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saavan_lover

@saavan_lover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Great start! Dont get discouraged if peope are not commenting, you will get your due respect soon because you're a really good writer :)

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crizal

@crizal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Res ...will unres later ; D

thanx to harhem dii fr telling :*

Unres

aww don't b disappointed dear...u r doing well 👏
n regarding update ...it was nyc starting 😛
They feeling smthing fr each other...aww ...it was sweet how u described it 😳
U were asking abt tat ki to truly tell u abt d stry ..well I don't criticize anybody work even if told by tat sm person 😆 but I want to tell u just go slow ..kkiiee its my opinion nt criticism ... it just I like slow love stories (hatred filled 😆 Heheh I just little crazy ) but just go hw u planned it.
Best of luck fr story 😛
Sry fr late commenting but I just off frm IF 😉
Byeee take care n don't b disappointed ever 😊

Edited by crizal - 12 years ago

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cherrybloom1

@cherrybloom1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: stories.1408
read both d updates just nw.loved d story esp their reaction towards each other nd longing to meet.wanna know more about guptas esp their background.y were they against their daughters delhi stay...plz continue soon

about the guptas not wanting to let their daughters live in delhi is no big thing. its just that they didnt want to make their daughters live alone in such a big city. they were only concerned about them. but since u have mentioned this i am guessing some ppl will be wanting to knw abt the same so ill make sure to write a little about it in my future updates.😊

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cherrybloom1

@cherrybloom1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

NOTE

Hi to all those readers who read my story and liked it. I cant even tell you how glad I am after reading all your comments. So I have school beginning next week and so I am planning to give you all as many updates as possible since I would need about 2-3 updates to introduce you to all the characters, and I'm planning to do that in the next few days. I am thinking of about 1 chapter a day but I really cannot promise as I have all my homework pending which I would have to do alongside. So I guess I would be able to give you about 4 chapters in the next 6 days.

Also one of my reader wanted to know about why the Gupta's did not want to send their daughters to Delhi, so about that its actually nothing big, considering they are from a small town they were only scared for their daughters safety and i will make sure to mention that in the next few chapters.

Now coming to my story I would like to make it clear that i am not very fond of things like misunderstandings so as of now my story is going to be extremely smooth and I'm going to keep is as close to reality as possible.

So thats it for now.

Thank you again for reading and appreciating my story.

Edited by cherrybloom1 - 12 years ago

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Nisha

@Nichuss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

@cherryblossom...

nice start...

loved the first sight love...waiting for further

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cherrybloom1

@cherrybloom1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Nichuss
nice start...

arnie fallen on seeing khushi...first sight love

i didnt get that akhi matter...khushi meeting akhi or payal meeting akhi...

waiting for upcoming parts...

well im sorry bt i dont knw who AKHI is and if by akhi u mean aakash...then well i was trying to say that akash and payal are dating and by khushi getting the job they dont have to go bak to lucknow which just means that payal doesnt have to get seperated from aakash. tell me if i have gotten ur question correct!