ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 1 - COMPLETED - Page 32

nice dear😊

The update was mind blowing & thanks for the PM 😊

I admire the friendship Akash & Payal share with Arnav. They waiting for Arnav to open up, then listening to his plans & all ready to help him succeed even though Akash knew that it was really difficult to make a stand in the outer world full of competitions was well framed. Payal giving the money she had to help Arnav to start his business & telling him that she knew that the money she offered was too meager but still she wanting to help him shows her genuine friendship…….their friendship is a very beautiful bond 🤗

Khushi wanting to return to console Arnav & support him in the time of need but spending some time with NK so that she doesn't upset NK in their first meet & then rushing to Arnav was well written

Arnav trying to hide his feelings & being successful for quite a long time but then breaking down in front of Khushi & hugging her seeking solace in her arms & on the other hand Khushi confused a bit, a little hesitant to hug him back was amazingly narrated 👏

Payal telling Khushi that NK was like her father when Khushi asked Payal about her choice…..Payal saying so b'coz she felt bad for her friend who she knew had strong feelings towards Khushi was touching

Arnav shocked when Akash introduced NK as Khushi's boyfriend, his heart crumbling down so badly into glass pieces that can never be joined together & then his harsh attitude towards Khushi was excellently portrayed………Arnav asking Khushi to leave is totally justifiable….Arnav's pain was very well portrayed…..poor guy he lost his family & now he shattered as his love was also snatched away from him……a very heart wrenching scene

Loved Arnav's deal with Shashi...hmmm...guess astuteness runs in his blood

OMG!!! Khushi is quitting college 😲

Originally posted by: deepthiya

Well said dear. When I penned down that chapter, I didnt really wanted Khushi to be egoistic, at least she is not in my POV. She is baffled, confused why he reacted to her that way. One moment, he shared her pain and next he pushed her away. She is only 19yrs and she is already in love with other man before meeting Arnav. So Arnav is not her priority at the moment. And if you are in love with someone in that tender age, nothing seems to be very important. And Arnav is not his lover or best friend for her to go and mend things. From her POV, she thought he needed space to sort things out. She did expect apology from him; thats because she didnt think she did any mistake to hurt him personally. In the whole process, the distance grew between eventually...

Hope I made sense...I should have put her thoughts better way. i will be careful next time.

No dear, I thought you wrote this very well. I'm always thinking of alternative endings and scenarios; hence, I was thinking and looking at the situation from many angles. What if Khushi had done this and what if Arnav had said this etc etc. I had forgotten that Khushi is merely 19, still very young. Looking forward to the upcoming chapter. It would be interesting to know on what basis Khushi decides to leave college.

I'm sorry if you felt offended with my previous comment. Trust me, my intention wasn't to hurt you or to disrespect your work. It's just that when I read something that I tend to like, I get so involved in it that I start to analyse the situation and try to get into the minds of the characters. I guess I can become a tad enthusiastic.

excellent update thanks for pm & eagerly waiting for next

Originally posted by: Kaj!

No dear, I thought you wrote this very well. I'm always thinking of alternative endings and scenarios; hence, I was thinking and looking at the situation from many angles. What if Khushi had done this and what if Arnav had said this etc etc. I had forgotten that Khushi is merely 19, still very young. Looking forward to the upcoming chapter. It would be interesting to know on what basis Khushi decides to leave college.

I'm sorry if you felt offended with my previous comment. Trust me, my intention wasn't to hurt you or to disrespect your work. It's just that when I read something that I tend to like, I get so involved in it that I start to analyse the situation and try to get into the minds of the characters. I guess I can become a tad enthusiastic.

great update. please continue soon

awesome blossom update...feeling sad for arnav...waiting for more arshi moments...plzzz update soon...