Naina tere #2 Part 17- Page 121 Updated 20/7/14

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Aanchal singh

@Artistic_Stroke

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#501

bike riding aaye hayee mera favourite hobby but alas mereko koi nahi mila tha sikhane ko khud hi seekhna pada tha😭 but kria ia lucky😆

superb update

ye update toh fantastic tha

chal aur biscuit ki atoot prem kahani kya analyse kiya hai di

loved the whole update alot

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Soha

@-Soha-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#502

Awesome Update...👏

SwaRon part was Amazing...Swayam tou full on pagal ho gaya hai Sharon k pyaar mai...Biscuit aur Chaye..Wah wah...Inko bhi Lovers bana diya...Super job..

Everything was Fabulous in SwaRon part...Loved it..

KriYaansh...Loved how Rey was angry with Kriya...Kriya is becoming inseparable for him...You showed his feelings superbly...Their bike ride..Kia kahoon uske baare mai...Wow...Everything was so cute and adorable in "My KriYaansh" part😳

Two thumbs up for the update👍🏼👍🏼

Next time iss se lambi update chahiye mujhe..

With Love,

A fan of ur works...😃...Soha!

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Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#503

Amazing update..

Loved it..

SS part was sweet n cute.. I really liked it...

KR Part was awesome... loved the way rey was angry on kriya.. lol.. Kriyaansh were too adorable..

Loved it in all...

update soon

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k.sweet

@k.sweet

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#504

Amazing update

loved it😊

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#505

Supab update
love it
love each n every scene of update

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glmorous_diva

@glmorous_diva

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#506

superb update
swaron scene ws awsm
sharon ke mann mein swayam ke liye feeling aa rahi hai
kria litrelly laughing over swayam's situation..hahaaa..
loved der movie part a lottt.

now kriyansh
they were awsm
bichara kriya ko kiss karne jaa raha tha
pity rey ..bichare ko privacy milti hi nahi 🤣
whnevr he tries to kiss her..kabhi maa aa jati h..toh kbhi dad ka bulava.. :P
bike ride scene ws nice

loved it

Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago

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Neha

@Neha_KR

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#507

Awsum update
ss part was beautiful
Sharon has started developing her feelings for swayam
nd swayam lost in staring at her
loved kria nd swayam's phone convo
kria just laughed over swayam's silly behaviour
nd my fav KR scene was amazing
poor rey
jab bhi kria ko kiss karne ki try karta h koi na koi aa jata h bich me
nd bike scene was d best part of update
u just killed it
amazingly written
loved it

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#508

Freaking Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Marvelous

Swayam's behaving so cute :P Just staring at sharon n all

n den swayams call n reys reaction

hahahaha hilarious

Swaron were damn Awlaaah

Poor Rey

n Den the famous Bike ride was Super funn

Update Soon :)

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#509

awesome...loved kriyansh bike ride...swayum horror movies se kitna dartha hai...eagerly waiting 4 next part...pls update soon...

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#510

just have few words to say abt this ff its superb awesome romantic brilliantly penned during emotional scene n ur awesome writer wen it comes to emotions.. loved d whole ff.. didnt read it from chap 7 onwards so read from 1st to refresh n re-cherish KR moments ... literally in love with this work of urs... KR scenes d innocence d new found feelings n d beautiful after marriage love.. kria's takkar with shilpa n swayam-kria moments kria-sharon moments wo b during d time she called kria di n d scene wen swayam came to sleep with rey tellings its last time to sleep with him has he s getting married.. d understanding KR has rey feelings proud wen she handles swayam n d love rey has on swayam was nice... loved d way he was missing her n d portrait she drew n romance was al superbly penned.. loved d cute SS scenes where sharon started to acknowledge swayam's love for her n d cute things were awesome.. swayam afraid of horror movies n loved how u explained how swayam used to watch horror movies in between his strong protective bro's arms was superb.. loved it.. waiting for next part.. KR bike ride n d way u explained d romance was wow.. poor rey s not able to kiss kria some1 r other come n disturb them.. waiting for more sweet cute romanctic moments between KR n SS... update soon..

Ps: sorry for not commenting for this date was busy past fe months only now slowly being active... hope u understand..