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Posted: 12 years ago
arnav is soo much on pain...:-(:-(
aww khushi cares for her...
shashi seems a very nice man...
awesome update...
cant wait for nxt...
thnx for d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow... quite fast the story is progressing
khushi quitting colledge...why??


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey...

Super duper update...

Now we know why Arnie became ASR...

U wrote the chapter really well and it was easy to understand...

Feel sorry for Khushi and Arnav...Where is NK??? n Khushi called NK Arnav??? How did NK feel...

Loved the end...I really love shashi...

Precap: Khushi is quiting her college??? Why????

Do continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow ...
A massive change in personality going from arnie to ASR
I hope their friendship will remain

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Posted: 12 years ago
The way you described the scene where Khushi visits Arnav to console him and he loses control of his emotions and hugs her while crying seemed very real to me; it kind of reminded me of when Arnav had lost control of his emotions and cried with Anjali on the show.

Arnav is a broken soul right now. Having lost his family, being thrown out of his own home must have taken a toll on him. And the final nail in the coffin for him was to find out that Khushi has a boyfriend. Arnav feels somewhat betrayed by this. But then again, there was never any sort of commitment between the two of them. Unless he would have told her, how would she have known his feelings towards her?

The precap states that Khushi will be quitting college. Obviously still unaware of the reasons to why Khushi will be taking this step, but who knows, maybe the coldness from Arnav may have driven her away.

The part where Payal offers Arnav some money was very touching too- similar to a brother-sister relationship. It reminded me of my brother.

Arnav is very lucky to have great friends like Payal and Akash who are going to be with him through this difficult time. Khushi may still have been a part of Arnav's friends clan if she would probably have made an attempt to sort things out with him.

I know, he was rude and distanced himself in one moment all of a sudden, but Khushi refusing to make any contacts with him unless he apologises seem quite egoistic to me. She may not be an ego-centric girl, but she should have understood that something is definitely wrong for Arnav to have reacted like this.

Who knows, if Khushi had gone to speak to Arnav, he may have continued to be rude to her; but at least she'd have gotten to know the reason behind his anger, or maybe even gotten to know whether there is a proper prospect of friendship with Arnav anymore or not. But then again, it works both ways. Arnav shouldn't have pushed her away from him like this either. She went there to meet him because he means something to her. Arnav has been involved with girls before, then why has it become a crime for Khushi to have a boyfriend? Ah love can be complicated and how!

Ok I'll give it a rest now. I really enjoyed this part. The characters are very relateble.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow brilliant update...aaw poor Arnav found solace in Khushi and then destiny dropped a bomb under the name of NK...aaww Khushi is concerned about him even sends food...hehe she even called NK Arnav sometimes...cant wait for more
Jenny x
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesone update.. 😉
lets c whr life is going to take both of them.. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for answering my doubt .⭐️⭐️⭐️.but i think she can feel his love...not a problem ..i will wait for the update to see what will happen between them...😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kaj!

The way you described the scene where Khushi visits Arnav to console him and he loses control of his emotions and hugs her while crying seemed very real to me; it kind of reminded me of when Arnav had lost control of his emotions and cried with Anjali on the show.

Arnav is a broken soul right now. Having lost his family, being thrown out of his own home must have taken a toll on him. And the final nail in the coffin for him was to find out that Khushi has a boyfriend. Arnav feels somewhat betrayed by this. But then again, there was never any sort of commitment between the two of them. Unless he would have told her, how would she have known his feelings towards her?

The precap states that Khushi will be quitting college. Obviously still unaware of the reasons to why Khushi will be taking this step, but who knows, maybe the coldness from Arnav may have driven her away.

The part where Payal offers Arnav some money was very touching too- similar to a brother-sister relationship. It reminded me of my brother.

Arnav is very lucky to have great friends like Payal and Akash who are going to be with him through this difficult time. Khushi may still have been a part of Arnav's friends clan if she would probably have made an attempt to sort things out with him.

I know, he was rude and distanced himself in one moment all of a sudden, but Khushi refusing to make any contacts with him unless he apologises seem quite egoistic to me. She may not be an ego-centric girl, but she should have understood that something is definitely wrong for Arnav to have reacted like this.

Who knows, if Khushi had gone to speak to Arnav, he may have continued to be rude to her; but at least she'd have gotten to know the reason behind his anger, or maybe even gotten to know whether there is a proper prospect of friendship with Arnav anymore or not. But then again, it works both ways. Arnav shouldn't have pushed her away from him like this either. She went there to meet him because he means something to her. Arnav has been involved with girls before, then why has it become a crime for Khushi to have a boyfriend? Ah love can be complicated and how!

Ok I'll give it a rest now. I really enjoyed this part. The characters are very relateble.


Well said dear. When I penned down that chapter, I didnt really wanted Khushi to be egoistic, at least she is not in my POV. She is baffled, confused why he reacted to her that way. One moment, he shared her pain and next he pushed her away. She is only 19yrs and she is already in love with other man before meeting Arnav. So Arnav is not her priority at the moment. And if you are in love with someone in that tender age, nothing seems to be very important. And Arnav is not his lover or best friend for her to go and mend things. From her POV, she thought he needed space to sort things out. She did expect apology from him; thats because she didnt think she did any mistake to hurt him personally. In the whole process, the distance grew between eventually...

Hope I made sense...I should have put her thoughts better way. i will be careful next time.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Honestly speaking I couldn't fathom the guts or courage Arnav has at such a young age!
<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I often seen boys at that age are aggressive if rubbed in wrong way. He was shown door by everyone and he then decided he is going to do it alone. But when help came in form of Shashi, esp when he was least expecting, he thought it as joke and he is not willing to let anyone play jokes on him any further.
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Man that was point blank!! Dart board!! Hmm so khushi quits college because shashis job now permits him only 5% of his work??
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Khushi is going to quit college, because she is going to have fight with Shashi. Shashi will be working full time and Shashi will be paid 5% of the profits earned as per Arnav's clause.</font>
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Hey thanks for the clarification! Yup now I get a hang why he acted in that way! May be to not let people make a fool out of himself!! His defense mechanism! Hmm okay!

And about college alright I'll wait and watch for the fight to unfold :D

Cheers
Edited by TwilightStar_JP - 12 years ago

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