Virman SS:FITKTH!!!Chap 8-ii on pg-13

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Hello 😃 Some may recognize this FF and me (very few members i noe 😆)
I discontinued this FF long time and now I decided to continue it again so ... here i am ...




FORGIVENESS IS THE KEY TO HAPPINESS!!!


Chapter 1: Manvi's family
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"Manvi beta get up. It's already 8 am. We have to shift today to Chandigarh" .
Manvi now finally decided to wake up after hearing her mom's voice shouting at her from last 1 hour. She took the photograph placed on the bedside table near the lamp keeping her eyes closed. She slowly opened her eyes to look at the beautiful photograph in her hand and she smiled. This was her daily habit since she was 5yrs. Manvi always felt that this photograph is the most beautiful and amazing one. If she will tell this to anyone then they may probably say what's so different in it. It's just a family picture which many families have adorned on the walls of their houses but this was not the case with manvi. Her soul lies in that pic which was clicked when she was 5 yrs old and went to garden in Mussourie with her parents. She always admired the smile on her dad's face in the pic and wondered whether he knew that after few days he will probably leave the family and say good-bye to his darling daughter permanently . Tears rolled down from her eye on the pic unknowingly formed when she was busy to shut these thoughts.
She heard the sound of the door open and quickly wiped away her tears which were threatening to flow enormously and kept the pic on its place and plastered a fake smile which she felt will be enough to satisfy her mother. " u r still on the bed I thought that u brushed ur teeth. Come on now get ready fast we have to leave at 10 o'clock exactly" told her mom with a stern smile knowing what her daughter was thinking before she entered but decided not to talk about that and kept the tea cup on the table and gave a quick peck on manvi's cheek then she left the room hurriedly to see other packing work.
Manvi freshened up and was ready in 45 min and went down to help her mother Madhura. They were leaving Amritsar to Chandigarh since her mother is transferred there. Her mother Madhura chowdhary is the history professor in MG college of science, commerce and arts. She has done the majors in history and is working in this college since she is 33yrs of age. Manvi and her mom shifted to Amritsar from Chandigarh after her father died. Her mother got the job has a professor since the principal of the college Mr.Tripathi knew her Madhura when she was his student in Chandigarh. After knowing that Madhura wanted to work after her husband died, he immediately offered her job in his own college which was then recently established and were searching for suitable professors. Madhura wanted to get away from the surroundings of Chandigarh, the city which holds all those good memories of her with her husband so she agreed to work in Amritsar which had a branch of that college. Now that she was promoted to the position of vice-principal owing to her caliber to maintain discipline and punctuality in her students she was transferred to main branch in Chandigarh. Mr. Tripathi asked her opinion because he knew that she was not comfortable in Chandigarh and was not sure whether she will be able to cope up there. On the other hand Madhura knew that all those old memories will come back but then it was always said that you cannot run away from the truth for long time and there she decided that it's high time that she must be ready to face reality and also making her daughter strong in emotions. Although Mr.Tripathi will help her if she wants to stay back but she didn't want to rely everything on other's help. She knows that he always thinks about her as a daughter and not to mention manvi his favourite grand-daughter and she herself thinks him has her father-like figure but she knows better that it is not always advisable to stay safe away from past and run away whenever it's trying to come in front.
Although manvi doesn't know anything about Chandigarh except that she lived there when she was small and can't recollect anything particularly but she knew that her mother's mind is filled with those memories. Manvi herself was not ready for this big change because leaving this city means she will have to say good-bye to her friends and college and especially Mr.Tripathi with whom she was acquainted with since childhood and who was more than a grandpa to her. She will also miss Tripathi's whole family who consider her has their own but she had no option rather than to wish that she will start her new life in Chandigarh with her mother which will be filled with happiness again. Maybe destiny has something in store for both her mother and herself in Chandigarh. She is ready to make a big change just for her mother.
Note: reason for starting this FF again is... that the previous thread is locked 😆
and yeah this time no way i am going to discontinue this so be happy😊
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yipee i cn't belive u r going to continue plz pm me
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You better ,,,,continue it this time and update timely ...:) 😆 You know How I love this story ...looking forward to it again...Wonderful start ...want to know what was reason of Maanvi's mom's sadness and the suspense ...:) :)
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Eeeyyyaa posting the 2nd chapter also today 😃 Please like and comment because they motivate me to update early😉
I am unsure abt the number of updates i ll be giving for 2-3 weeks but later will restrict 2-3 updates per week 😊
Chapter 2: Vadhera Mansion.
The house known for its grandeur and richness which lies in the midst of the greenery located in the city outskirts, this is the description given by the people when they are asked about the famous vadhera's address. Mr. Vijay Singh Vadhera owner of the house was the famous judge in Chandigarh and people still remember him for his good deeds. He was known for his generosity, honesty and discipline. He was the man of good values and same goes to his son Mr. Vinay Singh Vadhera who was a famous lawyer and had the record of winning all the cases he took up. He was also one of the trustee of MG college. Mr.Vinay Vadhera was married to Vanshika and the couple has two sons, Viren and Virat. Viren, the elder son just finished the graduation and is planning to start a business. Virat, the 21 yr old was the younger son of Vinay and was doing graduation in MG college. He was good in his academics and was famous in college owing to his excellence in sports and cultural activities.
Today was the Sunday the day where everyone in the Vadhera house have a cosy talking session. Dadaji noticed that virat was missing so he asked viren, " viren beta, where is virat? I didn't see him since morning". " Dadaji, he went for football practice in the college for the coming inter-college tournament so he will be back by evening". Dadaji smiled at viren and acknowledged how virat never left any stone unturned when it comes to preparing for competition. A thought suddenly popped up in viren's mind and he immediately voiced it addressing to both his dad and grand-dad," Tomorrow Mrs. Chowdhary, new VP of our college is going to join so we need to make preparations for our welcome. We must prepare everything perfectly for her welcome…." Viren trailed off not noticing a momentary sadness which crept on his family members face hearing the surname Chowdhary. Dadaji took the guard of the moment and told viren to do all the necessary preparations and hearing this viren went to have a talk with the Principal about arrangements.
As soon as Viren exited the hall , dadaji looked at Vinay who was not ready to have a look into his father's eyes as though trying to hide the mistake, " Is this the same Chowdhary whom I know?" Vinay was still looking down but dadaji continued take his silence as yes , " u didn't think it was necessary to inform me that she is coming back to Chandigarh? I don't know what u r thinking but she will be always the special one in our lives no matter what she thinks or says about us. I think I made by opinion clear." Saying this firmly and giving a stern look to both his son and daughter-in-law he left the hall without waiting to hear what vinay has to say.
In the evening everyone in the vadhera mansion were gathered near the dining table at 8pm for dinner. Virat who was absent till evening was happily chattering with his brother about the new VP and was making enquiries about the arrangements, without noticing the unusual silent or sadness surrounding the dining table. Viren who noticed the gloominess since afternoon after discussion of new VP, was silently thinking about the reasons and was patiently answering Virat's questions but he was also rather trying hard to give hint to his younger brother to keep silent. To change the topic Viren asked about Vaishali and virat answered as a matter of factly ," Bhai, it's you only na who discussed with our Principal cum Sharma uncle about our new VP's welcome so he gave the work to his darling and kiddish daughter vaishu to go and meet VP and to give a pleasant and warm welcome to VP's daughter who is of our age". Viren cursed himself for starting this topic which is no good since it still includes new VP's discussions so he again tried to change the topic by teasing virat, " virat why you are saying that vaishali is kiddish?! She is better than you in serious works, isn't she?". Virat came into his defensive mood and Viren was glad that finally he succeeded in changing the topic.

As soon as they finished the dinner, all headed to their respective rooms and Virat checked his mobile and saw a message from Vaishali : " Yaar virat u noe na that today I went to our new VP's house. U noe na what we wer thinking ki how this principal and vice principal are strict and all that but this new VP is entirely opposite. Oh by the way her name is Mrs. Chowdhary . She gave such a warm welcome to me. I didn't feel ki she is so strict or something like that and wait did I tell u about her daughter. Her dress was so sweet and perfect for her body. I liked her dressing sense! I am already friends with her".
Virat burst out laughing reading the 2nd and 3rd last sentence thinking how these girls always look at other's dressing sense in the first meet rather than telling how her nature is. He then replied to her: " good that u are friends with her. See u tomorrow and eager to meet Mrs. Chowdhary & lets c hw sweet she is in college ;) Gn,sd,tc"
Vaishali: yup bye tc. Lets c…..:P
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ofcourse we remembered u... Hoge u remember me...
Now come to the update it was amazing... Waiting 4 more
Cont Soon
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Thanks for pm...
Liked it...
Superb one...
Continue soon...
Nice u updated soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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read both the updates
loved them
wonder why vadheras are sad on the return of choudharys
waiting to read more
please continue soon & pm me when u update
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Nice Update..~!!! like both the chapters...Waiting fr next n Thanks for the PM~!
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this one sounds very interesting and yu write also very well 👏 😊
so vadhera's and chowdhari's have a past which the yonger ones are unaware of ...
waiting for virman first meet ...
update soon and thanx alott for the pm 😊

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