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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#491

part 10
last part
awesome dear...
excellent...
damn that was so hilarious...
just loved it...
yaar why are u ending this?
would love to read more on this dear...

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#492

Awesome story

Total Hilarious..😆

Sad it was ended

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#493

I'm with Khushi all the way and her ode to the perfect panties was simply that...perfect 😆

RB, who cares about loopholes, plot, characterisation and the lot when you made us laugh hard...harder...hardest with this mad little tale. I remember thinking logically during the first two chapters and then said to myself..."screw logic. Time to have fun." Thank you.

Mad Khushi, intelligent, tolerant Arnav and his mad subconscious and the hilariousness of this story ...I enjoyed thoroughly.

Coda/epilogue...will wait for you 😃

P.S - See, you finished this story on Twiggy's insistence. I may not know you as well as she does, so a persistent request (instead of insistence)...Please continue

The Noob and The Thoughtful.

Pretty please

Edited by AquaSandhya - 11 years ago

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Anukriti

@psychofool

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#494

an ode to panties...are you for real...how do you manage to write such drastically different things...if there is one writer on if whom i want to meet in real life its you...i can't even laugh properly i have a sore throat and its paining badly

god bless

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palaayan

@palaayan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#495

Having read this in its entirety today, if there is one thing I wish to say is that you really are a master of your craft RB. Your ability to morph and adapt your narration style so effortlessly to tell a story is frankly amazing. And waves and particles may have loopholes the size of the Atlantic Ocean, but do you know what? I love it all the more because of it. At the end of it all I'm a 90's kid and there is no denying that I love nonsensical romantic stories, it was the staple food of my childhood.Awesome story RB, exactly what my racing mind needed today - thank you :)

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fatima2603

@fatima2603

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#496

I have a new found respect for jarvis...he rocks! Hope there is an epilogue...would love to read a khushi and arnav further in their new relationship

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#497

A complete riot...laughed my guts out!

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#498

This didn't feel like the end AT ALL. I am going to use my influence on Twiggy and make her force you to write an epilogue 😃

Meanwhile res

Edited:

Whattay face palm story...

What is Khushi doing reading all those fan fics and watching all those shows if she cant make a move on her hot boss, Arnav??

Khushi toh hain hi lunatic. Arnav what is wrong with you? Till the end of the story you are still contemplating whether you want to confess or not???

These two practically live with each other, his office, his room, even under his blanket and only waver towards the non-platonic when they want to work on a case study???

His entire family loves Khushi and trusts her with Arnav... What is wrong with these two??

RB can you blame me for wanting a proper closure after face palming so much??

I was actually hungry while reading this story and you mentioned so much of desserts! This Khushi is close to my heart. Loves desserts and hates numbers... 😛

After reading about all the food deals please tell me how ArHi finalized the most important deal of their lives... Please... Please tell me how did the waves from Arnav's ocean sweep off the random particles of Khushi's heart and brain

Arnav's subconscious was evil 😈 But what is Khushi's perspective???

The entire story was funny, with digs at the forum, tv shows, characters and characterizations, fan fics being the funniest...

Meko mazaa aaya padh kar. 😃

Ab ek epilogue de de. Please 😳

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago

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Nikita

@zoobie-doobie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#499

Just came across this hilarious little story...

Kinda insomniac i am , so started reading it at 2 in the morning , and all i did till the wee hours of the morning was laugh and laugh...and then laugh some more.!!

My mom came to my room thrice , screaming at me for laughing so loudly that it could be heard throughout all the floors..!! 🤣

An absolutely brilliant writer you are. Each and every part of the SS was beyond amazing and i have to say that the humor was very intelligently penned down.

And i have no words to say about the characters...

They were astonishingly amusing and so so so cool ! Both Arnav and Khushi were nut cases...yup Khushi was a level higher in her insanity , but liker seriously...both were big lunatics 😆

Loved every bit of the SS dude !

Simply mind blowing 😃

Edited by zoobie-doobie - 11 years ago