ArHi FF! Dante's Labyrinth: Thread 2 [Completed]

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

WOW RB take a bow!

You had me hooked till the end...

Khushi and Tara were so twisted in their mind games that they twisted other people's lives..

Shukla got the perfect revenge...what better way than to just ignore Khushi ,thus not giving her the pleasure to make more plans ...

Thanking you for writing this story!

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Natasha

@no_username

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

OMG!!
u r the awesomest writer ever!!!

the story...the ending...PERFECT!!!

shukla's ravange...wow!!
shukla may have not been the punisher...but he sure can punish!!
i wonder what khushi might do after that!!

r u gonna write an epilogue????

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

RB - take a bow and then take another one and then take another one

A tale of treading the line between sanity and insanity is a skill best reserved for professionals and yet you've nailed the story by keep it crisp, hugely entertaining, chilling, grilling...

The game of insanity is almost always dangerous and looks like Khushi is finally going to pay the price in the only way that will truly mean something to her

Phew...Am going to read the whole thing again. This genre is best enjoyed in one go.

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

God so all this was planed by ACP as his revenge
N Taya was in on it didnt see that comin
Wonder what Arnav would've done if he'd known he was played ...was a pawn
God Khushi caused a lot of disaster in her wake N had no remorse
At least the ACP has finally gotten some closure with hint o revenge
He found her one weakness she hates to be alone with n one to play with
Thanks for pm ...really enjoyed

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

that was simply mind blowing and loving how slowly the truth is coming to the surface and tara's involvement sounds very interesting! one simple joke destroy a whole family:)

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Oh my! This is it.

It was so gripping. When i read that Tara was also involved and they wanted to have Khushi land up in this mental asylum, i was stunned.

Khushi shocked me when she said she had the evidences all the while.

Best part is Shukla. The final nail in the coffin when he let it go.

Thanks for this FF,RB! Enjoyed this captivating tale.

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marleylerner

@marleylerner

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

That was an amazing "end". So turns out Khushi was in control the whole time. As much as her darkness terrifies my, for some reason I'm totally fascinated by her intelligence as well. I really wonder what makes people so dark. The labyrinth you built had me intrigued throughout. Extraordinary I must say. Though I am all the more puzzled by human behaviour and somewhat terrified of imagining such darkness.

I just loved reading this story. It exercised my limited mental faculties like never before and it is really fascinating to be shocked each time you read a chapter. Thanks so much!!!

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namita11

@namita11

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Amazing truly a thrill
Though I wanted a little bit more input from arnav's part then again we can't get everything we are hoping for

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RockBarbie

@RockBarbie

Voyager

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Note:

As I don't do PMs anymore:

New FF started. Genre: Drama / Angst.

Adaptation

Alerts on Twitter, if anyone is interested. This one.

Thanks,
RB

Edited by RockBarbie - 12 years ago