#3:Arhi FF-Making You Mine,ch 10-13, #4 link pg 1

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PreenaRak

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Posted: 12 years ago

#471

Wow. Well done. D way arnav expressed his restleness was awesome. The man who can say i love u in anger mode, hw s he supposed to say sorry politely. U showed it dude n khusi being khushi shud beat him ofcourse in same level itself. One request dont take this much time update soon. Plz

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shruti

@shruti46

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Posted: 12 years ago

#472

one thing in this update was khushi was weak yet strong character.in early para of update it showed how she was running from facing the reality

while in last para u showed how she showed the mighty asr,what is his place..

sorry is not just a word ,that u just spit and move on from the guilt..firstly u shud realize the mistake..

i know arnav is trying which showed how he talked freely with his father in law.but he hs to try harder..

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Barun_Addict

@Barun_Addict

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Posted: 12 years ago

#473

Superb 😃

I love Khushi's bold avtar !! 👍🏼

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ipktouch

@ipktouch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#474

wow what an amazing n awesome update..well written..arnav n kushi were undergoing inner conflicts..and here kushi won that n broke their conflicts in a beautiful way n handled tactfully by giving simple logic for sorry..by now arnav shud hav understood tat she is right..till now he was thinking abt his feeling tat he had done wrong to her but he neva had felt abt kushi's hurt...he was missing her for his own reasons..i think this tym she has given big blow n challenge to his big fat ego...let me knw how cum he wil bent n bow for her apology..waiting for the next..

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dsbj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#475

mind blowing.. Waiting for next chapter eagerly.

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sreemeera

@sreemeera

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Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Fantastic!!

Now the great ASR said sorry.

Loved the Khushi reacted to this..

What will he do now.. Will try to earn Khushi's apology ??

Continue soon..

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#477

Awesome update 😊

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#478

awesome one

thanks for the pm

Twinkle

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#479

Hey y are you not sure about this chappy?? It was really awesome!!

Both their emotions completely described.

I could imagine all that happening infront of my eyes!

Khushi's reaction was amazing.She is right.He need to earn his apology!! And for that he need to admit his mistake first! :)

Thanks for the pm!

Plz Update soon this time:)