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premdewaani

@premdewaani

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#481

Wow that was such a cute and funny story.. Read all the chapters one one go.., nice one:-))

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#482

This was amazing! Felt the continuity throughout! Thx for this RB...you my Dear are very talented, your work is amazingly!

Please write an epilogue, if possible and Adaptation also is waiting for you!

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#483

No this can't be end, it's just a start of their love story officially.

Hilarious update

Oh God Khushi and her crazy antic, Her love for simplest things, her cute funniest poem and power to make Arnav stress free, relax and lively always has attracted Arnav and seduction lessons pushed Arnav to love.

The ending was very sweet.

I love this story.

I am going to miss this story a lot.

Edited by Javeria3991 - 11 years ago

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namita11

@namita11

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#484

Your work s are freking awesome

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sarahjac

@sarahjac

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#485

RB RB RB RB RB ...

Aaarbeee

Aaarbeee...

I can chant this forever.

A. You can not end it here...no please no...

B. I really really don't want you to think about continuity/story etc etc, what we have here are insanely hilarious < hold your stomach and die laughing types> chapters and I don't see anyone complaining. So whenever that wicked nerve in your head tickles, please come back here.

You are a gem and I am your fan :)

PS: That was such a beautiful poem, am getting all emotional here...*sniffs slightly*

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#486

Hey Buddy! Just caught up with this story and I've had a ball!! I just couldn't wipe off the grin from my face for even a second!! And to add on was me sitting and laughing my head off at these two every now and then!! And my sister would give me these weird looks *what's wrong with you?? It's post 00:00*

I slept with a smile!! Your work was just splendid! Its very rare that you find such amazing humorous genre!! Kudos to your sense of humor man!!

What was not funny in here? Silicon? Khushi and nani teaming up? Khushi using her boss to win her bets which were mostly on him and his life heheh!!

Her dictionary!! She needs a special mention for the same!! She's definitely one of a kind!! And case study over seduct-able!! Gawd Khushi!! Every time you just get better!!

Now to him!! When did he get so helpless? Heheh just gave into her demands albeit making some changes!! And his mind voice!! Those conversations are hilarious!! They were the icing on the cake!!

Though there was this one scene when I felt it was role reversals!! Usually it's Arnav who is on the verge of whacking is head when Khushi talks but it was Khushi when she was making terms with Shyam and Anjali!! And Shyam your now and then comments where hilarious too!!

And this is the end? I hope not!! You are kidding right part of the story theme right!! He he

Lovely man!!

Cheers

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StripePurple

@StripePurple

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#487

Finding the right underwear is definitely a divine grace at par with finding true love. NO questions asked.

Jarvis, with or without a sexy Brit accent, can never be in the same league as Jeeves. Arnav needs to read more and fangirl over RDJ a little less. That'd give his butler-toned-subconscious some serious issues.

Reading this makes me happy. Not that this comment is anywhere close to an ode, but...I hope it always stays this simple.