Arhi FF: The Matchmaker #3

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PARVATHY44

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Posted: 12 years ago

#501

wow awesome.thanks 4 the pm

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Afya

@Afya

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#502

Originally posted by: KreyaArshiLover
Awesome ff, Shyam yuck he disgust me!!🤢

Thanks dear. Welcome to the FF!

Shyam indeed is disgusting.

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Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#503

Originally posted by: frenzyy
awsum one.. read al in one go!! hope shyam doesnt plan anything stupid... plz pm wen u update!

Thanks dear. That's sweet of you to read it all in one go. Even I haven't done that. Does the story flow smoothly from one part to the other?

Welcome to the FF!

Will PM you.

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#504

Originally posted by: Afya

Thanks dear. That's sweet of you to read it all in one go. Even I haven't done that. Does the story flow smoothly from one part to the other?

Welcome to the FF!
Will PM you.

THe flow was very smooth throughout.. loved reading it.. waiting for the next part eagerly

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#505

Yay Khushi is realizing there is more to Arnav

And ugh Shyam

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#506

Phew...Done finished.

I have finally caught up. Chaine ki saans at that.

Wonderful Afya. I loved this alternative IPKKND that you have created, with the essence remaining almost the same.

But what i want to really applaud is the fact the way you have blended most of the scenes in your update so effortlessly.

To write the story is one thing but to give a little visual about it, is amazing and when we get to see BS and SI once again, its sheer magic.

So let me really applaud you for taking so much of trouble to get the apt scenes for the update.

I loved the twist you have given in the story...about arnav being forced to marry khushi and the reasons behind it.

It almost seems like an IPK2 to me.

Maybe if they were to come up with a Season 2 they would have also followed a story line like this to do justice to the whole Nafrat and Mohabbat theme.

I just love this khushi. She is modern and traditional at the same time. With all the correct values and morals. But what makes me admire her is the fact that she is not sitting in a corner crying away to glory about what fate has meted out to her but is standing on her own 2 feet so that tomorrow when she has no one she could live in dignity and take care of the family at the same time.

Arnav i am a bit disappointed with him...He is clearly not fulfilling his mom's last wish. I am sure she wanted him to live a happy married life not just marry khushi for the sake of it so that he can leave her after some months. But i am sure that you will totally redeem him cause after all we have always fallen in love with a confused doesn't know what to do with his feelings Raizada.

So i am geared Afya and i want to know how the process of falling in love will begin...since already dhak dhak and feeling each others presence have made an appearance. 😃

Looking forward to the next update.

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#507

And forgot to mention...

Shyam i hate him...but i am willing to tolerate him if he ends up being a cupid with all his stupid dumb plans.

But paleez paleez don't get the same MU. Mai seh nahi paoongi.

Let shyam lust after Khushi but let Arnav know the truth, so that together they can fight that bas***d and throw him out of di's life and it will also give them lot of chance to rabba ve...