SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory | Chap 8 : Page 133 - Updated 14/12/2013

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Wow!!

Wonderful writing!

Its such a pleasure reading you work after such a long time!

Ty for the PM.

Do update soon.

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Awesome chapter marium it was a bang on update loved it to the core.. 😃 . Sharon's got all defensive when natasha tried to hit on swayam poor natasha pity her she is pretty possessive of swayam and ho kyun nai when the mate is so handsome and cute.. 😳 .Loved the first meeting of swayam and sharon the love which they have for each other was evident.. Why did swayam back off in that moment though..?? Swayam with some other girl and sharon saw that scene in front of her eyes don't do this bring swaron together unko aise alag mat karo.. .Awesome start to this ff plzzz update the next part soon will be waiting for it.. 😊

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Rabina

@raveena2807

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

This chapter gave us a glimpse of what to expect from Sharon when it comes to her possessiveness for Swayam. The way she reacted when Natasha called Swayam hot was epic. And looking at the way this chapter ended, I am hoping to see fierce Sharon in next. I just hope she does not run away. I want to see her unleash her wrath on the 'girl almost falling over her mate'. Swayam can't resist her, that much is evident. But why is he withholding from her? Hope to get answer to that mystery soon.

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anandita

@blooming_angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

and ur updates means alot to me..!!!😆😆
mere raat ki raja rani vali story h bina padhe neend nai aati...😆😳

love u baby..🤗

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

sorry for the late... my net shuck due to whether it get out...
before it complete goes out i better comment fast in short ...
the meet of swayan and sharon was awesome loved it...
sharon also trouble her best friends...
who is swayan mate... sharon saw whom with swayan ...
i hope it not her best friends... continue soon and pm me...

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

YAY you updated!!!

i as really waiting for the 5th of july to come so i could read the first chapter!!!

but you updated earlier!!!

and it was an awesome chapter!!!

poor sharon is so in love with swaym!!!!

but swayam doesn't even notice her=(...

how mean!!!

but he still has feelings for her!!!

i don't get why they don't express their feeling to each other!!!

it would make their lives much more easier!!!

and the end...

i wonder how sharon is gonna react to that...

now im curious about that!!!

UPDATE SOON!!!!!

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sneha singh

@swaron9113

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Wow awesme upd8.
Whole chapter was brliantly written.
Love the start of first chapter when natasha was tryng to wake up sharon.
Nd she used swayam's name.
Poor grl get a push because of her idiotic action.

Lovd shop part too where small kids exchange thr nums.
Nd sharon get shockd.

Swaron's scene was also brilantly written.

Bt i didn't undstand last sm lines where sharon entrd in one of the room of bb court.

P. S-hey marium i knw u was abusing me nd was thnk. I will still nt cment.
Bt trust me i wl cment nd lyk thoda late krunge bt krunge jarur.

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

UN_RESERVED

Its really different concept for me.I have never read such a wolf stories.Its like a challenging and more interesting,unique story for me.And yea,i enjoyed a great read.Moving on to prolouge part.I just read 4 times,Then i understood the concept of Alpha,Luna and their territory.Sorry,but the concept of alpha and mates are really confusing for me..And finally i got it..Then character sketch was just amazing.Feeling great to imagined SwaRon in that.So in whole,I just loved the concept.

Now chapter 1 was great.Loved the convo of sharon and natasha.Loved the first meeting of SwaRon.But whats that..Swayam with some other girl..? Sharon love him and swayam has feelings for her..And last,waiting for the sharon reaction in next update.I need one more read of chapter becoz i feel little difficulty to understand.Sorry,pls dont mind,Its my problem..

Keep update...Sorry for late

And yes,Thanx for PM

Prateek

Edited by prateekdave7 - 12 years ago

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

really different, unique and interesting concept!!!

i've never read a story as such

I m super excited to read further.

Sharon and Natasha's convo was very cute I really liked their small fight

sharon so wanted to be with her mate n swayam too wanted then what stoppin them?

swayam was with someone else.. im curious about that & can't wait for next chapter so plz update the next part soon

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swapna

@shan16

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

its oustanding concept...never read bfore ...m damn currious how u r gona penned it down...totally differnt world for swaron ...wolfy swaron ...hmmm its seems lots of research done on wer wolf huh