SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory | Chap 8 : Page 133 - Updated 14/12/2013

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Sanskriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

res

unres

awesome update 😊

Loved the convo b/w Sharon n Natasha

Natasha teasing Sharon

Sharon upset because of Swayam

Edited by sanstina - 12 years ago

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Molly

@._Molly_.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Res..
Finally Unresed..

So telling the truth, I was a bit unsure about reading the first chapter of this FF as the introduction was quite confusing. Wese to I m just a silent reader and I dont comment much but I just reserved and disappeared. 😆
But today I remebered that I had to unreserve my comment so I just read the Chapter and believe me It was just A-M-A-Z-I-N-G. It was a very promising chapter- An interesting start. 👏
I just loved the way you penned down the whole thing. Be it the Sharon- Natasha convo, or Sharon's encounter with Swayam at the shop, everything was nicely written. 😊
I want to know the reason of Swayam's such behaviour? And who is that girl? What will Sharon do now?Its confusing but I know that yeh puzzles dheere-dheere apni place par lagne lag jayenge after a few more chapters..😉
You are the only one who can think of such a unique concept. Well done for that and I trust your writing skill. It seems this FF is going to very Passionate..

So yeah Marium di am waiting for the next Chapter..😃

Do update soon..

Thanks for the PM..

And dont forget to PM me..😉

P.S.: This was my LONGEST comment ever on IF..😆

Edited by Molly.Swaron - 12 years ago

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

marium u didn't res for me 😡

im very angry 😭

u promised... 😕😕

COMMENT: as said before 😉😉 (i hope you got it)

wow

amazing marium!!!

chapter one was simply wow 😃

kya start tha.. 😉

loved it

coming to the update...

thank you for the such a big wala chapter.. 😲😲

amazingly written 👏👏

abhi bhi thode bohot confusions hain but with the story i think resolve ho jayenge..

the story is super unique...

the story is out of the world...

really wanna read the further story..

it's exciting

write chapter 2 soon

and do pm me

and thank you for the pm

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Resd 😳

unres😃

niceee start👏👏

d Swaron part was amazinggg😃

poor sharon😳

hope swayam consoles her😊

waiting for d nxt part😉

update soon😊

Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago

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Rose

@--Rose--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Its different and awesome:-):-)
I loved it:-):-)...

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

nice concept marium----inspired by twilight jacob?

anyway---hope to see as good updates as i am used to seeing from you

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zk456789

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Hey marium thnks for updating so soon
Well I was eagerly waiting for the first chapter
Coming to the update wow mind blowing swayam and Sharon both want each other but they are
Suppressing & coming to the ending part swayam was with someone else poor Sharon
Hope the mu gets cleared
Do continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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manasi

@manasie23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

sry my like button is not working baad me like karti hu... and ofcourse I loved the update but Swayam aaarrrgghh how could he??! he knew he has a mate...still he is with someone else... awww poor Sharon... I hope the alpha has to pay for his mistake before he could get his mate... will be waiting for the update

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Chaitra Joshi

@-Chaitra-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Hey marium ofcourse we do remember u [as i want next update😆]

and thank u so much for updating before july 5th... i know ur very kind, pls show ur kindness for further updates also and god will bless u with gud marks in ur exams😉...

this update was really nice but i hate the word limit part🥺 after reading ur intro for this story i signed in on wattpad and read stories on were wolves so that i understand ur story completely coz i really loved ur idea of fusing swaron with supernatural stories,it is indeed a great concept.Coming to this chapter i think am gonna like natasha a bit😎...i donno what to comment on sharon🤔 other than saying that i felt bad for her...now the main part this chapter i'm really really curious to know the reason behind swayam's behaviour😕 and also am waiting to see wat happens after his 18th b'day and the last part wer sharon sees swayam with a girl is adding fuel to my curiosity😡

i hope ur satisfied with the comment and update next part soon😊😳

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

I am pretty much confused about this FF especially after this chapter..

I mean it had to be the mates that attract and not being poles apart or something.. then whats wrong with the two.. Why do they have to keep their feeling under wraps..

so you better clear out this confusion.. fast... or else I wont be able to comment..

Note kuch zyada hi bada nahi hai.. na kaam na kaaj ka.. dushman hum readers ka..

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