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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wow-taarey

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff00ff">res😆
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff00ff">unres😳</font>
<font color="#003300">Chapter 20: Tera Hone Laga Hoo</font>
<font color="#003300">(for 15+ readers)😲😲</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">(in mind)but mai toh is year Dec. mai 15 ki hoyungi😭</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">nw to u: di, maine aapko btaya tha na ki mai 16 ki hu</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">so, i'm gng 2 read, so...again</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#ff00ff">res/unres</font></font>
<font color="#003300">"A kiss may ruin a human life." -Oscar Wilde</font>
but iska is update se kya relation
aap taarey ke saath kya krne vaale ho😭
tatally confused😕nw coming to the update
ohhh...😭😭
rey's past is so harsh😭
nd granny's words were so sady😭 sady😭
but i don't think vaishnabi itni buri hogi😊
afterall agar vo buri hoti toh rey aur rinni ke close aati hi kyu
uski marriage ho gyi jo ki vo chahti thi toh use un dono se kya kaam
so, i thought ki uske decision ka bhi koi reason hoga
aap zaroor koi twist daaloge😉
but its totally my p.o.v.😊😊
nw coming to the main purpose
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">rey sudhar rha hai😳</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">firse taani ko sorry bol hi diya aur apni mistake bhi maan li😃😃</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">ummm...return gift😉</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">thik hai krayo krayo jitna wait krana hai kra lo😭😭😡</font>

<font color="#003300">"You are late. Sorry, wo mujhe bhuk laga tha, I have started eating." Reyaansh says by seeing Taani.</font>

but rey ne taani ke saath pehle kabhi dinner kiya hi nahi aur na hi esa koi promise kiya toh vo sorry kyu bol rha hai????😕
and after that😳
kuch bhi comment krne ki jarurat nahi hai😳😳
samazdaar ko ishara kafi hota hai😳😉😆
<font color="#003300">Precap- One month leap, Taani meets Vaishnabi. They keeps their sixth vow</font>
<font color="#003300">together.</font>
Ohk...accha precap hai but inki marriage ko already 3 months hoge and ab ek aur month means 6 months complete hone mai only 2 months reh gye😕
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">but inhe sirf 2 months mai love kaise hoga. Inn lazy lovers ki toh kiss hi 3 months baad huyi hai😆😆toh love 2 months mai kese hoga??nd 1 more que. pehlerealizekise hoga abt their feelings??😳😳</font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2"></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">aapne humse 10 que. puche toh. aapko bhi toh return gift milna chahiye so...jaldi jaldi sb que. ka ans. do😳😳😆</font>

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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
first of all SUPERB AMAZING MINDBLOWING update..!!👏

then how can someone be so cruel leaving there family at the tym of need...!!😡
felling so sad for rey and rinni, first their selfish mother left them then their father hanged himself..!!😭

now coming to the present ufff taarey kiss was so hawwwt...!! 😉
i have fallen in love with this ff and ur writing...!!!
do update soon nd cant wait to read more..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey I m new , trying to give u my views n crap pressed wong key n wow taarey copied sorry dear dont want to hurt unow come to you u r the reason to join this bcos u restrict yr post n not to read ur awosome update is not going to happen so next time plz more taarey and u kno na that u r awosome writer waiting 4 yourupdate so stay healty n keep writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haaila The kiss ws so damn hot me blushing lyk mad☺️

Totally loved the update slowly slowly kuch ho raha hai 😳 love d way u r developing their story gud job debs will commnt on previous chapter asap 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dildostidance09

first of all SUPERB AMAZING MINDBLOWING update..!!👏

then how can someone be so cruel leaving there family at the tym of need...!!😡
felling so sad for rey and rinni, first their selfish mother left them then their father hanged himself..!!😭

now coming to the present ufff taarey kiss was so hawwwt...!! 😉
i have fallen in love with this ff and ur writing...!!!
do update soon nd cant wait to read more..!!



Thanks a lot behena
I know your school open ho gaya, still you are taking out ur time to read it..
I am really happy yaar🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: patie

Haaila The kiss ws so damn hot me blushing lyk mad☺️

Totally loved the update slowly slowly kuch ho raha hai 😳 love d way u r developing their story gud job debs will commnt on previous chapter asap 😃



Arreee wah kya baat hai..u come to check this..though you are busy
aap aaye toh bahar aayee😃

Thanks yaar for encouraging comment🤗
I am waiting for ASAP😳😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nithi_newlife

1) Your thoughts/feelings about this story and the characters?

OMG!! WHAT NEXT??

A/N - just a casual curiosity, so basically mystery attacks u, then y this story is diff from others , u think so? i mean then y this story u like to read? pls dont angry at me, asking for evaluating my work only, and u said that u loved this story😳

2)Any favorite scene(s) or dialogue?

Fav dialogues:

A/N - Just One Word - PERFECT choice, coz I also do love these😛😳

3)Who is your favorite character till date and Why?

Reyansh, yes I like his wits in getting his revenge fulfilled.

Taani, the way she reciprocated to Rey on their suhaagraat and at the same time decided not to show her anger or disgust to his granny or Rinni. I mean the way she prioritizes people.

A/N - actually I don't know if you ppl can feel through my writing this or not, bt i wanted 2show a diff of opinion.personality, attitude, showing of life etc. Pls share ur feeling in this regard, if possible. I mean, see Rey, he has labelled all girls(his lady love) under same category on the basis of some past unusual event whereas Taani, still fills with so much of positivity..don't u think so while reading???

7)The most romantic scene(s)/event(s) until now?

Romantic...nothing for me...coz you call it romance only when its filled with love which is yet to take place in the story

A/N - PERFECT, actually two of my beautiful and intelligent readers think alike and trust me i also didn't think like this and after reading your comments, i think..yes ..this is exactly wat i also think/want/wish/expect

10) What are you looking forward to the most in the coming Episodes? (suggestions/feedback/you want to read here)

Dark ff ka asli swaad Aggressiveness ke bina kaise aayega boss??😉

Expecting AGGRESSIVE ROMANCE between Taarey.

Sorry Niths, but cud u pls explain me it in detail. for my sake..wat exactly do u mean my Aggressive Romance?? or what exactly do u want 2c here?? or what u expect from this FF???

I am glad that you freely wrote your view. As this is my first ever big work, I really wanted this badly. Sometimes, it's easy to imagine than pen down your thoughts.

Thanks

With love🤗

Debu

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Posted: 12 years ago
Comment Time 😃
hmm so Rajeev and Vaishnabi's marriage was arranged...that means na pyaar shaadi se pehle tha aur na shaadi ke baad hua *saying this coz 1 sided love isn't love...it becomes love when both persons feel for each other*
Vaishnabi was from a poor family...when she got married in a rich household, she got all the luxuries which she could not have before her marriage as her poor parents could not afford it
"Change is the only constant in this universe"...sometimes the change is for good but sometimes the change is bad...and the Singhania family experienced the latter
Vaishnabi's case is like the case of an addict...wo kehte hain na "lat" lag jaye to chut-ti nahin
She was from a poor family so...had she wanted she could have easily survived/managed in the low income...but she had experienced the luxuries (drug)...so when she couldn't afford that drug in the Singhania household...she found another person *Mr.Rajpoot* who could buy that drug for her!
Addicts are helpless in the hands of their wants...they do not care for anyone besides their wants, in Vaishnabi's case for the sake of getting the luxuries as Mrs.Rajpoot she let go of her most expensive assets...her gold i.e. her honor and her diamonds i.e. her two children
so Rey has got his *Introvert-ness* from his dad
I myself am a hardcore introvert...i like keeping things to myself but when needed i do share my feelings with a few closed ones
Rey's father didn't share his pain with others perhaps the one he wanted to be that "closed one" never became that for him...i hope Rey realizes the "need to share his feelings" and confides in his life partner
For me, apart from Vaishnabi...even Rajeev is responsible for the miserable life of Rinni and Rey
People say he killed himself as he couldn't bear the loss of his loved one...but i have a question, din't he love his kids???
Why didn't he live for them??? he knew that their mother left them, if he had been a good father...he would have made sure that he showers double amount of love on his children so that they don't feel the void of not having a mother...but what he did, he ended his life like a loser...completely depriving his children from experiencing parental love
Gayetri raised the children somehow or the other and gave them as much love as she could but no matter how much a person tries he/she can never take the place of a father or mother in a child's life 🤔
Rey didn't believe that his mother did that to him and his Rinni di...that happens, its very very very difficult for any child to believe that his/her mother doesn't love him/her...may be because aisa bohat kam hota hai...may be 1 in a million times...ke koi maa apne bache se pyaar na kare...uper se chahe jitna daante, but behind that strictness is always the love and care for her child 😊
and this 1 in a million thing isn't true even in Vaisnabi's case...in the past she ruthlessly left her children but i believe with the passage of time as the blindfold of greed removed from her eyes she realized what a big sin she had committed, that's why we got to see her care and concern for Rey and Rinni at the temple
you said i'll hate Vaishnabi...umm i still don't, because in between the lines i have seen a way out which can prove Vaishnabi innocent...may be not completely innocent but surely not as guilty as she is shown to be now, so i won't hate her until i see that 'way out' getting completely closed before my eyes 😉
hmm Taani is unable to listen about the miserable past of Reyansh...i told you so earlier, that it will be difficult for Taani to digest the fact that Reyaansh Singhania who is responsible for the suffering of many people has himself suffered so much.
yes both Taani and Rey couldn't experience parental love but ofcourse Rey is more unfortunate as Taani's parents were taken away from her by God but Rey's parents betrayed him and themselves deprived their children from their love
This revelation has for sure built a soft corner for Rey in Taani's heart...and i am sure with time we'll see the effects of this soft corner in Taani's behaviour towards Rey
Hmm now the second part of the update
"Where were you?"...hmm someone has become very concerned about his wife's whereabouts...first in temple and now again 😉
He is definitely improving...now he even feels that to convey his feelings to his wife that's why that confession about his misconception, good going Rey, keep it up 👍🏼
Taani had to be lost afterall she has just come to know about the horrible past of her husband
this time his thank you was better than the last one 😉
Rey evaluates everything in monetary terms...because money played a major role in his past...his mom left his dad because he didn't have the money to fulfill her needs...that's way Rey believes that Money can buy anything
hmm return gift...lets see is teer se Taani kab aur kiska shikaar karti hai 😆
I know she's an intelligent girl *just like me 😆* so she'll use it at the right time 😉
lets see if Rey is able to give her the return gift or not
and then he even listens to her command...indeed he behaves the best when he is in a good mood
i hope Taani gets to know about this key-to-the-treasure soon...i mean, i hope she get to know about the above mentioned fact about Reyansh Singhania and uses it properly 😊
"Sorry wo mujhe bhook laga tha so i started eating"...one more act of a well behaved man, is pe to i wanna react like D3 boys raising their hands doing chemistry step 😆
about the kiss...won't say much
i have already told you that i had always wanted Taani to take the first step while coming close physically...why i wanted that...i need not say it because you already gave proper words to my thoughts in the reply to my last comment...i'll put that here, in case someone apart from you and me wants to read that reply...here is it:
"Few reasons, if Rey takes this step, Taani would have thought as his lust not love and it can make this situation even worst"
in the end just wanna say
"Kisi ne sahi kaha hai jhootha khaane se pyaar barhta hai" 😉 😆
wanna say one more thing...Debu you have justified Their First Kiss with the story ever-so-perfectly, you are not one of those writers who write romance just for the sake of making the readers happy, the romance in your writings is always completely justified and this is also one of the reasons why i love you and your writings so much...keep it up 👍🏼
And i have realized that i can't end my comment here as i haven't commented on two important points yet...So
"Reyaansh Singhania finally makes the couch besides the bed as his sleeping place, leaving Taani on the bed alone for the next few months "...so one more assumption/prediction of mine is getting true, Rey will try to push Taani away from himself...hopefully we'll see him yearning for the care and concern from Taani soon
hmm one month leap...that's okay with me
and Taani-Vaishnabi meet...that will be one hell exciting thing to read 😊
and the fulfillment of sixth vow...hmm a great progress in their relationship
looking forward to read the next update
Phew...finally done with the comment 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aishapie

Super awsome update...jus luved to d core,i'm in luv wit dis ff.
Hey plz plz update nxt prt before nxt weekend i'l not b able to wait so long.



THanks Thanks and Thanks a TON🤗
sorry dear, I am hell busy with my work right now😳

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