Twin souls... part 17 page 82 (KR SS)

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Jyoti

@jyoti_arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Bribe.. ohkkk.. wotever u want ill give u.. bus ye aur short play jaldi update kar...
n amazing update
confuse rey.. n i like dat rey jst like d3..
confussion me kitna cute lagta h... in *rey's dreamland*
btw accha h.. shashi mom ne usse thoda sochne ko to kaha.. n i jst hate dis word good frnd huhh..
but seriously last portion well described.. i can imagine dat scene in front of me.. waiting for update n plz deee aaj hi kar de.. :-D

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Shanaya

@Lovelylavender

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Finally madam aapne update kiya!!!!!
Tweet kara scrap pm sab kuch!!!
Chalo koi nai!
Intezaar ka fruit mango hota h!! :p

Update ws super awesome!
Rey ke head me hamesha sab kuch ghusne me tym lagta h! Serial me bhi n yaha bhi!
Par chalo kriya bohot smart h!!
Shashi mom n mom!! I luv u both!!

Bas unki frienship and kriya ki understandin k liye ek bada wala
Awww!!
It was awwweeessaoommee!
Ab bada wala comment kiya!

Plz kal update dena..
Plzzz
Nai to kattti!! Lol!

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

That was wesome..

Really loved it...

Cute and sweet...

Bas ab ek chokre ko le aa beech mein..

Majjee aa jayegi... ^_^

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Sweet chapter
beautifully described..
Confused Rey is such a Cutie :*
I'm loving this SS even more now
jaldi update kar do please

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Epsss itne din baad
Twin soulsss 😳 😳

i m so happy
Should i cry or be happy for this
yaa
I m so waiting for this 😭

Thank god Deetha Devi finaly
aap ne update toh kiya 👏
i so loved it 😊
The whole part was awesome
Rey was fullon confused mood
hahaha 😆 😆

Mujhe toh aysa hi laga
Love rey convo wid her mother
kriyansh convo was amezingg
Like i all ways says
Deeth tu kamal h Seriously
u r an Amezing writer yr
loved it so much
next part k liye jayada wait mat kar bana plzzz
thanx for the pm

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alex754

@alex754

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Awesome update but feeling sad for kriya
I just wish rey also realises his feelings
I loved the way u described kriya and rey's feeling
The rey teasing part is sooo funny
Thanks for pm

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payal sood

@love_arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Awww!!!!!!!!!!!
so so cute update...
Loved rey's confusion ...
shashi mom and his mom both on one side confusing the poor rey xD
kriya in blue saree nd rey checking her out awsome...
rey purposly avoiding kriya calls nd msgs.
so cute.
update soon next part

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-Monika-

@-Monika-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

awesome...

rey avoided kriya..
very bad...

but loving his confusion wali condition..
shashi mom nd priya mom ne te aur halat khrab krdi bichare ki...
poor rey...

loved d garden scene..
ahmazin...

loved it how u described kriya's feelings
update soon... :)

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glmorous_diva

@glmorous_diva

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

amazing update
shashi mom and his mom both on one side confusing the poor soul
reys reaction when reys mom ask him about sandwich ws superb
confuse rey.. n i like dat rey jst like d3..
Kriya in a blue saree and rey checking her out 😆
bichari kriya...rey ke liye woh sirf bst frnd hai aur kuch nahi
Loved the garden scene and how u described the part of kriya's parents from her pov.

loved it
update soon