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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Wow this Is an amazing n different concept, I have read all the parts.

Fabulous job 👍🏼

Aweew tom and jerry they are.

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

thank god anjali s fine..

he said i love u to her 😃

fantastic one 👏 👏 👏 👏

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casker

@casker

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

lovely update.

Arnav confessed😊.

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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

ooo that was brilliant

i loved it

so glad that Di's ok

and aaawww he told her he loved her

how sweet ☺️

thanks for the email😊

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

What an excellent idea to combine the awesome OS series and make it into a full fledged SS and u ask if it is ok with us, are you kidding? It is more than ok I adore all these pre B I K happenings and now known as B I L! What an appropriate tittle! I am excited at the prospect of even more chapters now! You have penned down a heartwarming prologue there! 👏👏

On to chapter 5, wow woman wow what an appropriate title and Gem of an update! Arnav and Khushi were brought together very beautifully by a miracle in their life that is Kashev. You started the chapter so well with the little bub's eyes that reminded Khushi of another pair of eyes that she couldn't seem to get over! Their mutual grief and concern for Anjali pushed them closer more and more and wham comes the very strong finish that is Arnav's confession! You handled that scene brilliantly, I am lost for words and the way I ramble that doesn't happen very often!😆😆 I can hardly wait to read about Khushi's reaction to this beautiful confession!

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Such a cool story! Love the characters.

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rakhee12

@rakhee12

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Oh you have collated these parts into an SS. Loved reading the Prologue and also read the other 4 parts again. Part 5 Arnav finally confessed his feeling to himself and Khushi

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fatima2603

@fatima2603

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

ahhh thank goodness anjalis fine.
the scenes between khushi and the baby are heartwarming.
And arnav confessed his love?? yay!

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JCJS

@JCJS

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Proloug was nice. Ha they are married. I am happy that u converted it to a ss. Really well written . Thks for the mail dear.

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JCJS

@JCJS

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

The chapter5 was awesome. It had so many emotions. He can only open up to her and she can only get it to. Keshav is too cute bonded to his mami . Has his mamas eyes. Lovely.
Finally he said those three words yeppi she would cry out of happiness.
Thks for the mail dear.

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