthshru

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#338

loved the update to bits !

never seen a politician arnav...

wanna know wht happened 10yrs bck

n why after 1 mnth of hatred they are tgether !>?

update soon

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Monasha

@monasha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#339

Amazing Update... what had happened in past??
why both Arnav and Khushi left the place ten years ago??
update soon

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#340

Res-wa!

**Edited**

Oh My God!!! This is so awesome Juhi!

Politics and ArHi! Just like Raajneeti!

Very very unique! You are awesome!! Bas! 👍🏼

They parted ways 10 years ago, and now they're facing each other.

The past has left me wondering. What could have simply happened!? So curious to know!

I read Semanti's comment. And I do agree with her about Khushi not deliberately hurting Arnav. And as always, it must have been a big MU, one which makes Arnav feel that his rage is justified.

I'm just so so intrigued!

Loved the way you brought in the promo no. 4. It was my most fave. The one which attracted me to the show

Loved it!! Eagerly awaiting the next update! :)

Edited by SaRunLicious - 12 years ago