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Posted: 12 years ago
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liked it...Manvi being a good girl didn't want to be called VP's daughter...as she might wanted her own recognition also that attention must've irked her..so Virat is gradually falling for Mannu...he easily became friend's with her...friends are mostly like catalyst..in kinetics of love stories..when two people feel affinity for each other...in college life..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its nice that you again started this ff
I used to follow this ff
continue soon and nice updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This update I am dedicating to four of my close friends: Sumu, Ana, Sana and Geetha! ❤️

Sumu: Who is my partner in reading Fan fictions and our discussions on FFs❤️ I noe probably now u ll not have time and even me after my clg reopens anyways thanks for everything 😃

Ana: thanks for the reviews I like ur reviews very much and u noe that 😉😆 read this update after ur exams phinish muahhh ❤️

Sana: Hayyeee my crazy sana 😆 ur banana shot and i noe u read only this ff just for my sake so ❤️ u for that!

Geetha: Last but not the least thanks for reading this FF for my sake and for pointing out my mistakes u noe😉 ❤️ u muahhh

Chapter 5: The first fight!

Vaishu: Virat why did you bring me here on the 2nd floor. I am hungry!

It was 1 O'clock, the lunch break which they had for 1 hr and Vaishali was frustrated with Virat that he brought her on the 2nd floor instead of going to canteen for lunch because she was starving and on top of that she had breakfast hurriedly, in the morning. Seeing her sad face Virat explained to her that it was necessary and urgent which he intends to talk with Maanvi. Hearing Maanvi's name a teasing smile crept on Vaishali's face unknowingly which didn't go unnoticed by Virat who was going to tell her to shut-up her thoughts but kept quiet seeing Maanvi coming out from her class and heading towards the staircase.

Virat, he himself didn't know why he felt so happy seeing Maanvi and was smiling like an idiot but in the next moment his smile vanished when he saw that she was accompanied by Her. Maanvi saw Virat standing near stair-case and smiled at him to which he smiled in response. He then turned to Vaishali and saw that even she was disturbed seeing The other girl. Virat gave a knowing look to Vaishali and said, "This is the urgent matter which I was talking about". Vaishali just nodded her head and gave a 'go ahead' look. Maanvi came near them and saw that both were standing silently which she felt was unusual because in the morning it seemed they were talkative. She also noticed that both Vaishali and Virat were eyeing her new friend as though she is a piece of filth. Yes that's what the feeling she got seeing their expressions and she turned aside to look her new friend's expression and saw the pain in her eyes. Maanvi then decided to break this silence and exchanged formal greetings with Virat and Vaishali. Then she took her friend by her arm and pulled forward who was trying very hard to hide behind Maanvi and introduced her to Virat and Vaishu saying, "This is Sandhya, my new friend." Seeing no reaction from all 3 of them she continued, " Sandhya, this is Virat and this is Vaishali aka Vaishu". Still no reaction and now this was enough to test Maanvi's patience and she addressed all three of them annoyingly, "what? You 3 can't speak anything?! " Virat sensed that she was annoyed and he too replied annoyingly, "Maanvi I need a word with you", giving glance to Sandhya he added, "in PRIVATE."

Maanvi felt that Virat was harsh in addressing her and even Virat felt so. Virat immediately apologized her, "I didn't mean to sound harsh. It's urgent matter "."I and Vaishu both want to speak with you in private", he added thinking that she may not be comfortable to talk with him alone privately. Maanvi first hesitated thinking what they need to talk with her and that too privately but then nodded her head in agreement and said to Sandhya, " I will be back in few minutes. Meet you in canteen ". Sandhya didn't respond anything but Maanvi saw the 'hurt' expression on her face and was confused about why all are behaving in mysterious manner. She decided to ask Sandhya the reason later and followed Virat and Vaishali down the staircase. They finally reached a secluded place in the college garden.

It was after reaching this secluded place that Virat finally broke the silence and told Maanvi," Don't you hang around with Sandhya anymore". Maanvi felt a sudden anger arise in her when she heard him saying that rudely. She immediately replied haughtily, "Who are you to say that? "

Virat didn't expect this question coming from her and was dumbfounded thinking what to answer. Vaishali interrupted in between and defended Virat saying, "See Maanvi, Virat didn't want to sound rude with you. It's just that you are new here and we are a bit worried about your choice in selection of your friends. Sandhya is not a good friend for you. "She was cut in between by Maanvi whose anger didn't take the name of calming down;"Excuse me who said that my choice is that bad in matter of choosing friends! I have full faith in my choice and I don't need anyone's help in that matter. Thanks to both of you for showing concern but I don't need your help". Vaishali tried to explain Maanvi," See Maanvi you are new here and you don't know people's nature'"

Maanvi had enough and she said finally said loudly although she tried not to scream," If that is the case then I should not trust both of you too. Even you both are new to me" Saying this she went away from there.

Vaishu turned to look at Virat who was still wondering about Maanvi's question-"Who are you to me? " Vaishali gave him a punch on his arm to bring him back to the present and exclaimed, " What the hell? You didn't even try to explain her about Sandhya . I thought you would use your family lawyer-skills and make her understand." Virat looked at her and said, "She is right. Who are we to her? We met her recently. To be specific you and I (pointing his index finger towards Vaishu and himself) met her yesterday & today respectively. If we have to make her believe us then first we need to be good friends."

Vaishu: But we are saying the truth that Sandhya is not a right person as a friend! What do you mean by "make her believe us"? We are not lying to her.

Virat: I know but look at the matter from Maanvi's point of view. According to her she is confused of whom to believe. We didn't even say the entire truth. We just said that don't hang around with Sandhya but didn't give the reason.

Vaishali considered the fact that they didn't saying anything much to Maanvi and became silent at once.

Virat: Vaishu I think we need to tell her everything that happened between you-Aakash-Sandhya.

Vaishu was still silent thinking about the matter. Virat understood that she was feeling uncomfortable to share her past (in which she was at no fault according to Virat) with Maanvi or any other person except her close friends.

Virat: See it's the same thing you don't think yet Maanvi as your close friend and same is the case with Maanvi. She too doesn't consider us and even Sandhya too as her close friends. I think she was angry on us just because she felt that we are trying to interfere in her life. Well actually we are interfering only, no?

When Vaishu heard the word 'interference'; she looked at Virat annoyingly and gave the look " you know why" to which Virat answered calmly, " Yes I know why we are interfering but it's not necessary that Maanvi will take it in a polite way without knowing the reason because I think even I would have reacted like that if I was in her shoes!"

Vaishu: Ok fine we will tell her the truth so that she keeps that Sandhya away from her!".

Edited by NivluvsNishal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sumana123

I love the flow in this story ..waiting to know what Happens next ...Vaishali is a sweetheart and ...Straightforward gal..."I said ..Like...Not Love" 😆😆😆...Viraat is Nice guy all I can say till now ...He is those Realistic kind of boy ...Maanvi ..is a snappy girl but I like her attitude a lot ...Looking forward to the next one



Thanks Sumu for short and sweet review and yeah yeah Vaishali is a sweeettthearttt u ll come to noe as the story progresses😉😆


Originally posted by: JESMY143VIRMAN

AWESOME UPDATES👏👏👏👏
PLZ PM ME



Thank you and will surely pm u 😊

Originally posted by: Syed695

Awesome Update..!!! like Vaishali she cleared the mess and spoke right to the point...which is nice...Waiting fir next n Thnks for the PM..!



Yup Vaishali is straightforward and abt clearing mess 🤔 who noes she may create more mess in the future!😉 stay tuned... and thanks for the review 😊


Originally posted by: jannat89

awesome update dear
I liked vaishali and virat convo
Vaishali tease him, gr8 part
Thanx 4 d pm
Waiting 4 next part
Update soon



Yes teasing part even I like btw friends esp when they tease abt LOVE 😆 and thanks for the comment 😊




Edited by NivluvsNishal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

awesome update really interesting plus yu write it in fliw feels great reading it 😊
virat and vaishali convo was fab and specially vaidhali is a great frend she noticed even those little things abt virat and also let him know abt it 😊
then manvi being kinda comforatable with vaishali and virat having those little nok jhoks with virat those dialogues were really funny 😆 😆
bt why did virat gt angry and behaved soo rude wen manvi was talking to tht guy and gal i guess her name was priya and abt wat he wanna warns manvi 😕
update next part sooon and plz pm me


Hey thanks for the sweet comment and review and i ll surely pm u 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazyvirmanians

Great update Niviii 😛

Tjough still waiting for the Title of the Story, Forgiveness is the key to Happiness" to eveal soon😉
Coming to this update, Virat n Vaishali are sweet together... 😃
Virat is protective of Manvi abhi se 😉
Virat Family is a mystery wesee... sun reaveal the mystery soon 😉



Sana all I can say is have patience! 😛 U will come to noe abt the title slowly ...step by step 😃
and i ll reveal the mystery when proper time comes😛


Originally posted by: AnaluvsVirman

liked it...Manvi being a good girl didn't want to be called VP's daughter...as she might wanted her own recognition also that attention must've irked her..so Virat is gradually falling for Mannu...he easily became friend's with her...friends are mostly like catalyst..in kinetics of love stories..when two people feel affinity for each other...in college life..😃



🤣 I must say this is the best hilarious review till date I got or I must best chemistry review 😆
I guess u r going mad by studying tooo much 😛 Itna bhi dont study😆
Edited by NivluvsNishal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pink1

nice update from part 1 to part 4
what was the past btw two family
update soon



Thanks for the review😊



Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: niki795

its nice that you again started this ff
I used to follow this ff
continue soon and nice updates


Thanks 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wats all this suspense over sandhya akash and vaishali 😕
i just hope virat is able to make manvi understand wats right before she gets into some kinda trouble ...
virat smiling like idiots just seeing manvi was too cute 😉 😃
am confused is sandhya really bad or are ppl misunderstanding her coz she was showing hurt expressions ...
virat was really affected by her who are you to me 😆 😆
awesome update really interesting 👏
update next part soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome story...
plzzz update soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update.. nd am happy that you are writing again.. ❤️

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