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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update dear...
omg vicky slapped rey...😭
why vicky is not trusting rey...
vicky and taani conversation was so nice...
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awsome update...n
waiting for the next part...
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Firstly, Congratulations for the 2nd thread!🥳🥳
I just finished reading all the chapters, it took me 3 days, awesome work
loved it and man some scenes were so hilarious 🤣🤣🤣
you're showing the story, so beautifully and all the relations, seriously amazing job
please continue soon and pm me
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Lovely update
Taani nd Vicky fight nd nimmi spendin sme time alone with each other
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nyC story and concept i read all the chapters plz update dear
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CHAPTER-36

Rey was totally shocked...did he just saw his sister using asthama pump...

He was confused while a super scared sharon was walking slowly to him holding sw's hand...

Taani who was standing behind rey was trying to make rey realise reality before he bust out on sh

Finally rey came out of shocked n asked sh

Rey(shocked)-sh yeh kya hai

Sh-wo...wo..

Rey-kya sharon kuch pooch raha ho tujhese bata na kya hai yeh

Sh-wo...wo...yeh rey wo...

Rey(shouts)-speak up dammit

Sw(trying to calm down)-rey rey rey calm down...plz shout mat kar...hyper mat ho rey sharon ko problem ho jaege

Rey-par usse hua kya hai

Sw-rey sharon ko asthama hai...so jab bhi wo hyper hoti hai ya koi b hi problem mai hoti hai ya tensed hoti hai toh usse problem hoti hai

Shocked rey sits on sofa trying hard to believe the fact

Sh goes to him n neeled down n holds his hands

Sh-bhai I m sorry...mujhe pata hai k aapko bata dena chahiya tha plz bhai I m realy sorry

Rey-tune mujhe isiliyeh nai bataya na kyuki mai tera real bhai nai ho

Sh-nai bhai aisa kuch bhi nai hai...tum mujhe galat samjh rahe ho...

Rey-toh aur mai kya samjho sharon mere behan ne mujhe nai bataya k usse asthama hai toh mai aur kya samjho

Sh-par maine isliyeh nai bataya kyuki mai tumhe tension nai dena chahati thi...n moreover mujhe koi sympathy gain nai karne the...I m sorry rey

Taani-ha rey agar mai bhabhi k jagah hoti toh shayad mai bhi yahi karti...mai bhi bhai ko nai batate

Sw-ha rey plz tu janta hai sharon ko plz maaf kar de usse

Rey looked at taani who nodded in yes...now rey looks at his sister with teary eyes n hold her face

Rey-tune agar agli baar se mujhse koi bhi baat chupae toh mai tujhe kabhi bhi maaf nai karonga

Sh-promise abse kuch bhi nai chopaongi

Both hug n taayam smile but soon sw eyes goes wide with a strange thought...

He goes to taani n said-tu bhi mujhse kabhi bhi kuch bhi mat chupana samjhe

Taani-yes boss

Sw-good(now rey was staring at taani) n rey atleast stop staring at my sister when I m here

Sh-kya sw dekhne do na

Rey-ha yr waise he vicky ne mere waat laga k rakh de hai

Hearing name of vicky anger grows inside taani

Sw-hmmm par yeh soochte hai k ab karna kya hai

Taani-karna kya hai matlab

Sh-matlab k vicky ko manae kaise

Taani-par hum kyu usse manane lage...galte usne k hai toh wo rey se sorry kahenga na

Sh-taani suno

Taani-nai bhabhi...aap dono(looking at reyam) bhi sun lo iss baar koi bhi vicky ko kuch nai kahega...hum kyu proof kare k rey sach mai mujhse pyaar karta hai agar usse believe karna hai toh kare warna na kare mujhe koi fark nai padhta

Rey-hmmm sw mujhe lagta hai k tujhe taani ko ghar le kar jana chahiyeh(signals him that she need to calm down)

Sw-ha tu sahi kheh raha hai chalo taani ghar chale

Taani walks outside n sw turned to sharey

Sw-guys plz still kuch sochna iss vicky k matter ka warna kal bohot problem ho jaege...

Sharey-yeah sure

Sh-bye sw

Sw(looking lovingly)-bye sh..

Rey looked at them n coughs fakely but still swaron were lost in their world...finally a irritated bhai kicks inside rey

Rey hold sh n puts his hand on her shoulder n claps his fingers infront of sw due to which both get distracted

Rey-ho gaya bye ha chal nikal

Sh hit rey playfully

Sw(fake)-arre taani...

Rey turn to see n sw kissed sh quickly m ran away

Rey-kaha hai taani

Sh(blushing)-nai hai

While taani was waiting sw to come outside she received a msg from neha

Taani-neha bhabhi ka msg... she starts reading it

Neha's msg-taani me going to meet vicky...trying to make him understand...me supporting ur love...wait n watch god will help u

Taani smile thanking god 4 such a sweet bhabhi till then sw came

Sw-kya hua smile kyu kar rahe hai

Taani-neha bhabhi ka msg hai wo mere liyeh vicky se baat karne wale hai how sweet na

Sw-hmmm sweet toh hai par condition apply agar vicky baat sune toh

Taani-god yeh vicky na!!!! bhagwaan jane iske problem kya hai

Sw-acha chod...bol ice-cream khaege???

Taani-ice-cream abhi??

Sw-kyu aisa kaha likha hai k abhi ice-cream nai kha sakte

Taani-kahi nai par mai apne fav...

Sw-ha ha pata hai chocolate n strawberry special Sunday ab chale

Taani-bilkul chalo

SCENE CHANGE AT TAAVICYAM HOUSE

Armaan n ridz were sitting in hall thinking about how to make vicky realise that rey seriously love taani when door bell rang

Ridz-mai dekh kar aati ho

Ar-arre roko tum baitho mai dekhta ho

He goes n open door n found neha

Ar-arre neha tum

Neha-hello sir wo neha coming to meet vicky

Ar-haan haan aao na shayad tum usse samjha pao hum bhi wahi sooch rahe the k kaise vicky ko samjhai

Trio sit in hall

Ridz-mai baat kar ke dekho kya shayad mere maan jae

Neha-ha mam aap try karo na

Ar-ha basket agar tum mujh jaise flirt ko one man women bana sakte ho toh tum kuch bhi kar sakte ho

Ridz-armaan!!!

Ar-basket!!!

Ridz-armaan!!!

Ar-basket!!!

Ridz-ho gaya ab jao vicky k pass

Ar-haan haan

SCENE CHANGE AT NIL'S HOUSE

Nil n simmi were sitting n holding hands...while nil was showing some old photos of his..rey n vicky when they were together in school

Finally nil saw a pic in which rey n vicky were sitting exhausted beside nil who was on bed with a fractured leg

Sim-yeh kaise pic hai

Nil-arre yeh...yeh pic toh 9th k hai pata hai mera leg fracture ho gaya tha n mom n dad out of india the bussiness k liyeh like always n mai ek dum akela tha tab rey aur vicky ne mera dhyaan rakha...khud pure din bhar mere pass rhehte the...sach mai dost ho toh aise ho

Sim-hmm aur ab tumhare in dono dosto ko tumhare zarorat hai

Nil-matlab

Sim-nil...rey ne hamesha apne dosto k help k hai so its time to return the favour back...its time k hum vicky ko uske typical bhai k avtar se bahar nikale aur usse batae k rey sach mai taani se bohot pyaar karta hai

Nil-hmmm shayad tum sahi kheh rahe ho...kuch toh soochna parega

BACK IN TAAVICYAM HOUSE

Ridz enter vicky's room

Ridz-vicky

Vic-ji bhabhi

Ridz-wo tujhse kuch baat karne the

Vic-plz bhabhi agar aap taani aur rey k baare mai kuch khena chahate ho toh mujhe kuch baat nai karne

Ridz-par vicky rey sach mai taani se pyar...

Vic-plz bhabhi mujhe nai karne baat

A dispointed ridz came out n signal a no

Neha-let neha try once

Ridz-neha u sure

Neha-yeah sure neha is

Ar-acha theek hai jao tum

Neha went inside vicky's room

SCENE CHANGE

On road with bharat n aashi

Bharat n aashi were walking on road as bharat was dropping her home back n aashi choose to walk

Both were talking about what happen in collage

Aashi-aapko nai lagta k Vicky n rey k saath galat types behavior kiya hai

Bha-vicky toh bachpan se he sanka hai...aab use kon samjhae k rey aur taani mai sachi wali chemistry hai

Aashi-hmmm kuch toh karna parega

Bha-hmm kuch toh soochna parega...

Just then a guy came

Guy-aashi oh god tu yaha

Aashi-tarun(school friend) tu yaha oh my god(hugged him)

Tarun-kaise hai tu long time yr

Aashi-mai achi types ho aur tu kaise hai

Tarun-ab tere aur tere is types k bina kaisa honga mai akela ho tanha...

Both looked at each other n laughed hard

Aashi-tarun tu kabhi bhi sudhar types nai sakta

Bha thinks-saala yeh dono agar itna has rahe hai toh mere dimaag ka short kyu ho rela hai...saala yeh loocha he samjh mai nai aata

BACK IN TAAVICYAM HOUSE

Neha enter in vicky room

Neh-babu

Vic-kagu plz ab tum mujhse rey aur taani k baare mai baat mat karna

Neha-nai babu mai toh hamare baare mai baat karne aae ho

Vic-matlab...mere aur tumhare baare mai kya baat hai sab theek toh hai na

Neha-no babu...tum mere saath chaloge na

Vic-kaha kagu

Neha-promise me babu tum hamesha mera saath doge na

Vic-ofcourse kagu par hua kya hai

Neha-babu u serious about neha na u love me na

Vic-ha kagu par batao toh k hua kya hai

Neha-babu neha's brother coming from london...not knowing about us...neha have to tell him but he will not agree 4 u

Vic-par kyu maine kya kiya hai

Neha-he will be thinking u using me n not serious about me

Vic-par aisa nai hai mai aisa sooch bhi nai sakta mai sach mai tumse pyaar karta ho neha aur bohot serious bhi ho

Neha-knowing neha but he will say no 4 u

Vic(irritated)-par kyu...arre wo toh mujhe abhi jante bhi nai hai toh mere baare mai aise opinion kaise bana sakte hai

Neha-exactly neha's point babu...par tum bhi toh yahi kar rahe ho

Vic-matlab

Neha-tum bhi toh taani aur rey k liyeh mana kar rahe ho jabki tum toh rey ko school time se jante ho..still doubting him...we all knowing rey n trust him...wo sach mai taani se pyaar karta hai

Vic-par neha taani mere behan hai

Neha-so me also someone's sister...agar koi mujhe tumse bina koi chance diya alag kar de toh tumhe kaisa lagega

Vic was silent obviously he doesn't wanna loose his love

Neha-vicky giving a chance to rey...usse proof toh karne do k wo sach mai taani se pyaar karta hai

...ache se sooch lo yeh sirf tumhare behan nai balki tumhare dost rey k life ka bhi sawaal hai..

Neha kissed vicky on his head n left taavicyam house

SCENE CHANGE

LATE NIGHT IN COLLAGE

Two boys enter collage secretly to do something...they move towards area went inside that room n start doing something...

After they finish their work they call some one

Voice-hey rehmaan

Reh-ha bolo kaam hua

Voice-ha ho gaya

Reh-good...ab toh bas kal subah ka intezar hai(he cuts call)

Reh- ab kal subah aisa kand hoga k hamare pyaare GS aur ACS tum dono k life hell ban jaege n I promise u guys is baar kuch garbar nai hogi

SCENE CHANGE

Amar was working in a restaurant as a part time job...when he realizes some one open door

Amar(without looking)-tottly the caf it tolsed(sorry the caf is closed)

Voice-kya mujhe bhi ek coffe nai milege

Hearing voice amar looks up to find rinni standing with a box in her hand n smiling

Amar-alle lini tum taha taise( arre rinni tum yaha kaise)

Rinni-wo mai yaha se nikal rahe thi toh socha k tumse mil lo...chalo na dinner karte hai

Amar-pal is waqt konta hotel tula hoga( par is waqt konsa hotel khula hoga)

Rinni-kisne kaha k hum hotel ja rahe hai dinner karne...yeh dekho mai khana le kar aae ho pata hai maine banaya hai

Amar-sach mai lao

He taste it n it was seriously superb

Amar-tow linner tey toh totat he tasty hai( wow rinni yeh toh bohot he tasty hai)

Rinni-wo maine apni nani se sekha hai

Amar-pal tumhe toh tet tab tasant nai tha na(par tumhe yeh sab pasand nai tha na)

Rinni-par tumhe toh acha lagta hai na

Both look at each other 4 a while but amar turns away

Rinni-aaj nai amar aaj tumhe batana he hoga k tum mujhse kyu door rhehte ho...kya mai itne buri ho

Amar-nai rinni aisa kuch nai hai...bas hum saath nai ho sakte

Rinni-kyu nai ho sakte amar...mere taraf dekho kya tum mujhe pasand nai karte

Both again looked at each other

Rinni(while lost in his eyes)-I love u amar...bohot pyaar karte ho tumse

Amar just looked at her n hold her face n they were about to kiss when amar realise what he is doing so he back off

Rinni looked at him shocked n amar left from there

SCENE CHANGE

Taayam came back to their house where they saw armaan n ridz in hall n vicky trying to watch tv but he was looking lost somewhere

Ridz saw them

Ridz-arre aa gaye tum log chalo sab desert khate hai

Taani-nai bhabhi mera maan nai hai

Vicky who was giving a thought to his conversation with neha...looked shocked towards taani as she never say no to desert

Vicky-kyu tu desert kyu nai kha rahe

Taani(looking with anger)-kyu ab desert khane k liyeh bhi kya tujhese permission lene parege kya

Vicky-tu dhang se baat nai kar sakte kya

Taani-nai kar sakte happy now

Vicky-f9 bhaad mai ja

Taani-f9!!!!

Both went to their room in anger n ar.ridz n sw looked at each other

Ar-hame jald he kuch na kuch karna hoga warna yeh dono aise he ladte rahenge

Ridz-ha yeh toh hai

Sw-mai toh yeh sooch raha ho k kal jab early morning vicky rey ko practice mai milega toh dono ek dusre ko phir face karenge...pata nai vicky kaise react karega

Ar-ridz looked at him agreeing with his fear

SCENE CHANGE

Early morning in reharsal hall

Nil-simmi,bharat-aashi,rinni-amar n neha was their thinking how to help rey

Nil-yr kuch toh karna he parega

Simmi-par kya

Bharat-saala yeh vicky k bheje mai baat kaise ghusae kuch samjh he nai aa raha hai

Aashi-guys hame kuch aisa types karna hoga k vicky rey k liyeh maan jae

Amar-par kya

Rinni-guys mera pass ek idea hai kyu na hum rey k tareef kare vicky k samne

All looked at her shocked

Nil-kya idea hai be

Simmi-awesome idea rinni

Bharat-ha be bas ab vicky aa jae

Just then rey enter n all slap their head

Nil-abbe yeh kyu aa gaya

Rey-hi guys kya hua aise kyu react kar rahe ho

All-nothing nothing

Just then vicky enter n both ry n vicky looked at each other...vicky was looking as if he will kill him

Neha(knowing him)-babu come sit na

Nil signals all to start plan

Nil-rey tu kitna acha hai

Rey n vicky looked at him confused

Simmi-ha rey tum kitne decent ho

Rey(super confused)-thanks simmi

Aashi-ha rey aap kitne...kitne..(thinking)

Bharat-yeh khehna chahate hai k tu kitna sweet nature ka hai

Aashi-ha yahi types khehna chahate thi

Rey(more confused)-okkk thanks guys

Rinni-rey tum na best GS ho

Amar-ha aur hardworking bhi ho

Neha-neha thinking u will keep any girl happy

Now both rey n vicky looked at her understanding y all were praising rey

Vic-guys rey k ek aur quality hai

All-kya

Vic(looking at rey)-mr. reyansh shinghania ko dosto k pith k peeche(behind the back) hurt karna bohot achese aata hai...hai na rey

All slap their head...n taayam who were coming heard vicky

Taani got furious he went n help rey's hand n say-guys rey k ek aur quality hai

All-kya

Taani-wo apne dosto k liyeh kuch bhi kar sakte hai aur wo apne kisi bhi dost k koi bhi baat ka bura nai mante phir chahe wo unke baare mai kaisa bhi soochte ho

Saying this she takes rey with her

Rey-taani yeh kya kiya...kya zarorat thi

Taani-zarorat hai vicky ko samjhna hoga k mai koi doll nai ho jisse wo hamesha apne life time tak saja kar rakh sake...

Rey-par taani

Taani-mai locker room ja rahe sharon bhabhi ne bulaya tha unhe kuch baat karne the ho baad mai milte ho...saying this she left

Rey was coming back n d3 team was coming out from reharsal hall when they heard some shouting voice...all went to check

They saw rahmaan arguing with his friend manav

Manav-tera dimaag kharab ho gaya hai kya tu aisa kaise kar sakta hai

Rahmaan-mai kuch bhi kar sakta ho

Man-par itna kaise gir sakta hai tu

Rah-us rey aur sw se badla lene k liyeh mai kuch bhi kar sakta ho

Man-par taani aur sh kyu

Rah-kyuki taani aur sh dono he sw aur rey k kamzori hai

Man-par rahmaan "girls locker room mai camera lagana n record karna jab wo change kar rahe hai abhi" this is seriously sick

D3 gang got shocked

Rey..sw..n vicky looked at each other all thought of taani n sh but anyone could do..rey starts running like a mad n all follows him...

While running rey got hit with sh

Rey-tu yaha

Sh-ha kyu kya hua

Sw-taani kaha hai

Sh-wo actually hum baat kar rahe the toh uske dress peh kafi pani gir gaya toh who change kar rahe hai

Rey-sw-vic- SHIT!!!

Rey grab a cloth which was lying beside a corner n ran towards girls locker room

All follows him...

Running like a maniac rey enter locker room shouting

Rey-taani ruko...(rey closed his eyes n cover taani by that cloth...not knowing that taani haven't started changing)

All enter n saw a covered taani n rey closed his eyes...vicky saw rey...

Vic thinks-(agar yeh chahata toh taani ko aise he dekh sakta tha par nai kiya...kya rey sach mai taani se pyaar karta hai)

Taani-kya hua rey aap aise

Sw-taani tu theek hai na

Taani-ha bhai hua kya

Vic-phele yaha se chalo

All came out n told taani about rahmaan plan n she got dam shocked n start crying

Sh-taani calm down kuch nai hua relax...but taani was still crying

Rey(cupping her face)-taani...taani...taani look at me(taani looks at her)

Rey-taani mai ho na tumhare saath tumhe kuch nai hone donga kabhi bhi I promise

All(except vic) smiled n hugged taarey but heard someone shouting n it was vicky...

Vicky saw rahmaan about to hit rey with a rod

Vicky-rey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... goes n hold his hand...

Huh finally done with chapter 36...hope u guys like it..plz comments guys

Precap-rahmaan got suspended n vicky try to say sorry to taani n manaoing her...but soon face the biggest problem of their life... "parents of taayam n vicky got to know about their children living together"

What will happen now???

Will the cousins will get separated again???

Will taayam parents agree 4 rey???

Wanna know???

Stay tune guys...love u all


NOTE- GUYS SORRY STILL I M NOT ABLE TO COMMENT ON UR REPLY BUT I'LL STILL TRY...SO KEEP COMMENTING

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey i have read ur all chp early
all chp are amazing must say
u r a very good writer u make whole damn interesting
taarey n swaron relationship is fab
n of course two bro sis bond also
all other couple are also awesome
please iss rehamn ka part end karo
awesome part of stry is that armaan n riddhima are also in the stry n there character are superb as bhai n bhabhi
chp 36 is awesome
tg rey understand sharon
loved taayam n sharey bond
finally vicky gone expect taarey
hope everythinf will be fine as per precap
update next part soon n pm me😊
Edited by SWEETPOOJA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww Rey finally know about Sharon asthma, their scene was very emotional...
I love when Swayam eyes goes wide and tell Taani not to hide anything from him lol
Both possessive bhais are hilarious, Swayam tricking Rey and kiss Sharon was so cute
Taani is so angry at Vicky, rids and armaan and Neha and everyone else trying to help is amazing
I love the way Taani stood by Rey in the RH and took him from there
This disgusting jerk stoop to the lowest putting a camera in the girls locker room 😡
Rey running like his life depends on it was amazing, him closing his eyes and covering his Taani was very senti...
Taarey love each other so much, I can't wait for the boys to kick that jerk again
Superb update, I love it
Recap is very interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its an amazing chap dear...!!!
I totally loved it from bottom of my heart...!!!
Loved the way everyone were trying to help Rey...!!!
Loved the way Neha tried to convince Vicky...!!!
Actually loved everything...!!!
Just waiting for further chaps...!!!
So plzzz update soon...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome chappy

loved it to the core

Sharon n rey part was superb

rey comes to know about sharons asthama

Swayum kiss to sharon 😆 cute part

all couple part are amazing

rrhman 😡how dare he girls locker room mein camera 😡

taarey part was bit emotinal and mindblowing

loved it how rey closed his eyes and coverd taani

update soon

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