Taarey os~~Do Dil Mil Rhe Hai Magar Chupke Chupke

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Heya Guys Me Back fr Irritating U Guys With my one more dare..sneha n toshi jitne os's maine aaj tak nhi likhe utne iss game ki vajah se likh rhi ho..that was awesome idea guys..thanks tamana azaan fr the dare...

Taarey os~~Do Dil Mil Rhe Hai Magar Chupke Chupke

Log pyar ko khuda
kehte hai.
Par koi kare to gunah
kehte hai.
Kahawat hai.,
"Patthar dil roya nahi
karte".
To fir pahado se hi
jharne q behte hai.

IN MUMBAI..

St. Louis..
the day was fr the new entry n every girl dressed at their best were standing near the door of the college waiting fr their so called "MR. PERFECT"..yes their mr.perfect..who was the dream of every girl..but that guys (mr.perfect ) was least interested in these chicks..who drooled over only his good looks .. he was still waiting fr the girl who will drool over his heart..n accept him with all his weak points n will complete him..
N Dere he Enterd..a black mercedes benz took a swift turn while the sand particles on the road were moving up due to the car's speed..the eyes of the all girls popped out waiting to see their mr. handsome...n then a boy opened the car's door , stepped his one leg out which showed his shiny polished black shoes while the taani were busy giving themselves the last touch up of make up..n he stepped out from the car..now he was shown from his shoes going up n up n up n finally his face,,..

every girl would go flat on him..because he had everything..good looks,dressing sense,rich,smart n hotness...but somewhere a pure heart which no one can see...
yes guys he was MR.REYAANSH SINGHANIYA..the most eligeble bachelor of the town..the prince charming of many girls..he looked like

n he moved forward..one step ..a step more..n the girls were waiting that he will see them once..but strangely this mr perfect didn't gave them a glance,..he went straight in the RH..
IN THE Rh...

a girl wearing a short t-shirt which showed her stomach a bit..n down a small short which covered her thighs was pacing from left to right..while a cute lover bot types boy was trying to stop her...

The Girl was MISS..SHARON RAIPRAKASH..(THE DIVA)

n the Guy was Mr.SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT..(the another craze of girls..)

(Swayam n sharon fr officially a couple..)

the whole team stood surrounding them...
rey was standing at the rh gate..n was getting nervous seeing her bff in so much anger...he knew what sharon can do when she was in anger..b today swayam also couldn't control her anger..first only he ws late fr practise aur agar sharon ne claas le li toh ek aur problem..
Sharon stopped seeing rey st the gate..

Rey's P.O.v..
yeh lo beta ek aur problem..rey beta turant bhaag ja varna bahut problem ho jayegi par agar bhaaga tab toh sharon aur gussa ho jayegi...ab kya karo ..i started bitting my nails in nervousness..
sharon came towards me..step by step...
it seemed like a angry bull comming..kya karo..?? kya karo..?? kuch samajh mein hi nhi aa rha..

"AAH",i shouted..as my bff hit me in my shoulder a tight puch..
i--sharon(making a puppy face)..
sharon--achcha har baar tum practice ke liye late aate ho..phir yeh puppy face banata aaj tumhara koi bhi bahana nhi chelega..mr.reyaansh singhaniya..
n she moved forward..hiting me when someone came between me n sharon..
i sighed in relief...
it was swayam..
swayam p.o.v..
isse kehte hai apne hi pair par kulahri marna..par main karta rey ko maar khate dekhta..
n sharon gave swayam a will kill you look..
swayam gulped his saliva..
sharon-swayam saamne se hato ..
swayam--sharon meri baat toh suno..
while sharon tried to move..when swayam stopped n immediately said;;
"I LOVE YOU"..
no one's p.o.v
these three words were the only thing which could make sharon blush anytime ...n yes sharon stopped at the same moment...a pink shade formed on her cheecks when she heard those three words..
n all boyz raised their hands in chemistry...while girls said "awww"..
rey--someone is blushing (teasing sharon)..
sharon--rey tumhe toh main..
when rey held her ears like a 2 year kid..n sharon was melted seeing the cute antics of his bff...
sharon--achcha chalo maaf kiya..
all--yaya...

then a voice was heard..a sweet melodious voice of a girll...that voice came from the Rh gate..
girl--so sweet..!!!
n everyone turned...
a girl was standing at the door..she had a silm figure..her curls were jumping up n down..while her dark eyes were sparkling with a vey rare shine..
Rey P.O.V..
i stood like a dumb..i was just numb seeing that girl who was she,,..??she was so beautiful..her eyes the deepest place in which i wanted to get lost...her nose a pefect slope..n her soft rosy lips..her long hand..her dress fitted her perfect making her look gorgeous.the most important thing her hairs which were coming on her face mking her look stunning..i was losing myself..a perfect creation of god..
i murmered in my dreamland--ANGEL !!!..
while sharon turned n looked towards me with a questioning look..i came out of my dreamland n nodded in nthing..
NO ONE'S P.O.V..
the girl was "MISS TAANI SHEKHWAT"...
taani's dress..

swayam shouted at the top of his voice..
swayam--Princess...
n he ran n hugged taani..she also hugged him back n they had a huge smile on their faces..while all were confused..except sharey..because rey was getting jelous...while sharon stood smiling..
rey(whispering to sharon)--tumhe koi prob nhi ho rhi tumraha bhai kisi aur ladki ke lage lag rha hai aur tum has rhi hoon..
sharon--mujhe koi prob nhi hai..
n rey stood getting more n more jealous seeing his angel hugging someone else..
n taayam broke the hugg..
sharon also came there..
swayam--tum yahan kya kar rhi ho..
taani(joking)..---achcha toh wapis chali jati hoon..
swayam--arey pagal mere matlb kaise kab..?
sharon--haan taani i mean tumne kuch bataya nhi..
rey--ohh !! toh miss.angel ka naam taani hai..
taani--wo bas aa gayi...
swayam--no prb..
n he again hugged n sharon was smiling seeing the duo..while rey he was burning with jealously..
vicky--swayam yeh kaun hai..
neha--haan neha also asking what babu asking..
swayam--yeh..
taani--wait a sec hero let me guess..
so yeh vicky hai..yeh neha ...simmi..nilesh..baharat..ashi..n then pointed towards rey..
aur yeh..rey's heart skipped a beat.
taani--reyaansh hai..right..
n rey smiled..
simi--par tum kaun ho..
taani smiled..
taani--main hero oh i mean swayam ki behan taani..
all--behan..
rey--ohh so yeh swayam ki behan hai thank god(thinking)..
sharon--hmm..yeh swayam ki behan hai..main isse pehli baar web chat par mili thi.she is awesome..just like my sis..
n she gave taani a side hug..while taani siled..
vp--sirf swayam ki behan nhi..n he entered the RH..
all--good morning sir..!!
vp--yeh tumlogo ki 10th dancer bhi hai..isliye tumlog as a team FOOTLOOSE mein part le sakte hoo..
all--what
taani--yes guys !!
shaorn--taani tune pehle kyu nhi bataya..
taani--mjhe bhi aaj pata chala..vp sir ko kahi se mere daning CD's mil gaye he selected me fr ur team..i hope koi prob nhi hai..
rey immediately..
rey--bilkul nhi.
taani looked towarrds him..n fr the first time she was lost in him..while their eyelock was broken by vp..both were blushing..rey ruffled his hairs..
vp--so i ll tke a leve..
n he left..
nilesh--welcum to our team taani..
bharat--bhailog meri taraf se bhi welcum..
while taani smiled..
taani--thank guys..
taani--hero mujhe apse kuch kehna tha..
swayam--haan bolo na..
taani--voh..voh..
swayam--kya hua !! kisine kuch kaha..
taani--nhi hero voh bas main chahti thi ki main hotel mein ruko..
n she closed her eyes on opening she saw..
a very angry swayam..
swayam--taani tune aisa soch bhi kaise liya ki main tujhe hotel mein rehne donga..haan aur kyu.??
taanii--hmm hmm..voh bas aise hi..,maine decide kar liya hai..bye mujhe kuch kaam hai..
n she tuned to leave while swayam held her hand n made her turn..
swayam--miss taani shekhawat aap mere saath hi rukh rhi hai n thats my order..
sharon--but taani tu swayam ke saath kyu nhi rukh rhi hai..
taani--bhabhi aap na isse janti nhi hai..merre phone par agar kisi ka phone aata hai toh yeh puchte hai kiska hai..koi milne aata hai toh pura investigation kar leta hai aur shopping karne jao toh mere saath kabhi nhi chalte...mujhe films nhi dekhne dete
all(excep sharey)---what !!!
taani--haan just imagine..
sharon--swayam what the hell is this >>??
swayam--tu main iska bhai hoon..aur films dekhne se bacho par bura asar padhta hai.. :D
sharon--fr god sake wo bachchi nhi hai..
swayam--mere liye hai..
sharon--so fyn aaj ke baad mere ghaar kabhi nhi aana mujhe call mat karna..na hi baat kyunki taani mere hi aga ki hai right..??
taani--gud one bhabhi..
sharon smiled..
swayam--tu meri behan hai ya uski..??
taani--unki..
n all started laughing..
swayam--achcha baba dne tujhe jo mann hai vo karna..
n taani hugged sharon..
taani--thank u thank u bhabhi i love you..n she started jumping like a kid..
while rey got lost in her cuteness in her angel..
swayam--toh taani ghar chale..
taani--nhi bhai aap jao man baad mein aaogi kuch documents bharne hai..
swayam--toh main bhi rokhta hoon..
taani--nhi bhai aap jao main aa jaungi.
rey--swayam taani ko main drop kar dunga..toh ja..
taani--haan bhai aap jao bhabhi ko drop kar do..
n she winked to sharon n sharon showed a thumps up..
eveyone left...while taani was in the office fillng some documents..rey was in Rh doing his GS work..
person--maam aap isse filll dar dijiye main khana kha kar aata hoonn..
n he left n taani was alone..
suddenly the lights went off..rey n taani bth stood up at their respective places..
taani(scared)--yeh lights ko kya ho gaya..
taani is afraid of darkness..
she started shivering..
rey--taani ko toh andhera se darr lagta hai sharon ne bataya tha...mujhe usse dekhna hoga n he ran towards office..
rey eneted the office..but due to lights he could see no one..
rey--taani..taani..
taani heard rey's voice..
taani--rey main yaha hoo..
n she started moving forward ..n in few secs.."CLASH"..!!!!!!!!!!!!!
n taani fell on rey ..rey held her protectively n they slide down while all the glitter fell on themm..

due to the moonlight..rey could see taani's face which was sparkling due to the glitter..they looked towards each other..n they were feeling a strong connections..rey felt a ectasy to touch taani..her angelic face..her pure heart..
outside the clouds started thundering n it started raining heavily..
Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo
Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo
Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo
Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo hearing thunder taani hugged rey tight..
taani--rey mujhe darr.lag rha.hai..
rey caressing her back..
rey--taani main hoo..tumhe darne ki koi zarurat nhi hai..
n taani felt assured hearing rey's words..he felt safe n uncomfortable in rey's arms..
taani broke the hugg..n tried to get up..but rey againg fell on her)

Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke
Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke
Sabhko Ho Rahi Hai
Haan Sabhko Ho Rahi Hai
Khabar Chupke Chupke
Ho O O O Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke (n rey fell on taani..they were too close..taani's breath started increasing..n her heartbeats could be herad by her..rey lifted his hands..removing her strands of hair which was coming on her face..taani shivered..she held rey's shirt tighlty..rey smiled seeing his effect on her..they bth started losing themselves..rey touched her face removing the glitter while taani shivered with his every touch..he touched her forehead ..eyes...cheecks..n then her lips..he started moving his fingers over her rosy lips..while taani closed her eyes..)


Sansoon Mein Badi Bekarari
Aankhoon Mein Kehi Rat Jage
Kanbhi Kanhi Lag Jaye Dil To
Kanhi Phir Dil Na Lagey
Apna Dil Main Zara Tham Loon
Jaadu Ka Main Ise Naam Doon
Jaadu Kar Raha Hai
Jaadu Kar Raha Hai
Asar Chupke Chupke
Do Dil Mil Rahe hain
Magar Chupke Chupke (rey leaned forward to kiss her but taani gained her senses..n quickly got up controling herself..while taani was avoiding eye contact with rey while rey was all time looking at taani..taani started moving out of the office when rey held her n pushed her..she came crashing his hard muscular chest..rey moved closer towards her shoulders)..

Aise Bhole Ban Kar Hain Baithe
Jaise Koi Baat Nahin
Sabh Kuch Nazar Aa Raha Hai
Din Hai Yeh Raat Nahin
Kya Hai Kuch Bhi Nahin Hai Agar
Hoton Pe Hai Khamoshi Magar
Baateen Kar Rahin Hain
Baateen Kar Rahin Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke
Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke (while he placed wet open mouth kisses on her shoulders n taani moaned..but soon taani moved forward..n went out of the office..n rey too followed her..
bth relised what was going to happen n were embarrased...
taani--i think hume chalna chahiye..(avoiding eye contact)
rey--main ghari ke paas hoon..tum aa jao)..

Kahin Aag Lagne Se Pehle
Uthta Hai Aisa Dhuaa
Jaisa Hai Idhar Ka Nazara O O
Vaisa Hi Udhar Ka Samaa
Dil Mein Kaise Kazag Si Jagi
Dono Jaalib Barabar Lagi
Dekho To Idhar Sebr Dekho To
Idhar Sebr Udhar Chupke Chupke
Zara Tasveer Se Tu Nikal Ke Saamne Aa
Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke (they reached the car n sat..rey turned the key to start the car but the car didn'tmove mking a strange sound..
rey--main check karta ho..
taani nodded in yes..
n rey checked the car n knew it needed a mechanic..
he came running..n was all wet in rain..
rey--taani humne padal chalna hoga..
taani--ohk wait a sec..)

Sabhko Ho Rahi Hai
Haan Sabhko Ho Rahi Hai
Khabar Chupke Chupke (taani went out n rey took out the umbrella which he was having in his car..he sheded it over taani but himself was getting wet in rain..
taani--rey aap bhi aa jeyie varna gile ho jayenge..
rey--no taani i am fine..
taani--rey maine kaha na..
n rey came in the umbrella rey kept his hand on taani's hand which was on umbrella..n stood close to her..under one umbrella)
Ho O O O Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain

Magar Chupke Chupke
Magar Chupke Chupke
Magar Chupke Chupke Um Hum Chupke Chupke
Ah Haa Chupke Chupke(n they moved towards taani's house..while they had their cute eye--locks in between)

they knocked the door..n swayam opened it..they bth eneterd..
swayam--yeh tum logo ko kya hua..
taani--bhai wo hum barish mein bheeng gaye..
rey--aur ghaari bhi garhab ho gayi..
swayam--achcha wo sab chodo taani tum change karlo..
taani--jee bhai n she turned to look towards rey..
n they had a small llhh...
n taani went in her room..
swayam bought a towel fr rey n after sometime rey left..
at 12 pm..taani received a message..
"TAANI I AM SRRY IF I HAVE HURTED YOU..
GOOD NIGHT
SWEET DREAMZ.."
---------from rey..

taani smiled reading the message..

taani--rey hurt toh hona chahti hoon par patanhi kyu khush ho..
n both stood at their windows..remembering what happened between them..n they glanced the moon who is said to be "the conveyer of love"..
That day was the beginning of something new..or i should say a new love story..pihl haal do dil rhe hai magar chupke chupke 😉

ENDS..

hope u all like it..srry if it was bad..chappals n tamatars r welcomed :D :D
plz hit lyke n comment..
swati

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Posted: 12 years ago
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1st aai
wt a mindblowng os
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me 2nd.That was a superb os!! loved taashayam part.😆🤣🤣 Loved how rey calls taani ' angel'😳😳 and loved taarey romance.😳😃😳 In short loved the whole os.😊😊
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wow ! wat an amazing os
loved taarey

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Wow, This one i loved it!!
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it was awsum dear...
i loved it... and u did a fab job...
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lovely lovely update song is perfect for each other ...
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i loved the begining intro part of each character ... on the whole it was a sweet os..thnx 4 d pm .. :)
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it was super cute 😊😊
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Amajing story swati dear 😳

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