Twin souls... part 17 page 82 (KR SS)

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Deeth Sorry for late
Commenting yr
HMMM Comming to the update
part 7 & 8 Ek saath pada h mene

Lovely chapy ,... BUT the 8th part was mind blowinggg
Love the every word ... 👏
Deeth u allways Do great job
i loved ur work ... MMMUUUHHHAAA
For that
kriyansh ki story age bad rahi h 😳
i m so excited yrrr
post next part soon i m waitinggg 😃 😳

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Digangana Bose

@Duggu_ArSha

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#202

want an update

U wanted to update everyday, but aab kya hua?? 😕

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Its grt!!!
Rey n shashi ka bond is awesome!!!
Kriya n shashi ka convo 6ota tha!! Bt koi nai!!!
Kriya is feeling guilty again!! Sensitive bt efficient doc!!!
I loved it ol!!!
Rey ko uski 6oti 6oti details yaad hai!!!
Subah operation usko karna hai...par pick rey karega!!
I loved d line...iss dabbe mein sab ku6 pada rehta hai!!
V v nyc update!!!
Plz update soon!!!
N plz do pm me!!!

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pallavi.14

@pallavi.14

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#204

twin souls... naam sunke laga usual twins sibling stry hogi but then i got through and nope as usual u proved me wrong deetha..

Its something more than the normal...

Honestly I was flinching my nose when Rey and shweta were romancing in garden (don't worry not because of writing kharabi, just because of my minds takniki kharbai of expecting KR and KR and only KR..heights hai chod woh) but as I proceeded with the story in further parts I realized that it was wrong to judge book on face itself..

I loved this sensitive to emotions rey.. you know what i mean like anyother normal guy, no flashy cars, no rich billionaire or a heroic glance just a simple man who was in love and his love was lost..

the way you wrote his condition after or even before shweta died its connectable on many ways. I liked his sweet yet emotional quotient.

then their is Kriya on first u made it seem total kadak master style wala entry and i indeed loved that... I dunno whether this thing was shown earlier or not anywhere but for me i was reading it for the first time strict doctor kriya... i liked not liked infact loved that...

And then the way you described Kriya covering her feelings when shweta died and in her own cocoon of her grandparents she broke... that was really well written and described to the perfection.

I was hell shocked when you touched that drug abuse topic.. it is hard to shown in write ups and gal u perfectly carried that with pride i mean no offense to marl policing, the way Rey acted in vulnerability and his parents being helplss after that kriya taking over it like a true friend was superbly written to the point not even seeming vague that why Kriya was being forced to take his responsibility..
because the bond u showed at that point in Rey's room while she consoled him or what call counseled him to leave drugs was nicely done.. i liked it..

Ab ausa toh ho hi nahi sakta ki deetha stry likhe or ek baar bhi rey kriya ko support na karein... I was in awe the way he supported her or initiated her to confess about the birthday celebration thing.. you know the way best frnds do always types wala feeling aa raha tha... (hope u got what i mean)

Rey inni der hospital mein raha jab takk uss dusari ladki ka operation hua??? 😲 kaam nahi karta woh kya?? TV wale patti ki tarah na kariyo isko tu... 😆

waise i would love a free lance photographer Rey or a writer/ novelist Rey ummm or or kuch bhi bana le. teri stry hai mereko toh bas padne ko milni chahiye...

i love their short nok-jhok and frank wali frndship...its cute i am loving it with every chapter..😳

Fir aaye kahani mein re-entry wale pataar... i meant shweta's parents i thought ab koi dhamaka karegi deetha.. u know the usual type ki woh logg rey or kriya ki is new developed frdnship or jiss tarah se unke parents wedding ka soch rahe usko dekh ke kuch sunayege... but nahi why do i forget its deetha's style to do hatke job...

I really really loved shweta's mom's and rey's bond... she really got him well on letting him think about Kriya in more than a frnd way.. she did explained him beautifully about future with kriya... i honestly loved that part... A big hug to u for that... 🤗

And how can I forget about Kriya's self confession although she is covering it on face with a mask but i am glad u made it early to have her self accepted and that with a simple way.. uske character ko fit betha bilkul.. direct bola haan bhai she has fallen for him but not yet aloud...

Infact i am more surprised the when you showed that she carried it maturely by not making things awkward and happily playing a best frnd to rey..

Au kuch baaki reh gaya mera bolna?? agar kuch include nahi kara ho toh uske liye yeh... Its really wonderful deetha, quiet different, stable and handled more gracefully... although there are some punch of your essence in it... but you are going a matured way i guess with this..

I am loving this story with every new chapter of it...❤️
waiting for the next update and dont make wait longer...😈

Kidding take ur time and get ur fingers alright before u start typing next...😊

PS: bakwas lage comment toh khulke bolna because i am reviewing after a REALLY LONG TIME... and i should be given a punishment for that..😒

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Awesome hai

Back to back updates

em loving shwetha's parent's role in all dis

n update was a super sweet one wid some ahmazing kr teasing

it was funn

Love ;)

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#206

I just read the story and I love it :)

I really like how KriYaansh are each other's support and I love the friendship

W*F Rey started taking drugs :o

WOW Kriya is developing feelings for Rey...I hope this doesn't cause any problems in their friendship

Please continue soon...and please pm me when you update...I would love to read more

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: HR-DMG4life
I just read the story and I love it :)
I really like how KriYaansh are each other's support and I love the friendship
W*F Rey started taking drugs :o
WOW Kriya is developing feelings for Rey...I hope this doesn't cause any problems in their friendship
Please continue soon...and please pm me when you update...I would love to read more

New Reader!!!!! Yay!! Welcome!! 🤗

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sapnaarsha

@sapnaarsha

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Aap roz update karne vale the na?

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k.sweet

@k.sweet

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#209

amazing update

loved d convo b/w swethas mom n rey

kriya feeling guilty again

n liked the way rey irritates kriya

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love_swayam

@love_swayam

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#210

i'm a silent reader of ur writing corner
ur all stories are awsmmm n this 1 is superb
m egrly waiting to read ur updates of all othr stroies also
n plzz update this story frequently...:)

Edited by love_swayam - 11 years ago