*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11 - Page 57

Originally posted by: indi52

wiwy,

telepathy. now we have evidence.

i just wrote a non cheek kissing scene on blast... please take a look... the thumb.

and a pink purse... 😆

i love the fun and sex and glitter and energy of your bed breaking duo. they make my breath race... and that girl running off, slippers in hand... that is me catching sight of someone... and he needn't be half undressed too. so he is in a towel and parched lips and wet smirking ones are getting ready to act out some conjugation. aah i wait.

Originally posted by: KittenRose

it was a fantastic update, except i have a little problem with mamaji and mamiji not recognizing arnav and arnav not recognizing them in the shop. I am sorry if you felt bad, i cannot convince myself to that part. Except that portion it was fantastic. Loved the last part and looking forward to the update now👍🏼

Originally posted by: wiwy

😆 Kitten, you are really bad! How did you know that I had no plans of introducing mami mama in my story!?! Bringing them to RM was just a spur of the moment thing!😆

But I tried to justify why they did not recognize each other...Arnav was 5 years old when they left for US,and they never kept in touch as Mami and Nani had an acrimonious relationship. Not convinced?😡😆 Dont blame you. Okay will try to think of how to develop story beforehand. But cant promise because even I dont know where my story is taking me! 😕😆🤗

Originally posted by: wiwy

Yep, I saw Indi! There is more! Last update my Khushis scooty was going to crash into Arnavs SUV!😆 But, I saw yours in time andchanged it to mandir, mud splattering meet! 😛 Like i told Horizon, you are my inspiration!

Originally posted by: IssPKaur

Gurlz,

Good for you, you are inspiring each other. But as humble reader, may i kindly request you compare notes sometimes? It is aalredy bery bery confoozing with sheesh mahals, temples, takkars, suv's and bhat not 😆😆😆 Reading chapterz isspread ober days aalready praablumatic... upar se ab pink purse bhi daal diya!! Yahan imagine kare'n ya wahan??!! 😕😆😕 Pileejh juz jhola, bun of you twos...meanz aap done mein se ek kanya khusi ji ko jhola pehnayiye. Jaldeez.

Abhi Wiwy madam ki isstory mein phamily aane waali hai... Phir toh paagalpan bill happenz

Aur Indus Sir, upar redwa...woh toh HUM hain!!!! Officially the running to save life from beauteous man type. AAP bhi???? Nayi confoozun 😕!!!!! 🤣

Originally posted by: wiwy

What the Issk! sheesh mahals, temples, takkars, suv's are all intrinsic to IPK? How can any one of us do away with them? You are Unbelievable! 😆

About pink purse😳! Sorry jhola wouldn't have gone with the red saree! So baba maaf karo! BTW I think I have written my Khushi was carrying a jhola on her bed shopping spree! Or was it in my mind!😕 Lifeguardji phir confoozun😕 confounded😆!!!!!!

Originally posted by: ForLoveofBarun

Ohhh☺️ Why don't you just kill me now wiwy instead of leaving me hanging. AGAIN😡

Lovely update. Loved our one and only maami👏⭐️ I'll be