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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hima_taarey

finally ek promising update...

loved the flash back...
thanx 4 clearing all the confusions...
and haaye... tht kiss...
thanx a lot 4 tht!!
and dnt worry m 19...!
and finally rey taani ka ho raha hai!!!
bt in last update vaishnabi was kind enuf?!
and y rey on d couch?
and yes... emotional tha...
coz their love was so pure...!
pls ab jaldi update kro...!



Why Rey on the sofa, asked by many. I will clear it with the next Author's note😊
And why Vaishnabi was so kind will be revealed soon😉, Thanks dear for this comment😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Bista-anzana

No doubt dt u r amazing writer.. Updte ws awesum but sumwr m bit confuse..like y Reyansh askd sry to Taani in de dinning table jz cz he hd start eating widout w8ing her ..but dey never eat together na... At first i thought its taani's imagination but it ws reality... Ws soo eager for de Rey's reaction after de kiss but chap ended nd shud w8 nw... [:p] again leap wen will Taarey fall in lub...? Thnkxx a lott for PM...



Thanks a lot for this comment and your feedback too🤗
I will clear your confusion with the author's note before next update😉😊
Enjoy this slow feeling of this love!!! this can't be miracle which will happen in two-three days. We should give time to Rey before he exhaust himself in Taani's love😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: soumiluvztaarey

Super duper awsum part
Luved it
Rey's past was so painful
I was teared up di 😭
N their kiss was so romantic
I was blushing like hell 😳
Precap is damn interesting
Update soon n PM me



So it was a mixed feeling for you
I am glad that you have liked it behena🤗
I love you loads😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PRASSI

Speechless after reading ur this update...

I was totally lost in the update...
U wont believe that I had tears in my eyes when granny told Rey's past...
How can Vaishnabhi do this to Rey and Rinni...
And mainly Rey was so small to know what exactly happened at that time...
How can she cheat Rey's father...
Not only him the whole family...
She enjoyed Shivam's birthday when Rinni was suffering a lot...
How can she be so disgusting...😡😡😡
Now I actually hate her...
I actually felt Rey's pain in ur update...
This update actually revealed the dark side of Rey and also justified the title...
And ya I know I shouldn't say it but I want to tell u that according to starting of the update Rey and Rinni have only 5 years gap but when u wrote the scene where Rinni fall down, there u wrote totally 7 years gap between Rey and Rinni...
I hope I'm write at this point...
I hope u wont get hurt that I took this point out from ur update, even it was more that amazing and mind-blowing update...
And loved that Rey had accepted that he was wrong...
Now loving this Rey a lot...
And the kiss of TaaRey was super awesome and romantic...
Over all loved the update a lot...
Plzz update next part soon...



I have thanked you already, now again I am telling you that I really love ya for this appreciation and support🤗
I am glad that my writing was emotional enough to bring tears on ur eyes, can't understand if i feel glad or sad😳
yes dark past is gradually revealing, not not fully..so stay connected😉😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nithi_newlife

Yaar you killedme for a moment when I read 15+...

I was badly wondering what could be in store and yea...TITLE...I was like...""JESUS CHRIST--SERIOUSLY???""
I lovedthe flashback...It was a perfect package...

Jo Hota Hai Achha Ke liye Hi Hota Hai" and consoles herself, her trust is completely shaken now.

Taani, that day Babuya alone woke the whole night beside her Di."

"He forgets to cry Taani, his tears has been dried out.

These are some lines which portrayed the emotions you wanted to express perfectly...Just badly fell for them!!
And now they decided not to share their bed...Oh!!
Well that's a good step...Perhaps you shud wonder that I must have been upset on this...But no!! Am happy...well that's a mature step...
Just falling for this badly...
And the best part was am sure you have changed many minds who would have hated Rey ...Am sure now everyone would just fall for him...
Yaar on the whole...one ofyour best update...Lengthy,emotional, romantic and cute...
Just falling for this ff more...
great job!!
Nithi😊

**And my spl hugs**



I actually don't have clue if we can consider describing a kiss w/o that warning..i noticed it in another FF, so i included it

@bold - I actually wanted to know your POV behind this😊, pls explain me nah yaar😳

Thanks for all those sweetest words..I love ya for it❤️
My return hug😉😆🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Debu m bak wid my cmmnts
Awsum update I luvd it to the core
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Debu!!!!
Brilliant update, dear...

Yes!!! You said it right...
This update for me was the best update till now...

It was emotional and also romantic...
Loved the update a lot..

I feel so bad for Rey..
I just cant describe what I felt after reading about his past..
That guy has so much pain within him...
I felt very very bad for him..
And the way you have written that part, I really liked it..

And then, Rey!!!
Rey is changing or I should say that he is becoming normal now after bearing all the pain..
He again said sorry and Thank you to Taani..

Haha!! Return gift...
I wonder what Taani will ask for...

And then the dinner part..
I cant even speak about it..
It was HOT...
You have written that part really very very well..
Loved it..
I was blushing throughout that part..


The precap is really interesting, dear..
Do update soon..
And yeah!! Once again, this was a FAB update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
unres

di this was an unexpected turn
loved it
this tadka was very nice

rey's past is painful harsh
someone who has experienced it he or she would love it more than ours
it was like someone who has experienced pain at a great height has got an angel in his

it was lovely
like
bhagwan jab deta hai chhappar far kr deta hai
at least for a moment
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan

Debu!!!!

Brilliant update, dear...

Yes!!! You said it right...
This update for me was the best update till now...

It was emotional and also romantic...
Loved the update a lot..

I feel so bad for Rey..
I just cant describe what I felt after reading about his past..
That guy has so much pain within him...
I felt very very bad for him..
And the way you have written that part, I really liked it..

And then, Rey!!!
Rey is changing or I should say that he is becoming normal now after bearing all the pain..
He again said sorry and Thank you to Taani..

Haha!! Return gift...
I wonder what Taani will ask for...

And then the dinner part..
I cant even speak about it..
It was HOT...
You have written that part really very very well..
Loved it..
I was blushing throughout that part..


The precap is really interesting, dear..
Do update soon..
And yeah!! Once again, this was a FAB update..



That is actually a real encouraging comment for me Ayesha🤗
My update is incomplete without it
love ya loads😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chand91

res

unres
reys past s realy painful
i jst hop ki wo taani ko khud batay apne bareme
& hiccy wala sen s mind blowng



Thank You Chandu🤗
valo laglo ei comment ta😳😃

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