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Posted: 11 years ago
i thought it was end
but end is nt near

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bewuster

i thought it was end
but end is nt near



No, this is pretty much the end. :=)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Haha Khushi is crazy writing poem about panties and hmm so this was all a bet with good results in the end

Would love to read an epilogue if possible maybe sure?
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Posted: 11 years ago
You are crazy! You can only come up with such an end to this story. But epilogue banta hai! Will there be any sanity in their relationship?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: addictedx53

You are crazy! You can only come up with such an end to this story. But epilogue banta hai! Will there be any sanity in their relationship?



Meh...whats fun in being sane! She is insane and he is smitten idiot. Her insanity is his mojo. :=)
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Posted: 11 years ago
In simplicity there is joy. Especially when we're talking underwear. And love. Who knew there'd be parallels between the two! But it's not surprising, they are the two most important things in life, one cannot live without either of them.

Pure gold, that poem! Most poignant, I say !

Brilliant. I am happy this may not be the ending 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
"I had so much fun in writing the way I usually speak. No pretentious dialogues or long winded sentences."


^^^Oh how I love reading a story that has none of the above!
RB I know I must sound like a broken record but you totally do rock! Even your A/N had me laughing my head off. We can only expect an ending like this from you! Khushi bringing up the panties she has just discovered and quite easily mentioning it to her boss aka BFF was hilarious. Oh then there was her poem about them! 😆👏

What can I say, I don't think there is anything I can say to do justice to how much I have enjoyed this journey of a Whacky crazy Khushi and an equally crazy ASR and his wonderful Jarvis! I think I fell for his subconscious more than him, how I loved his douchebag curses among the list of other curses for Arnav and every other suggestive dialogue that was uttered by him. The war of Wits between ASR and his subconscious will always stay with me. As far as Khushi is concerned, how can one forget this Khushi, I think you gave crazy a whole new definition with this portrayal of her character.

The ending was unconventional yet brilliant! Thank you, thank you for providing us with a whole lot of laughter and an escape from our hectic ADs. I am hoping that there will be an epilogue here as it will be hard for me to let go of this mad, mad journey of ASR and his secretary aka BFF aka Love interest aka what not! ;-)


Edited by Arshix144 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
It all began with silicone and ended with perfect panties...could we have had anything more unique?😆
I'm still surprised Arnav garnered the courage to say that he likes Khushi. No, I'm not being demeaning to him or trying to piss off his subconscious (which I think is already on the road to the same). For me it is about Khushi. That she took it too well...I'm suspecting the meaning of what he said to hit her soon...and then ka-boom! 😆

Anyways, I wish him all the best😉

And cheers to the new poetess on the block!

As for coda, epilogue, etc. I don't mind both; anything for continuing this one beyond chapter 10
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was such an enjoyable read...I just loved it. Can't tell you how much I laughed, just finished reading all the chapters and I can't believe you ended it so soon. I'm truly amazed at your talent, so many different genres written so well and seems so effortless. Please write more, I'm so glad I discovered your works.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww such a cute ending...but wait!! This can't be it!! Where is the kiss?? C'mon we need that after all those crazy Khushi antics.,,arnav needs to finally kiss her, that too with Jarvis giving him a live commentary! Pretty please with a cherry on top!?

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