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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Arshix144

Wow what a beautifully written chapter, as Arnav and Khushi were impressing each other with their language skills you were impressing us all with your writing skills! I am grinning from ear to ear, absolutely loved it! They are getting comfortable with eachother and that too at 3.50 am.😆 It appears as though you wrote this chapter particularly to suit the new tittle as both arnav and khushi were doing the smooth talking ;) I like I like 😃

Bring on the next chapter, appreciate the PM! 😊


^^^ You are being very modest my dear with the skills you are exhibiting already I am sure you will be able to portray any kind of character because the subtle, mature and relate-able characters are much harder to pen down than the dramatized ones. (As you can gather I haven't been fond of some of the stuff that I have read😉)


Haha. I wasn't really thinking about the update...i changed it on a whim...STS sounded a bit more fun? 😆

I'm more comfortable when I write comedy( or at least what I think is funny😛) and then as I begin to draft updates I laugh to myself. But I'm having this insane urge to poke my toe out of the line and try experimenting with angst...Let's see how that goes!😆

Thank you for commenting! :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: massu91

its d story mysterious??

becz wenever i read i gt dat feeling


n ofcorse want to knw khushis past


Mysterious...not really. Wait for it to unfold.. :p Thank you for commenting!

Originally posted by: ShikhaKhushi

Aww that was just so cute!!! So, both are insomniacs, then?


Thank you! Yes, it would appear so. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Enchante

Woot, woot! New update! :D



I'm so happy with their conversation, the easy confluence of their chat points to one thing only- the remarkable ease with which they bond. I can tell you the instant, mark it any time you ask me to, where it all changed, I could literally see it. Arnav's pull towards Khushi...two magnets drawing closer. That's how it's done. Really good work. Update soon like you always do. :-)

PS-I agree with your latent, though easily perceived view- French is overrated, it's German that's got the bang. Yes, I read your mind. Cheers!😉


It's my long lost sister, from another mister! Who it turns out is also an awesome psychic. Was my distaste that evident?Uh...I didn't want the bitterness to creep in. 😛Oh well. German's awesome! Thank you for commenting, though you fulfill your duty! :P :P
Edited by -Delilah- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: -Catharsis

I'm back. Like I said. O:)

I loved the update, firstly cause of the easy banter between Khushi amd Arnav and his attraction for each other. My hearts starting to flutter again...in a good, good way. Update soon! :)


Haha. Thanks! :)


I'll try. :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
I really like this story! Thanks for the PMs, I read all of the chapters in one go :D I really like the way the story is playing out, although it is way different than the standard Arnav Khushi plotline! I think at the moment Arjun is my favorite character-I would have loved for Khushi to have an actual brother in the show! Not seeing Arnav and Khushi characteristics in your Arnav and Khushi, but can't wait to see how you'll play them out! BTW, the stalker scene was AWESOME :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Really nice concept and different story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Really funny chapter...i used to mimickery of my cousin when she was teaching 🤣 lnved it...khushi got another reason to say sorry...thanx for pm
Edited by Chocolate_barun - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Anddd it's my long lost sister, from another mister back again after a short detour! I loved this update...it's different from the previous updates as the tone here is playful and fun which I like better than angst any day! :P

Maybe because this update emphasized primarily on Khushi's interaction with Lavanya and Arjun? We unravel a new face of Khushi and I think I'm starting to fall in love with her. Lead with spunk? Hell Yeah. Bring it on! XD

Edited by Enchante - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Hahahaha! Lovely update as usual...excited to see how lavanya embarrasses khushi 😆
Edited by -Catharsis - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is really good! Read it all in one go, loved it!

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