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Originally posted by: Alexandrite91

Rey's withdrawal from Taani's love is completely understandable. He is scared. After suffering so tragically in life because he loved someone who disregarded him and his emotions. Rey going back to his minibar was a huge revelation of his inner distress. He feels helpless because his treacherous heart is alloeing what he perceives to be crack, in the wall that he built around it. He is rivk and powerful but loving someone will make him vulnerable and susceptible to pain. His fight against his yielding heart is completely justified. You've done a marvelous job with his struggle.
And this really awesome comment to read, trust me. You know beautifully to play with words. Thanks so much for this. Initially I was confused if you are talking about the current update of last update. Now I have understood it😳
As far as Taani's feeling are concerned, she is for a dangerous and frightful ride on a precariously narrow path by a precipice. Thats what it seems like to me. She let down her reserve by accident and she is hopelessly in love with him and her heart is beyond recovery. She's going to have to suffer tremendous rebuttals as she attempts to reach out to him. There aare times ahead when she's going to feel lost and defeated and above all helpless but I feel that she'll ignore her own paain an renew her efforts. That's how you have portrayed her character and to be honest, I loved you rendition of Rey and Taani.
@bold - this words are loved by me and exactly narrating the situation.
@2nd bold - I also think the same, but here you are too optimistic😛😳 Let's see, but I guess everything has got some limit and I am afraid if Taani's patience, her positive can become finished..lets c😕

I'm really excited with the progress of this ff. I love the idea of Rey going to select a gift in the form of clothes and jewellery for Taani. It might be an ice-breaker and I'm sure Taani's innocent joy will touch his heart. - here i am gonna give you a lil twists yaar. this is nt gonna simple one for sure😉 I mean, if he chooses a gift and gives her, that would be so simple nah..let's make it different with the next two updates
I really want to see how you're going to work that out. Looking forward to the rest of this ff. I'm super sorry about the delay in posting this comment. yea, you have made me confused initially..😳😆 BUT, I am super happy by getting this beautiful comment🤗
Please dont take it personally. I really love your work and always look forward to reading your updates. Thanks for the PMs and the awesome updates. You are a very talented writer and its a pleasure to read your creative outpourings. awww..it's a pleasure to have you among my readers and many thanks for so motivating words and trust me, I always wait for this special comments from you and I am eagerly waiting for your comment for the current update too😛
Love you lots dear, you all ppl help me to write this FF writing easily😊

Originally posted by: lovelysweet

Btw i am upset with u u did not pm me the last update
Anyways this update was awesome
Just one ques is did.piyu hear it all
Uggh that shivam
Umm rey developing feelings
Cant wait til the next update