Three's a Crowd *Last Part P15* - Page 12

I really wish I could Murder Arnav for what he said to Khushi but-

Point no. 1- Ab Miyan-Biwi raazi to kya karega kaazi...😆

Point no. 2- He's too handsome for me to do that. Aajkal itne hansome log kahan dekhne ko milte hain...😆 I would do *ahem* instead of that..😉

Jokes apart 😆, read part 3a and 3b in one go and it's simply awesome.

I really feel bad for Nk though. Arnav toh say all the bad thing at first and then regret it later. But I solute Nk for what he did for Khushi. Thanks to Nk for knocking some sense into Arnav's unusually empty skull.😊

I fell in love with this TS all over again after this update. I loved how Arnav stood for her this time. As long as Arnav's with Khushi I care a damn about his family. And as usual Payal was a silent spectator to all this so it wasn't a surprise either. So you didn't disappoint me a bit.

But you know what came as a surprise for me?? That after reading 2nd part yesterday I couldn't help but think what would be Khushi's words, all the time. And what you have written is exactly the same thing what I had thought. 🤣 It was Brilliant.

And I'm really tired of saying the same thing all the time but I would say this nevertheless that you are an awesome writer and I love you...😃

XOXO...🤗

P.S- Comment for chapter 1 updated on page 2. It doesn't have much though..😆 as I had already said everything I had to in the comment for chap 2.

*UnRes for part a*
hey...!
I never knew that our NK can become this much serious...thanks to you to show us this side of him...
I think arnav need some anger management thearapy...will be better for him...
How could he punch his own brother!
Well...NK..was the soul of this part..i loved each and every dialogue of him...
Finally..ASR..turn up into arnav...
NK..love u dude!...
How could someone get so lovellable man!!
Thanxx for this helee...

*UnRes for part b*
how dare that sheetal..say bad thing about our khushi!!
Man toh kar raha tha jaban khich lu uski!!
Anyways our ASR came on time and he did my part of work...shutting up that sheetal!!
It was gud to see that arnav is not taking her for granted anymore and giving her all the attention she need...
Again..this was a heart touching three-/ -four shot..:p
thanxx helee..to introduce us from some unseen feelings..of NK,Arnav and khushi...
Love u...

Finally!!! Arnav learnt a lesson...Dont take your woman for granted...

Loved thm both..at first i was so angry at Arnav..how could he hurt Khushi??what a dumbo...then nandkisor himself helped him..NK..a true friend of khushi...i loved the way he xprssd his love for khushi infront of arnav...nd finally..I M IN LOVE WITH ARSHI AGAIN...<3
THNX DI 4 MAKING ME FALLING IN LOVE!!!

Thank you for the PMs, Helee… nice to know your chuckles didn't spoil your sister's beauty sleep 😆!

Well Khushi's utter confusion at Arnav's blow hot blow cold attitude is understandable! Khushi looking around for his laptop when she was made to sit on the recliner was a nice touch, as was her wish he would smile more often in her presence. Khushi always keeping her pain and turmoil hidden from her family is heart-breaking, and they are one clueless bunch not to see what's happening under their very noses! Lovely wordplay: Ever since THAT woman had entered our home, I had been on a backburner- not raw, but not yet cooked… Payal's 'betrayal' hurts the most… is she so oblivious to Khushi's pain or is trying to keep her in-laws happy her ultimate goal in life? Well, what a family! They don't notice or couldn't care less about Khushi's pain but start whining and throwing accusations the moment Sheetal and Aarav so much as flinch! "Mom, please tell aunty that I am sorry… I don't want to go away…" quite a pushy kid! See, because of your careless words Aarav felt bad and we all misunderstood the situation… that simply took the cake; rather than apologising to Khushi for throwing baseless accusations her way [and she has every right to feel aggrieved at these parasites!], again they focus on Aarav and Sheetal! What was I supposed to do now? Right… make tea… Khushi has been turned into a glorified servant! The whole tea making disaster clearly indicates her soul-destroying anguish and hopelessness. Even if Arnavji would have been here, I doubt he would have stood up for me, considering his wrath from before… what a shattering conclusion to come to about one's husband! "One more word, Sheetal, and I will personally throw you out of the house." Finally, the lion roars! ASR walked into his home with as much swagger as a lion has as he stalks up to the dead deer his lioness has killed… somehow I found this image of arrogance quite hilarious! Before I forget, love your notion of Khushi never addressing or thinking of Sheetal by her name… the latter doesn't deserve the respect of being known by her name! "ENOUGH! Everyone! I will not have you say one word against my wife, that too in favor of that woman!" Though a tad late, Arnav grew a spine and found the voice to stand up for his wife against all the pesky twittering by the women in his family! Helee, nice of you not to put the complete blame on the other woman [something quite common in our serials and films], and to make Arnav admit he was equally to blame for the whole fiasco. Khushi zoning out in the midst of all this clearly shows how overwrought and confused she is. She knows instinctively that NK has helped her and is worried because his attempt to return her lost happiness for her hasn't brought her complete joy as she is still filled with doubts: Above all that, what if he saw the doubt in my eyes and felt bad that his efforts didn't work much? What if he felt bad? Truly poignant! Khushi always thinks of others: the moment she recollects herself and sees Arnav kneeling before her, his wellbeing is uppermost in her mind. Damn pleased to see the floodgates opening and Khushi giving vent to her hurt and anger: You stole my heart and broke it. I had picked up the pieces and was trying to tape it together, but you simply HAD to break it again, didn't you? Expresses a world of pain! Thank god Arnav had the sense to admit his need for her, rather than just stating that he loves her with all his heart and soul. Khushi knows Arnav is her weakness and she is nothing without him: Yes, that is what it is. I keep falling in love with him again and again. The same man. The monster. The laad governor. My laad governor… very moving words!

Khushi's shock on learning of NK's love for her is understandable, as is her fear and justification that she hadn't done anything to give rise to that love… after all, she has suffered a lot from another's obsession and the blame that fell on her! Kudos to NK for deciding that his friendship with Khushi is most important and also for having the courage to still believe in love, despite his first love being unrequited! Khushi's thoughts immediately flying to Lavanya as a potential candidate was cute. So, clueless, clingy Di finally saw some sense… my sympathies with Aman, though 😛! Khushi gradually regaining her trust in Arnav and accepting his love has been nicely portrayed… nice to see Khushi still riddled by doubts and Arnav having to work on their relationship. A very heart-warming conclusion!

I really wanted Khushi to know about NK's feeling towards her because after the last part I kinda had this deep respect for NK. And Arnav's outburst was worth it. Sheetal had to be shown her true place. 😊

Read both parts now, thanks for the quick two update in a day i loved it very much. Finally arnav realize his mistake due to NK and ask forgiveness to khushi and sheetal plan get backfire. Its nice that that he give sheetal other apartment to live otherwise she create more problems. Love the ending part. Now he is spending more time to her. Loved it. I can't get enough of your writing wanted to read more and more. Write such nice stories more in future. I would love to read it. Thanks a lot for pm helee.🤗

Great update Helee! But Khushi was too easy on him... 😒