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PRASSI thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unresed my comment on pg 114..!!!
Do read😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res
Sorry di but I'm feeling very sick right now. I'll try and comment later.


Edited by diyadawda13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey debu..
Sorry for soo late comment yr..
But this update was seriouslyy fab.
Seriously i really loved it yr.

Really liked the way rey felt everything around him was dull cuz taani was nt there .nd later the way he was really restles to knw where is taani on the dining table

This shows that he wil surelyy realize his feelings soon and really excited for that moment.

Moving on felt bad the way taani's sis mocked at her . I bet that her sis might be getting cheated and simi too and this might also create some rift in her familyy ...k moving on feel so bad for taani they way all her family memebers talked to her except for her nanii...poor taani .

But really loved it when rey holded swayam hand as he was abt to hit taani.really didnt expected this from swayam but why reallly happy as rey said he has no right to slap her wife...finally abit caring rey ...

But the ending was a bit suspecious. .looks like next chap wil start with taanis out brust as she thinks she is his pupet ...feeling bad for her but maybe this might lead to confession.

So waiting eagerly wts nxtt as hv so much going in my head so plz update soon ..nd thanks for this updatee...luved it
4rm : abii
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update,
loved the way, how rey miss taani and
went to get her back giving false reasons.

He misses her, next part update romance of
taarey.


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Posted: 12 years ago

hello...!!!!!

ok so finally an update...so happy...!!!!! he searched for taani...her saree then dining table par waiting n tv channels ke liye ladai ko tarasna...signs of true love...pata nahi kab samjhega Rey????? :P
then he stops swayam frm slapping Taani saying that she is his WIFE... shoo cute nah???? Awww *blush blush* !!!!! yah so u put a note in this chapter...yah Rey ka behavior may change is maybe cuz f love,possessiveness n all...as I think...yah taarey romance toh chaahiye but don't make it in harsh way...taarey ko bht miss karte hai hum...aur bure haalat mat dalna...plzzz...any ways waiting to know ki what is rey's past and why is he so arrogant frm outside n caring frm heart...shivam tanni ki clash n taarey romance...waaaww..!!!!! so amazing...loved it...!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON...and Hats Off..!!!!!!! :) :) :) 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...Awesome update
pls pls pls pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow di
awesome update
lovely people write lovely updates

coming to the update
loved this part
"Taani!!!" Swayam goes to slap Taani, but Rey comes to hold his hand before it can place that big slap on Taani's soft check.Taani closes her eyes in fear.

"Mr Sikhawat, don't you dare to slap her. You are right, she is now my wife too" Rey's strict and firm voice force him to stop. The main door is open and no one has noticed him when he has entered into the room. "You should have thought twice before selling this house property. My company has brought this and this house is now in Taani's name"

"See, who has come here. Come Reyansh beta, this is for the first time you have come here. Taani make him sit in your room. I am sending Piyu with tea." mami welcomes him with a big smile, she tries to manage the situation. These family members change their attitude with the status of the guest. Swayam leaves the house angrily as Rey has revealed the truth about him just now.

Taani brings Rey with her in her room but remains quiet throughout the way. She shows her emotionless face to him which makes him irritated. He expects to see a burst of anger on him due to that night's incident. But, Taani knows that this relationship does not give her the permission to express her feeling openly.

"Why you came here without informing me? I could drop you" Rey asks her first after couple of moments silence.

"Why do you come here? what relationship depends on a contract and will be ended after the expiry of the contract paper, I don't want to nourish it. My family members are innocent Mr Singhania, they don't know about it. I don't want that they can foster some expectation from their son-in-law, so that when their expectation will be not be meet, when their trusts are to be broken, they will not get hurt."

"But Taani.."

"Yes Mr Singhania, They know me as your wife and some minutes before you have also declared that. Though we don't share any conjugal relationship among us. They don't know it and I also.."

"Are you gone mad or what Taani? have you lost your brain? What are your saying here?" he screams

"Excuse me, my dear Di and Jiju. Can I come in please if your romance is ended? My hand is hurting by holding the cup plates?" Piyu asks their permission from outside of the door by clearing her throat.

"Of course yes" Taani tells and Rey thanks her in mind for coming at the right place and saving him from the embarrassment.



Edited by aparabosecarmel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
The story is moving in slow but steady pace... I liked simmi n rey conversation... But i want taarey scenes.. Pls Pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
haaye i luv ur last prt to core haaye it touch my hrt to core kk i luv
how rey miss taani n her each n everything around him haaye i luv
dis thing in relation it make me feel spl n thn i luv how taani face her
family like her mami bhai sis nani n thn tht b**** her frd she lie to her
tht she is gone to be mother of rey kid wht d hell how dare she anyways
i luv wht taani ans her back n thn wht is dis rey sis n taani sis thing whts
going on hmm vicky i hope he is good guy n thr is something really interesting
coming up n thn i like taayam convo all through it was not good convo but i like tht
thr remove the thing tht thr hav in thr hrt n swayam was slapping taani Shocked but thanks
to rey tht he came n stop him n i luv whn he told tht taani is his wife n dis house belong
to her haaye tht was so romantic i luv it n thn i like taarey convo awsm n rey took her with
him haaye he miss her so much tht he com n took her wah wah reyaash is in luv with taani
i luv it...luvly prt thanks for PM n do it again
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
waiting for next part

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