||BIN TERE KYA HAI JINA || : TR OS

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Hey guyzz here I start my first OS and this one I dedicate to Raveena(raveena1)……Who has challenged me in the game of TaaRey : ||~ Euphonies of TaaRey ~|| ……So Raveena I thank u for challenging me…..and from the situation which u gave I really got this idea into my the very second and I have put it here into an OS…..Hope everyone will like it and we the Pandas team will get the score…..So here u go with the OS….enjoy..


||BIN TERE KYA HAI JINA ||

It was a day before NDC finals…..Yes guyzz our D3 team reached to finals and had worked really hard to win the competition…..Now Swayam is also totally fine….His hand is working really well….And Swaron are together….The day when Swayam dint allow her to touch him remembering the medical room sequence, Sharon was now really not able to control herself and she confessed her love to him….He too accepted it and now they are happy couple….But still they are concerned about Rey and Taani cause now between them the gap is becoming more and more…..Taani was really ignoring him….Or else sometimes go against him….The day before NDC finals….Everyone had practiced a lot and in the Evening all left to their home so that to have rest….But Rey dint went as he was really sad and hurt by the fact that now Tani is ignoring him….

He was sitting in the rehersal hall remembering all his good and bad memories with Taani….He was so much shattered that tears also no more wanted to hide in his eyes…..Tears were continuously flowing from his eyes showing all the pain and hurt he suffered…."I'm….I'm really sorry Taani…..Main tumhe hurt nahi karna cahta tha tumse breakup karke….Balki main toh ye cahta tha kit um mere upar se apna dhyan hata ke apne carrier pe concentrate karo……Ye breakup temporary tha Taani…..Main tumhe apne aap se dur dekhke main nahi jee pa raha hun Taani…..But…But I promise jab tum apne carrier me totally focus karne lagogi main tumhe sab sach bata unga and I know tum maan jaogi…..I'm really sorry Taani to hurt u…" He said all this crying…..But he was unaware of the fact that someone has heard him saying all this…..She was really shocked to listen all this….She never expected that his love will choose this step to make her realize importance of carrier…She was hurt now…Tears were continuously flowing from her eyes…..She was standing in the entrance near the door….When she heard all this she was not able to stand properly so she slid on the door which made a sound and listening to the sound Rey saw at the entrance and was shocked to see Taani there……He soon stood up from his place and wanted to say something…..But before he could say anything Taani went from there totally hurt…….

Now Rey was worried that what she will do after listening to all this……Will she forgiv him???Or will she hate him more????All these questions were running in his mind……He tried to find her but he dint…..Tried to contact her but she was not answering his calls…..She was ignoring him more now…….Rey really wanted to talk to her but he couldn't…….Swayam and Sharon also came to know about it……Swayam wanted to talk to her about it but she always changed the topic…..That night nor Rey neither Taani slept…..Rey was thinking of the consequences and Taani was thinking of ignoring him more…..

Now the day of finale came……All reached the venue on time….Rey have relly tried a lot to talk to her but she ignored him……Now gang also saw this and were confused that what would have happened between both of them…..But this thought of them was soon replaced by the nervousness for the competition…..In the green room all soon got ready and were waiting for their turn…..Taani came to them.."So guyzz aaj aap logo ke finals hai…..Mujhe pata hai aap log apna best denge aur aap hi log jeetenge….So all the best guyzz…"saying this Taani hugged everyone but not Rey…..She ignorned him…."Thanxx a lot Taani…..we neede it"gang said…..Now their turn came and they performed really well……Finally when the results were announced it was the St. Louis team who was winner…..All were really happy but our Rey was not as Taani was ignoring him…..They took their trophy and went back to their college were VP sir was waiting for them…."So guyzz at last u all did it….Its really nice that our college won this competition…" All were cheering and hooting from back.."So aaj jeet ki khushi me our college have planned a campfire for our dance team…."VP sir said this and the whole gang was really happy….."So guyzz the campfire is today in the evening…and it will be really enjoying for u all….Be on time for the campfire which is specially for u all"Saying this VP sir left the placing leaving the overjoyed team back….."PARTY PARTY PARTY……..PARTYYY!!!WOOO!!!"the whole gang cheered……Now Rey got a plan….."WOW!!Its such a nice opportunity for me……Aaj toh main Taani ko kisi bhi haal me mana ke hi rahunga…"he was in his thoughts and smiling…..Swayam saw him and came to him"I guess mujhe pata hai ki tu kya plan kar raha hai.."Rey came to his sense hearing Swayam and said smiling"Aaj toh main Taani ko mana ke hi rahunga Swayam cahe kuch bhi ho jaye"…."I know…..So all the best for it…."Swayam said this and hugged him….Rey also hugged him back…All left to their home for getting ready for the campfire…..

It was evening time now…..Time for campfire……All the boys have already reached the venue and were waiting girls…..Rey was also present and he was really looking dashing…..He was waiting for his lady love….."Yaar ye girls ko kitna time lagta hai yar tayar hone me.."Vicky said tired of waiting…"Haa yaar aaj tak kabhi bhi ye ladkiya time paar nahi aayi.."Nil said supporting Vicky…"Aur kitna hamara bheja garam karengi be ye log"Bharat said totally irritated…."Guyzzz shant ho jao aa jayengi……"Swayam said calming down all the boys…"See aagaye girls…"Swayam said….He saw Sharon who was looking out of the world…..He was totally lost in her and was not able to remove his eyes from her…..When the gang saw him they all coughed bringing both Swaron to the real world….Taani was not there with girls so Rey went to Sharon and asked.."Sharon…Taani kaha hai??voh tum logo ke saath nahi aayi kya??"…Sharon understood his impatence and said.."Rey firstly so u calm down….Voh hamare saath hi aayi hai actually use ek urgent call aaya toh vo attend karne rukh gayi….She will be back……Oh see she came"…She said when she saw Taani coming towards them…..Rey soon saw at the side from where Taani as coming….He was amazed to see Taani in the totally different outfit…..He was lost in her….Taani came and stood beside all the girls and wished everyone….Than only she saw that Rey was starring at her…..She ignored him and started talking with the girls….Seeing Taani ignoring him Rey came back to his sense….

Soon the campfire started and everyone was enjoying…..Swaron were totally lost in each other….Here Vicky wanted to stay away from Neha but she was behind him only…..And all others were busy in playing pranks on each other….But our hero Rey was really restless cause when ever he wants to talk to Taani she ignores him…..Now Rey was hurt a lot so he started sings a song dedicating it to Taani and making everyone look at him…..He started the song looking at Taani….

Bin Tere Kya Hai Jeena… (2)(Listening to him Taani turned towards him and saw Rey starring her)
Mere Dil Ki Raani Tum
Meri Khushiyon Ka Mausam
Mere Khwaabon Ki Taavir
Mere Sapanon Ki Tasveer
Bin Tere Kaisi Aas
Woh Jeet Ho Ya Haar
Tere Sang Hai Sab Kuchh
Tu Na Ho Toh Bekaar
Bin Tere Kya Hai Jeena … (2)

(Now Rey had tears in his eyes…..Taani saw it and was not able to control her tears so she turned from the gang and tears started flowing from her eyes…..She wiped them off so that no one can see it……Now gang enjoyed the song and each couple were doing couple dance with each other….Here Rey continued moving Towards Taani)

Suni Khaali Raaten
Ruthi Feeki Baaten
Har Aahat Pe Chaaukun
Tujhko Harsu Dekhu
Tujhko Hardam Sochu
Tujhko Har Pal Chahu
Tere Bin Toh Jeevan Mera Hai Intezaar
Bin Tere Kya Hai Jeena … (2)

(Seeing Rey coming towards her Taani also started walking so that Rey couldn't reach her…..Others were so lost in each other to look towards them…..)

Tere Saath Jiye Jo Pal
Kuchh Unse Nahi Badhkar
Tere Khaatir Saans Main Loon
Teri Khaatir Jeeta Hoon
Marne Ki Tamanna Bhi
Tere Saath Main Rakhta Hoon
Tu Hai Jeene Ki Wajah
Kar Mera Aitbaar
Bin Tere Kya Hai Jeena... (4)

Rey completed the song but our other couple were still lost in each other…….When Rey completed the song Taani was now not at all able to control herself so she ran from there to a place she could be alone and cry her heart out…..Rey saw her running from there so he too followed her…..Taani stopped at a place where it was totally peace and surroundings ws full of nature…..She came there and started crying not able to control herself….She sat down on her knees…..Rey came from behind and saw her crying there….Tears were also formed in his eyes….He was not able to see her like that….He moved towards her and kept his hands on her shoulder…..Feeling a familiar touch on her shoulder she looked up and saw him standing there….He saw here eyes full of tears….She stood and started to leave from there so that she cannot talk to him….But Rey stopped her catching her wrist …."Rey plzz mera haath chodiye mujhe aapse kuch baath nahi karni hai.."She said in stern voice…."Kyun chodun Taani…….Tum mujhe kyun ignore kar rahi ho Taani"He asked her making her come infront of him…."Yahi toh cahte the na aap Rey….toh ab aapko kya problem hai..??"She said looking straight in his eyes…He can see pain,hurt in her eyes….She can also see the same in his eyes…"Kya tumhe sach me lagta hai Taani ki main tumhe mujhe ignore karte huve dekh sakta hun..??"Rey said totally hurt…"Haan…."She said looking straight in his eyes…."Haan mujhe lagta hai……kyunki agar aap ye nahi cahte na toh aap mre se break up kabhi nahi karte chahe vo temporary hi kyun na ho.."…."Taani maine tumse breakup tumhari bhalai ke liye ki hai….taki tum apne carrier ke bare me soch sako.."He said making her understand…."Agar aapko meri carrier ki itni hi chinta hai toh aap mujhse aake baath bhi kar sakte the Rey…"Taani said letting her pain out of her heart…."Uss samay tum uss state me nahi thi kit um kisi ki baath sun sako….Tum puri tarah aapni duniya me kho gait hi Taani…..tumhe ek jhatke ki jarurath thi…"At last Rey said it…."Par ek baar toh mere se baath kar sakte the kya pata main sun leti….Kya aapko pata hai main kitna hurt huvi hun..??"Taani said all this calmly in a soft tone…."Mujhe pata hai Taani kit um bahut hurt huvi ho but trust me tumse jyada main hurt huva hun ye jate huve ki main tumhe intentionally hurt kar raha hun……Muje pata hai maine bahut hurt kiya hai tumhe….tum mujhe maar lo par plzz mujhe ignore maat karo…"He said….took her hand and started beating himself….Now Taani was not able to control herself…She took her hand back and hugged him tightly…..Tears were flowing from both's eyes…..He was first shocked but soon recovered and hugged her back tightly withdrawing all the love he had for her in it….

The hug was for a long time……After that Rey broke the hug and took her face between his palm…..He started kissing her on her forehead, her eyes, her checks and nose…..He saw her, her eyes were tightly closed…..Now he saw her lips which were shivering cause of his touch…..In no time he sealed her lips with his….First he kissed her softly….Taani was shocked but soon recovered and responded back…..They kissed each other passionately….He held her from her waist and Taani moved her hand into his hairs…..They kissed each other so passionately making each other feel that how much they loved each other…..They kissed each other for 10 minutes…..When Taani felt short of breath she clutch his hair……He understood that she was out of her breath and broke the kiss….And leaned his head on hers….."I love u Taani…."…"I love u too Rey"…And they both smied and hugged each other…..

So Here I end my OS….

Its really too long……So I hope I reached to ur expectation Raveena…..

Do like and comment everyone plzzz….It took 3 hours for me to write…

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow,I liked the TaaRey part, rey singing song for taani touched my heart.And that last TaaRey part was just awesome.😳
It was a dare, Hehe... Best of luck for you and your team.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nvr expect an entry in the lazy club ok🤣...gosh u made an os so fast...will unres soon...lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's a Great start to the thread...I loved it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved It ... Glad You Did It Fast ! It's A Fantastic Start To The New Game !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oww this ws really superb...great jov 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing os really loved it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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well that was really fast...
and i absolutely loved it =)
it was realy awesome =)
taarey <3
hehe =D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nicely written. I love the way how you describe everything so perfectly. Wish this happens on the show. Again great job 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...it was really amazing...gr8 job... 😊😊

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