Arhi FF: The Matchmaker #3 - Page 49

update my comment on pg 53

Originally posted by: IPKKNDfan4ever

Arnav s starting to be more understanding...and i loved it !...

he stayed away from the Guptas without hurting them in any way...

dats really nice :)))

NK and Akash part was awesome ! =D

lol blushing Akash 😆

omg Khushi s dress for the show was AMAZING !...

really loved the sister part... Payal was feeling so proud of Khushi

urrghhh dat creep was nearby !!...😡

aww like it when Khushi left a msg for Arnav dat she'll be at her mother s place...

Arnav s dreadful past 😭😭

typical Khushi was feeling happy to have the whole bed for herself !😆

Khushi felt Arnav coming

Khushi entangled in lights and Arnav making her wear the Payal was soo beautiful !!!!!!!!!!!!...

thanks for those vids =DD

LOVED the update :)))))))

Originally posted by: pakpearl

Afya...

The story is going in the right direction with the right pace..

We can feel Arnav's pain though it can't justify his cruelty towards Khushi ..

but I m happy that he's said sorry to her😊

Ufff 😲...ye Shyam yahan bhi aisa hi hai 😡 😡😆

Update soon n thanx 4 d pm !!!

Originally posted by: Srilathalolla

To be frank dear the story is getting more and more interesting awesome update I am waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: ashw99

brilliant updates...
First loved the banner its perfect and beautiful.
About updates i am glad Anjali told her about Arnav's past and why he is like this, khushi may try to know him better apart from his faced he present.
Loved the payal and light scene waiting for more to happen between them.
thanks.

Originally posted by: vandana1965

I think arnav came back early because he was missing Khushi. He just wants to make everything ok for her. he wants her family to be ok too. not looking forward to snakewa's appearance and his evil plans.but then what good is a story without a villain?

Originally posted by: jakhushi

Both of them tackling their stands towards their marriage & impending separation in their own manner... I feel bad for both.

Poor Khushi...if this marriage to and unwilling husband was not bad enough... shyam Manohar Jha had make an appearance... Dang!!!!

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Res

Great...absolutely loved it...thanks so much for the dedication...it's really late for me ...but will un res soon!

Loved it...your writing and your verbal descriptions for each emotion, mannerisms, feelings and emotions seriously makes me feel that I am watching and not merely reading it...

I love how she feels about having vented out and said all that she did to Arnav, perhaps she has been holding on to her emotions and her feelings too long...it needed to be said...love her surprise at his heartfelt apology...she knew he meant it and that surprised her as much as the apology itself...

I am glad she told him about the pain and heartbreak she felt with his actions it will help him also realise from where she is coming and help him understand her better!

It's like she feels that her energy has been drained with finally saying all that she has been wanting to, and now feels refreshed ...

I liked how she feels lighter in her heart and that helps her sleep, it's like she has emptied out all the angst and pain she felt in the form of heaviness from her heart and she finally was able to sleep peacefully...

I love how she notices his tired face and recalls his words about the past which makes him feel the way he does about marriage and relationships, her perceptiveness is feeling that maybe there is more to him and his past that meets the eye, and wonder what really happened...she is smart enough to wonder what wounds he was referring to which caused him so much pain...I loved that she notices the change in him by his apology and words that caused his eyes to get moist...beautifully portrayed ...

I love how he gets up and notices her not being there...they don't realise but they are slowly getting used to each other and the feel something amiss when either one of them is not there...

I liked that the phone buzzing finally gets him out of his reverie ...and he felt annoyed at the interruption and so feels that he needs more staff ...nice! He was happy to be thinking of her...

I loved his introspection...he realises that even though his intentions were only to make her happy and wanted her to keep smiling, and had her fathers and her best interests at heart ...somewhere those actions did hurt her and maybe she was justified in her accusations and words from last night. Loved his he thinks about it..it's like she is getting to him ...slowly but steadily...all the emotions he is feeling for her and she for him slowly indicate that their hearts,feel more for each other than they realise ...

I loved how they are busy with their respective lives she with her parents and helping them settle in, her modelling, Arnav trying to be fair to her and distancing himself for the Guptas...if that is want he thinks she wants that is what he will do...he wants not to be the cause of her sorrow or pain anymore than he is...loved how the Guptas were so warmly hosted by the Raizadas for dinner...

Love how she notices that he is distancing himself from her family..he has even deputed Aman to take over so as he not give her more pain and keep his promise even if it means he is sad...I wonder why he is so concerned and worried about her feelings and her her almost approval .

I love how to make them feel at home he finds a house similar to the one they had in Luncknow...

Loved how Akaash nudges NK...he seems that our Akash babua is smitten by Payalia and did not like NKs offer to her...loved how Anjali diverts the topic to the food ( the missing brinjal on the plate ) realising Paayal s discomfort at the attention and teasing from the brothers...super touch..

Nani's concern for babuji's medicines ...remembering Khushi words...sending food for the Guptas while they are settling in...Nani personally cooking ...just goes to show what a wonderful family and the respect they have for the Guptas...

I love that Arnav and Khushiare conscious of every move the other makes...and their eyes say what they don't...

Loved how Paayal is so proud of her sisters achievement and the confidence with which she is playing her role as a model...she is thrilled with her sisters achievement and beauty...very touching indeed to see the sisterly affection and pride...

And of course Shyam and his evil eye had to reappear ...so here he is at her fashion show...slyly coveting her...his sister in law...and a smart and observant Paayal notices...

I love Khushi taking Sister under her wings and showing her the way around...helping her family unpack and loved the text to Arnav, and her surprise at his response saying he was going to be travelling...and wondering about it...

Loved his Anjali feels Khushi's pain and was happy to see her smiling once again...and loved their heart to heart about the past and Arnav, it's like Khushi is genuinely interested to know what Arnav went through and Anjali also feels if imperative for her to know as it will help her to understand him better...his thoughts and his feelings, loved how she explained everything about the adverse impact his mothers death had on him and how,just to make her proud he pulls himself out and devoted his life in making himself successful so that his mother would be proud and happy...how he would get jealous when the mother would go and visit Khushi on her birthday, how the bitter memories of Lucknow and been erased after meeting Khushi...his reasons for traveling ...

this was just such a great paragraph...

How Khushi admits that had she known that he was going to be traveling she would have come back at night...this admission must have been a spontaneous one ,...one that even she did not anticipate...

I loved her realisation of Arnav intentions once she realises her fathers health improving with this new line of treatment and her mental note to thank him..and apologise...

Loved how on the actual day of her death anniversary her mind wanders to Arnav and is concerned for him and his health and his well being remember di's words...and touching his pillow as though to feel closer to him...and then the next instant she tells herself off for worrying about him...so endearing...!

Loved how she could feel his presence before she even sees him, her heart could feel him ...and then she sees him and the rabba ve...brought back so many memories...loved how Di did not buy his reason of work at the office being his reason for coming back so much earlier than he was scheduled too...and also recalled how in the past when there was a crisis in the office he did not come back...she probably felt that it was for Khushi that he came...I am sure even he does not realise but it was certainly her that brings him back...loved the video you chose, one of the best and most sensual ones, fits so well here, their eyes still doing most,of the talking for them...and her heart beating as fast as it could in his presence ...warning her of the potential danger...

Loved how with his return her concentration has been broken from everything and how,he comes to the poolside to enquire about her father and the the video, another brilliant adaption into the story...

Loved how he has explaination for what he just did, all he knows is that he picked up the payal knowingly and put it in his pocket before he left maybe to keep her closer to him...and why he placed if back also he has no plausible justification for.,

I loved how they are so affected by each other...they were attracted to each other earlier but now..they think about each others happiness and are connecting emotionally too...she mesmerises him ...just like the evil person whose name I shall refrain from talking...wonder how that angle will pan out,,,hopefully we will get to see a jealous and possessive but smart Arnav...once again re confirming his growing feelings for her...maybe he will question why Shyam around Khushi makes him possessive and protective over her and then realises the depth of his feelings for her...the evil one might be the catalyst their relationship needs.

...I like that they are noticing each other and the actions ...they have moved to a new phase of their relationship...even without knowing, the sense of security and comfort they find with and in each other, the restless and anxiety... ..this is how they will fall in love but will not even know, they will suddenly realise if not what they are feeling for each other, then what is love?

Just loved it...waiting for the next part...

Mints banner looking brilliant...just like the update...

I am forever thankful for the dedication ...!

Originally posted by: rana5

I did feel this chapter was slow in regards to Khushi and Arnav's relationship. I did not mean for it to come out negatively. I love this story! I want a stronger reaction from both Arnav and Khushi and the only way that will happen is if they are thrown together more. The time in Lucknow was a build up towards more understanding, now I am waiting for some fireworks I guess. Whatever you write will be eagerly anticipated!

Originally posted by: 1chilly

Chopping him into little, little pieces should do it, I think.

This is your story, Afya. Please write at your own pace. It is normal for us readers to be impatient when the going gets tough. I'll just wait for the happy times to come soon.