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Posted: 12 years ago


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Continued from previous post!!


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"Rey!! "she again turned him towards her but his highness was on a angry tip it seemed. She for sure knew he is faking but she though he wanted her to do something to please him and she will do it. But before that she has this highly irritating feeling so rushed to have a bath . Rey looked at her and pouted as she left him but soon chuckled. Isn't he acting too kiddish?? but he felt awesome. He never acted this stupid in front of anyone and he found some unknowing happiness acting that way in front of her. He smiled and looked at the painting she had painted . He waled to it and traced her face with his finger. He closed his eyes and felt how smooth her cheeks are. He opened his eyes and kissed her forehead in the portrait . She hs become a very inseperable part in his life. He wondered how and why he came here in the first place. She would be returning back in two days then what's the need to come here?? but sigh she is very important and special for him due to some unknown reason. He smiled again. Irony he is always smiling now-a-days. But yet again he smiled and bet on his head. He walked to the bed and fell on it trying to take a short nap till she comes out . He is about to slip into a deep slumber when he heard the knob open. He thought to resume his fake act but froze. Something inside him jumped. His heart?? may be !!! She walked to the mirror and was wiping her wet hair. She stopped as she realized his gaze on her. She felt consious and turned to him . She looked too cute in that black sleeveless tee and that red shorts. Its the first time he is seeing her in shorts or to exactly say in this less clothes. For sure something inside him burned him. He wanted to caress her those long yummy legs. He slowly walked to her as she tensed up. He came close to her and ran his hand thru her wet curls . Held her by shoulder and turned her to he mirror. He looked at her crossly through the mirror when she blushed at his gaze.

"you look sexy!! "he whispered in her ears making her go all red.

"don't blush that much!! I may loose my senses "he said and she blushed hard. He turned her towards him.

"bolana don't blush that much"he said taking steps forwards and she hitted the mirror on the wall. He trapped her between his arms and slightly pressed himself into her. She gulped hard and looked down and closed her eyes in anticipation when he leaned in closer. But never ever God is on his side. Just when he is about to kiss her someone knocked the door and both flinched apart. She blushed hard and exited the room .

"baba sab aapko bularahe hai!! " one of the servants informed.


" Dad!! " He called walking out into the garden.

"ahh aao beta" gautam said.

"aapne bulaya?? " he asked still regretting that he lost the moment.

"haan beta , socha room mei baite baite bore chuke hoge isiliye bulaya !! "he said as Rey almost made a crying face.

"kya hua beta? " gautam frowned.

"kuch nahi dad!! "he smiled forecefully . He casually looked aside and found Kriya working in the kitchen making something so excitedly . May be for him!! He thought and that only thought brightened him up.

"dad?? "Rey called him as his gaze fell on that.

"haan beta!! "

"wo bike ?" he asked seeing that black beauty standing there.

"arey wo?? mera hi hai!! I love bikes a lot. " gautam smiled.


"abhi bhi chalate ho?? "he asked never looking away from that . He has a crazy craze for bikes.

" abhi toh nahi!! mai toh wo kriya keliye khareeda !! usne bola wo seekhegi aur usse ye chahiye. Usse ye bohut pasand aaya. " gautam smiled saying

"Kriya bike bhi chalati hai?? "rey asked amused

"nahi nahi wo toh darti hai chalane se. ek baar kya giri uske paas bhi nahi jaati ab "gautam laughed and rey too joined. Suddenly something clicked him.


" dad keys? "he asked excited and gautam already understood that naughty spark in his eyes and asked a servant to hand him the keys.

Rey grabbed them and rushed into kitchen and right then kriya dusted her hands saying finished. He grabbed her hand and pulled her out.


"Rey kaha jaa rahe hai?? "she asked when they were nearing the bike.

"tum bike seekhogi abhi! "he said finally stopping at the bike. She looked at both and spoke

"aise mai shorts aur aap boxers mei??? and mujhe nahi seekhna "she said bluntly!!

"nahi tum seekh rahi ho aur mai sikha raha hun bas!! "he almost lifted her to make her sit on the bike.

"Rey humne slippers bhi nahi pehne for God's sake rukhiye toh!!"she pleaded but he quickly sat behind her.

"koi baat nahi !! now start he said and inserted the key in the whole and Kriya with no choice started the engine and slowly pulled out of the gate . Luckily their house is a bit alone helping kriya with less traffic. But as a small pet run in front of the bike she started shaking the handle feared.. But Rey grabbed on to the handle from behind and she stiffened. Once she was handeling quite okay he slowly moved his palms along her arms caressing and as she shivered and again shook he went a bit front and held the handle gripping over her fists. She breathed high but froze as he slowly placed his foot under hers on the gear to change the gear and same on the other side. His bare skin touching her bare thigh. It was so difficult for her to maintain. He slowly left the left handle and passed his hand over her stomach she fell back on his chest breathing hard and applied the breaks. It was near to dawn . Hardly a human's presence, she breathed high closing her eyes when he caressed her cheek with his and pecked her at edge of her mouth!! She snap opened her eyes and looked at him. His intense gaze made her blush.

She slowly got down as he helped her holding her waist and she sat back of him and hugged him tight as he drove off fast !!


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Well it didn't come as long as I imagined it would be!! :/


And thats it for today!! hope I gave both KR and SS and you liked it !!


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-deetha😳

Edited by -Blind.Dance- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sweet n lovely updt
Though tumhare hamesha ki updt ki length se kam laga
Par chalega atleast updt toh mil n it was very good
KR nSS moments were cute n amazing
KR bike ride was Mast
Loved it
Updt ur other works too
Edited by zina.92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ressooo

unressoooi

Deee... *hugs*

Firstly thanx for updating this on time :D

now coming to d update.. linewise...

starting with SS part..

mann it was like..wow...sweet.. innocent..naughty at times.. *waise wala naughty nai :P * .. but really sweet...

looks like Sharon has really started developing feelings for him.. :D

and kria litrelly laughing over swayam's situation..hahaaa.. who wont :P

poor soul.. ahahahaaa... :P

loved der movie part a lottt.. followed by d peaceful beach walk... damnnn.. haaye.. :$



Now coming to My Lovely KR :D

meko lagta tha ki Kria dnt like wearing shorts n all...

i was wrong ...haah...

i soo damn pity Rey.. privicy milti he ni hai bechare ko šŸ˜†

whnevr he tries to kiss her..kabhi maa aa jati h..toh kbhi dad ka bulava.. :P

and Bike Rideee.. ahaaa... :D

sacchi bolu toh the mention of Bike Reminded me of PPKE .. :$

The proximity they shared during d bike ride.. aahhh... i cud feel it too... Goshh... :$

i wish i get to see der bike ride one day mann.. that too ekdum aisi wali .. :$

Lovelyyy.. sweet.. amazinggg chappyyy.. :*

Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update...
superb...
loved the kr ans ss moments..and the romantic bike journey...
hmm good going..

well dear thanks a lot for pm..
pls update it soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesomew update di i just loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
šŸ˜›finally u updated...thanku so much...i was waiting frm quite long...it was nyc...bt i felt kriyaansh was a little less...nevermind...d way u r proceeding wid swaron,s part...its great...sharon is also giving it a chance,,,dats great...kriyaansh bike sequence was osum...bechara rey..har bar koi na koi aa jata hai...overall...gud jobšŸ‘continue soon nd thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
swaron part was lovely...
Kriyansh as always ek dum badiya...
Lykd their bike ride...
Awsome update..
Do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
both the chapter were just fabulous... loved it...
swayan and sharon start their talks and went on to know each other quite well...
and on this both rey and kriya have a šŸ˜† on their situation... and they are not left
alone in for kriya and rey because someone also inference in their between their mom or dad...
and their little cute and adorable moments on bike ... liked it a lot...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part...
Loved both part...
Swaron and kriyaansh...
Thanx for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful..
Loved the Swaron part..
Chai and biscut what should I say...
That epic

Loved beech walk

About Kriya ha ha ha Rey is teasing Kriya
And the bike ride uff..




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