SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory | Chap 8 : Page 133 - Updated 14/12/2013

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_bellaSwan_

@_bellaSwan_

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Yes finally you updated it its very different and innovative concept I loved it . swayam already has mate but how come swayam is with other girl , poor Sharon he has to pay for it. Thanx for pm and please update ASAP

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: swaron9113
Wow awesme upd8.
Whole chapter was brliantly written.
Love the start of first chapter when natasha was tryng to wake up sharon.
Nd she used swayam's name.
Poor grl get a push because of her idiotic action.

Lovd shop part too where small kids exchange thr nums.
Nd sharon get shockd.

Swaron's scene was also brilantly written.

Bt i didn't undstand last sm lines where sharon entrd in one of the room of bb court.

P. S-hey marium i knw u was abusing me nd was thnk. I will still nt cment.
Bt trust me i wl cment nd lyk thoda late krunge bt krunge jarur.

Oye, when did i abuse you babe? 😆

And i am not abusing you right now too. I am happy you will comment sooner or later doesn't matter! What matters is you leave comment on right update like comment chapter 1 ke liye karrahi ho aur chapter 2 pehle ki post hu chuka hai! Aisa mat karna warna maar paregi! 😆

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

hola Marium!!
look who is here to comment!!! 🤣

me OFC I donno why today I am in a comment mood and I just read the update...!!

hardly got time these days to even read an update but don u dare stop sending me PMs coz I really await to read ur FFs or SSs...coz they r ahmazing...!!

You are really a very young and talented writer..!! and I am proud to have u as my close frnd...!!

well il go on and on and bug u to death but not now...!!

coming to the 1st chap!!
OMG!!! you left me speechless is wad I would say...!!
yaar I luved the entire flow..!!
Her bestie wakes her up everyday calling swayams name...interesting!!!

Sharon awaits her 18th bday...so she can finally be with her mate...am I ryt??

Then move in snow and how she is cold...!!
the clash into her MATE and the little romance they did have...!!

but then the growl upset Sharon and she ran away with tears in her eyes...how sad!!

And swayam once left behind cursing himself for his growl...!!
Oh my..this is one hell of a story I don really do wolf stories but Im really liking this so far!!

hands off yaar for the mind blowing update...!!
I so cant wait for more..!!!

UPDATE SOON!!!

regards,

Reena!

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

As always amazingly Written!!
Superb chapi!😊
Natasha n sharon's convo was nyc!!
The store scene was nyc...poor Sharon..startd crying cause of swayam!!😭
N Wat was that at the end..?!?!😲
Swayam wid another girl!!
Omg!!😲
Pls update soon!!

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anandita

@blooming_angel

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

pleash update karona marium...😭
jaldi jaldi..!! wait nai ho raha...😕

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Unreserved my comment on previous page..i.e Page No.12
Sorry for late

Prateek

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paro1311

@paro1311

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

ok so from wat i've understood of this werewolf concept this one's gonna b a passionate nd aggressive Swaron:)

wat i liked here is the sharon natasha friendship nd of course the possesive sharon. swayam's behaviour has left me bit confused but i guess the further updates would clear it up:)

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User123

@UserM123

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Loved It <3

Fantastic AS Asusual. :) :)

awesum update.

Bear with my small comment, sorry for that. but cnnot help it :(

but update was just Lovely.

Will Be waitting for the next update!!!!

Love,MiNi :)

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Aww poor Sharon
What is Swayam's deal?😡
He knows she is his mate then why the hell is making out with some random idiot!
I hope Sharon teaches him a lesson.
Her longing and pain was written beautifully.I know I'm very mad at Swayam right now for being so aloof but I trust you to redeem him with your story pretty soon😛
great concept and even better writing.
Thanks for the pm.

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Ah Beta! Look who's here 😎
So should i be sorry or should i be sorry? 😆
Lol we will settle this afterwards, cumin to Alpha's Territory, dude like seriously? Wolves? Why dun you leave studies and do this on a regular basis eh marium? Trust me you will get more accoloades!
Concept n the introduction were in total panache, so boss i absolutely loved it!
I have to say your notes are devilish 😆 Why i m laughing bt 'eah they are 😳
Passionate SwaRon are your cup of tea 😉 so i am enthralled for this one.

First chapter was quite wolf-ish 😛
I literally laughed at the word growled...swayam growled?? 🤣
Sharon is so possessive nd cut throat wolf, she didn't spared her bf, poor thing. She has that man to man n girl to girl thing in her, good!
Then this wolf swayam, he is weird with his reactions. 🤓
But clear this thought to thought thing, i read the prologue bt after the update i didn't got one thing.
Not mated wolf can hear each other's thoughts? Regardless male/female?

Sharon could read his thoughts but she never found herself in it and that broke her heart. She didn't understand how he can never ever think of her. Of his mate! When she comes face to face to him which was very much everyday thing because they have the same route for the college and same class and actually being in same standard, with same courses; it was everything same but it felt like he used to put his guards up thus she never heard his thoughts when she was near him.

^_^ In bold here

Should i wait for things to get unfold or am i smart? 😎
say smart otherwise i won't continue cupboards 😈

Lol marium seriously this is one epic Concept, and i know you will give it your best and kill it properly 😆
Way to go Babe! 🤗

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