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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wow-taarey

res😆

unres😳
Chapter 20: Tera Hone Laga Hoo
(for 15+ readers)😲😲
(in mind)but mai toh is year Dec. mai 15 ki hoyungi😭
nw to u: di, maine aapko btaya tha na ki mai 16 ki hu
so, i'm gng 2 read, so...again
res/unres
"A kiss may ruin a human life." -Oscar Wilde
but iska is update se kya relation
aap taarey ke saath kya krne vaale ho😭
tatally confused😕 nw coming to the update
ohhh...😭😭
rey's past is so harsh 😭
nd granny's words were so sady😭 sady😭
but i don't think vaishnabi itni buri hogi😊
afterall agar vo buri hoti toh rey aur rinni ke close aati hi kyu
uski marriage ho gyi jo ki vo chahti thi toh use un dono se kya kaam
so, i thought ki uske decision ka bhi koi reason hoga
aap zaroor koi twist daaloge😉
but its totally my p.o.v.😊😊
nw coming to the main purpose
rey sudhar rha hai😳
firse taani ko sorry bol hi diya aur apni mistake bhi maan li😃😃
ummm...return gift😉
thik hai krayo krayo jitna wait krana hai kra lo😭😭😡

"You are late. Sorry, wo mujhe bhuk laga tha, I have started eating." Reyaansh says by seeing Taani.

but rey ne taani ke saath pehle kabhi dinner kiya hi nahi aur na hi esa koi promise kiya toh vo sorry kyu bol rha hai????😕
and after that😳
kuch bhi comment krne ki jarurat nahi hai😳😳
samazdaar ko ishara kafi hota hai😳😉😆
Precap - One month leap, Taani meets Vaishnabi. They keeps their sixth vow
together.
Ohk...accha precap hai but inki marriage ko already 3 months hoge and ab ek aur month means 6 months complete hone mai only 2 months reh gye😕
but inhe sirf 2 months mai love kaise hoga. Inn lazy lovers ki toh kiss hi 3 months baad huyi hai😆😆 toh love 2 months mai kese hoga??nd 1 more que. pehle realize kise hoga abt their feelings??😳😳

aapne humse 10 que. puche toh. aapko bhi toh return gift milna chahiye so...jaldi jaldi sb que. ka ans. do😳😳😆



LOL behena..what can I say..that could be a mere quote..not sure!!!😉😆😆
now what is her real motto to come close behind Rey and Rinni, will be disclosed soon..after that dekh lena if u hav guessed it correctly or not😉
Rey was wrong, he thought it in his mind but cudn't say it

I have a doubt, who said you that 6months pein ye story khatm hoga or their love story will be ended?? did i write it anywhere kya?? m nt able 2recall nw😕
feeling kisko pehle hoga, i dunno even coz i hamesha mold the story as per requirement and 2make it interesting..so pls maaf kar do😳
and for that dinner akela karne ka part wala jo ques pucha, wo ques has asked by many readers, so i ll ans it with the author's note before the next update..chalega toh???

and and and I love ya behena for such a sweetest comment🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Viji.Chandran

awesome update debu...
i m falling in love wt ur stry mre n mre...
the way taani reacted when dadi told rey's past ws amazing...
his dark past s still to b revealed?
bt nw wt taani by his side he wl also get a life wt joy whch he truly deserve...
n the kiss... one of the amazing kissing seq i hav ever read in IF...
update soon



Thanks Viji for praising me for writing that scene😳
you know nah how I love this comment😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: niki_taarey

Oh god its tooo gud debu di I never used to read this ff dnt no y bt wen I read it nw its mindblowing jst luvd it...:) luv u di its jst awsum continue soon n pm me ...



Thanks Niki behena😃
pls try to get some time for me and this FF😳
I love you for this comment🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: taani.priya1997

it was awesome i just love the way u pen it down the true feelings of a mature story their attraction their repulsion their thinking about each other but yet miles to come closer andi loved the part when rey realizes that taani never loved shivam. its awesome again. pls update soon can't wait



Thanks Priya🤗
darun durdanto likhechis..
m trying my best to write this story😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Omg how can a woman be so damn mean just for money and fame she left her two little children and never look back at them if they are ok or not. I hope Rey never forgive her
Rey past is so emotional...
Hmm Taani kissing Rey to stop his hiccups was awesome 😳
Superb update, I love it



@bold - Naths, i think this is gonna be the base of my story..stay tunned😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

Comment Time 😃
hmm so Rajeev and Vaishnabi's marriage was arranged...that means na pyaar shaadi se pehle tha aur na shaadi ke baad hua *saying this coz 1 sided love isn't love...it becomes love when both persons feel for each other* (you mean one sided love??? you don't believe this as Love. But beg to differ you here Ms Intelligent. If we cant reciprocate the same, it's nt our fault. That doesn't mean that the opp part doesn't love me. i believe it, perhaps the other party's agreement gives a completeness or fulfillment to it)

Vaishnabi was from a poor family...when she got married in a rich household, she got all the luxuries which she could not have before her marriage as her poor parents could not afford it
"Change is the only constant in this universe"...sometimes the change is for good but sometimes the change is bad...and the Singhania family experienced the latter (Agree with you!! i wud like to see it in diff angle here. Like when her family turned poor, that change turned her mind too!!)

Vaishnabi's case is like the case of an addict...wo kehte hain na "lat" lag jaye to chut-ti nahin
She was from a poor family so...had she wanted she could have easily survived/managed in the low income...but she had experienced the luxuries (drug)...so when she couldn't afford that drug in the Singhania household...she found another person *Mr.Rajpoot* who could buy that drug for her! (bold - agree, but i wud like to add sumthing wth it. she has got a greediness, she was ambitious, and at the same time a Big Fool. the outer attraction/gorgeous things could easily attract her whereas she was nt able to think that these are not constant/permanent)
Addicts are helpless in the hands of their wants...they do not care for anyone besides their wants, in Vaishnabi's case for the sake of getting the luxuries as Mrs.Rajpoot she let go of her most expensive assets...her gold i.e. her honor and her diamonds i.e. her two children
so Rey has got his *Introvert-ness* from his dad 👏👏👏
I myself am a hardcore introvert...i like keeping things to myself but when needed i do share my feelings with a few closed ones(👍🏼 - Perfect one, I agree. One should always do)
Rey's father didn't share his pain with others perhaps the one he wanted to be that "closed one" never became that for him...i hope Rey realizes the "need to share his feelings" and confides in his life partner
For me, apart from Vaishnabi...even Rajeev is responsible for the miserable life of Rinni and Rey
People say he killed himself as he couldn't bear the loss of his loved one...but i have a question, din't he love his kids???
Why didn't he live for them??? he knew that their mother left them, if he had been a good father...he would have made sure that he showers double amount of love on his children so that they don't feel the void of not having a mother...but what he did, he ended his life like a loser...completely depriving his children from experiencing parental love
(Now I want to say something, my POV. when I wrote that he hanged himself on the day of her marriage, does it only mean that he died due to Vaishnabi's decision only??or did you think it like that way only?? I mean, he started thinking as a massive failure in respect of every aspect. When he started his career in business, he couldn't able to run this ancestral bus successfully. After that he was not able to satisfy his wife and coz of his work, their family glory was hampered. So, that depression came to him. On the other hand, his younger bro was a student then and perhaps he surrendered as Vaishnabi had already cheated him. Coz she was then pregnant with Mr Rajpoot's chilld. perhaps he thought that he was unable and inefficient to give a life to his two kids what they deserve and he forgot totally what cud be their mental state if he left them alone in this world ..wat say??)
Rey didn't believe that his mother did that to him and his Rinni di...that happens, its very very very difficult for any child to believe that his/her mother doesn't love him/her...may be because aisa bohat kam hota hai...may be 1 in a million times...ke koi maa apne bache se pyaar na kare...uper se chahe jitna daante, but behind that strictness is always the love and care for her child 😊 (you know, you may hard to believe, bt it happens. I have seen, I woud not believe unless I hav nt seen it in my real life. In fact in India, sometimes mothers are very helpless and sometimes mothers are very greedy!!!so under any of these circumstances, kids suffer the most.now can't say if this includes in million or nt, coz i toh hamesha find those in newspapers)

and this 1 in a million thing isn't true even in Vaisnabi's case...in the past she ruthlessly left her children but i believe with the passage of time as the blindfold of greed removed from her eyes she realized what a big sin she had committed, that's why we got to see her care and concern for Rey and Rinni at the temple (just my thought😳👏👏, but something major must have happend wth her coz laalach itni ghatiya and buri cheez hai ke wo zaldi utarta nahi and i feel that time/age teach human being a great lesson!!!)
you said i'll hate Vaishnabi...umm i still don't, because in between the lines i have seen a way out which can prove Vaishnabi innocent...may be not completely innocent but surely not as guilty as she is shown to be now, so i won't hate her until i see that 'way out' getting completely closed before my eyes 😉 (you are superb optimistic!!!😃 that's good actually, u reminds me abt my Taani who always finds a postive side from any worst incident😉)


hmm return gift...lets see is teer se Taani kab aur kiska shikaar karti hai 😆
(that gonna be something diff. I will use this as one of the positive side of this FF, though m nt sure if everyone will agree wth me or nt. And just a hint, Taani will defo nt ask anything for herself)
lets see if Rey is able to give her the return gift or not (good pick👍🏼 - again nerve of my story as per my thinking so far..though it can change anytime😛😆)


"Sorry wo mujhe bhook laga tha so i started eating"...one more act of a well behaved man, is pe to i wanna react like D3 boys raising their hands doing chemistry step 😆
(I nah actually didn't understand this point of yours. I wish to knw what u think abt this line as many of the other readers wantted 2know from me why Rey is telling Soryy to Taani for having dinner before her though he has nt committed anything. Though I will explain my thought wth the next update, still I wanna know ur take on this..pls pls share😳😃)

about the kiss...won't say much
i have already told you that i had always wanted Taani to take the first step while coming close physically...why i wanted that...i need not say it because you already gave proper words to my thoughts in the reply to my last comment...i'll put that here, in case someone apart from you and me wants to read that reply...here is it:
"Few reasons, if Rey takes this step, Taani would have thought as his lust not love and it can make this situation even worst"

wanna say one more thing...Debu you have justified Their First Kiss with the story ever-so-perfectly, you are not one of those writers who write romance just for the sake of making the readers happy, the romance in your writings is always completely justified and this is also one of the reasons why i love you and your writings so much...keep it up 👍🏼
(but I am scared if everyone looses interest!!!hopefully not. fingers crossed...lets c😕)

And i have realized that i can't end my comment here as i haven't commented on two important points yet...So
"Reyaansh Singhania finally makes the couch besides the bed as his sleeping place, leaving Taani on the bed alone for the next few months "...so one more assumption/prediction of mine is getting true, Rey will try to push Taani away from himself...hopefully we'll see him yearning for the care and concern from Taani soon
hmm one month leap...that's okay with me
(can u pls elaborate ur thought on this a lil if tym permits. waise i ll explain it with the next update coz many have asked my the reason, bt i wanna knw wat u felt?? i hav written this wth a thought behind this for sure)



At last you came and your much awaited comment
trust me, after every update i wait for it, abb toh adat si ban gayee hai😳 and i also enjoy this post update discussion session..how we post Morten each and every characters with the respective circumstances!!!😃

Thanks Ton🤗
my comments on black below ur post

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks dear
i really missed this chapter
coming to the update
really feeling bad for rey
his past is so scary

how can someone do this with there child
hope taani will bring back him soon.
thanks again
and try to cont. soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Author's Note :

Holla friends and my readers. How are you all? Not good nah? But I have decided not to be sad further and I will remember TaaRey through my imagination/writing. Because the show must go on!! I have promised many readers to finish this story, aur ek baar jo main commitment kar deti hoo, toh uske baad ka toh you know🤣

Now comes to the point why I am making this post. Two questions to answer:

1. Why Rey said Sorry at the dinner table even if he has not promised anything. I wanted to show how he becomes normal with his daily life. It is not the fact that he doesn't know the manners, he is a well-behaved boy. So, when Taani asked him that you change your attire, I am arranging dinner for us, that implied that both of them would be having their dinner together. Whereas, he himself started eating alone. He previously also asked Taani to come to the breakfast table with Rinni, that shows that he also a family person.

2. Now, why he arranged his bed away from Taani. In answer to this, I would like to see this positively you know. I mean, now he has started respecting his wife and he would prefer to go near to her, only when she will allow him or their heart will be bonded together or this relation goes to that comfort zone. I would like to think that it is his drastic change, because he has started respecting her feeling too. This indicates that physical intimacy which he told to Taani before turned into a natural love and respect gradually!!

Hope these are convincing enough😊. See below for update.😉
Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanqq so much dear for clearing every ones confusion and thanqq so much for continuing ur FF... I'm so glad for it...
I really wanted u to continue this and thanqq so much for continuing...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plsss pm me when u update

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