ArHi FF! Dante's Labyrinth: Thread 2 [Completed]

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Wow such an amazing ending...will miss th story

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Anamika Kumari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Damn!!!...that is the word escaped from my lips...when I started reading it!!!!

But I'm sorry...as I commented after the ending one was updated!!!!

I think it was a right decision ...and a final closure to that bloody game...which was feeding Khushi's ego from a long time!!!!

I never thought...that Tara would regret playing the game...because...I don't see Khushi regretting... It clearly shows that she was already captured by the demons of her dark thoughts!!!

She was already done with her life...and Killing her at this time...would have been a winning gift for her...because...then she would be the closure...but now she is totally deprived...that's her punishment for ever...to give her...NOTHING!!!!!

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varshapan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Brilliant!!!

Take a bow lady... that was the perfect end to beat all ends...

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Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

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Shukla had his perfect revenge on a person who thought that nothing could ever

beat her as she always had a back-up plan ready ... Her Trump Card ...

But Shukla beat her at her own game ... robbing her the opportunity to use her vicious

mind at the games she loved playing ... by just walking out and letting her be ...

That would be the ultimate punishment for her ... something that would suck her into

the labyrinth of insanity for sure ...

Thanks for giving us such a mind twister ... really going to miss this one ...

Thanks RB ...

Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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404703

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

just wonderful piece of work...

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atulg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Hats off RB! Brilliant finish to a brilliant story...I for one couldnt have predicted this at all...but after reading what you have penned, makes perfect sense. The only solution to get away from people like Khushi and Tara (I am not able to find appropriate adjectives for them, what ever I come up with seems to be not good enough) is to ignore them. So glad Shukla realized it in the end.
Thanks for writing this and all the PMs.I will miss this story for all the mind stimulation it provided me, though I could never guess anything correctly, I had fun trying to guess :)
Take care RB