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Posted: 12 years ago
hey firstly so sorry for the comment...!!!
just read last 5 parts together...!!!
all the updates were super duper fantastic...!!!
very beautiful...!!👏⭐️
love the way you have described each and everything...!!!
awsum choice for sameer's family...!!! loved his talks with his mom and dad...!!!!
and his scenes with his sister... awww they were lovely...!! and their convo was amazing...!!! just love this cute little bonding of bro and sis...!!!! wow she was even the first one to wish him...!!! <3 <3
and his bonding with his team awww...!!! bhale hi arjun doesn't show he do care for his friend...!!! jabhi to jhatt se trio ko gajar ke halwe ke baare mai bta diya and sameer ke reaction..!!! ❤️
shree riya chottu scenes were funny...!!! hahah sameer teasing shree was superb... bechare ka mast popat bnaya ...!!😆 loving this playful side of sameer...!!!
and ofcourse they way he samjhaofied riya was just awsum... loved their talks... dono ne hi ek dusre ko kuch na kuch smajhaya...!!!
fb as superb...!!!! the way arjun ran behind sameer and sameer's punishment for the teacher😆😆 wow they even bought house next to each other so they could always be together... but destiny had other plans for them...!!!
basketball scenes were amazing...!! love how indirectly hi sai but they played against each other😉
it was perfect according to sameer and arjun's nature...!!👍🏼 hahah ye alag baat bechare shree riya to puppets hi ban gaye😆
ariya scenes were lovely... but ye arjun kabhi dant na nai chodega😆
his talk with his happy mind voice aka roshni was beautiful a treat to read...!! his expressions reactions feelings everything was perfect...!!! glad he realized about sameer and his friendship and about riya...!! that he likes her...
and your description about love...!!👏⭐️ am speechless it was beautiful...!!
hmm so finally anu is here...!!! and glad that sameer had gone to pick her up...!!! their convo were truly amazing...!!! abhi se caring chalu😉 badia hai...!!!
aur anu and riya ki meeting and riya ke child like antics awsum...!!!! hahaha she didn't even wants to share sweets with sameer...!!!😆
aur end mai sameer and anu ke thoughts❤️ dono hi thinking about each other badia hai...!!!
ye new forensic expert kon hai jo join kar rhi h?
continue soon...!!!
P.S. the banner is superb...!!
Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
firstly to di i loved that siggie of all the characters arjun-riya,sam-annu😊
i loved that precap which u hav written...aapka wo love story,relationship wala concept was lovely so true,and beautifull...mujhe sach mein lag raha tha m watching a yash chopra movie...maza aa gaya padhke...i was wondering jab precap itna dhaansu hai to aage kya hoga or rather i shud say aagaz aisa hai to anjam kya hoga...well wahi hoga jo manzure bhavna di hoga😆


part 4A
arjun-riya convo was nice bt as usual arjun bein arjun sys k bina koi baat over nahi hoti
omg arjun-roshni convo wow...that was touching..roshni ne wo sab keh diya jo shayad arjun kabhi accept hi nahi karta abt riya..m amazed..lovely
so arjun and riya lyk each other bt obviously arjun will not accept this and riya cant deny this...


part 4B
sameer to annu ko dekhte hi kho gaya lost in another world ...dammit rathore kuch to hua hai kuch ho gaya hai😉😆
rathore is so sweet and mazak bhi karta hai😆annu ka concern ahaan abhi se aate hi apne saath dinner (ab tumne shree ganesh kar hi diya hai to aisa na ho ki roz sam k saath hi khaana pade😉)
dono ki thinking bhi milti hai
aur sister bonding ki kya baat karu...i wish meri bhi sister hoti😭 abhi to shaitaan bhai se kaam chalana pad raha hai😭😆
again both of them were thinking abt each other..again raabta redefined...😃
a song fr them --\\
pehli nazar mein aisa jaadu kar diya tera ban baitha hai mera jiya


lovely update di🤗 i dont hav wrds to say thank you fr this
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ devildiva21 ... Thank you so much for your detailed review... i'm really happy that u liked it and hope I don't disappoint you all... 😊😊😊
Forensic expert aa rahi hai... wait and watch 😛
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@ Shona14...Thanks... par tumne ye clear nahi bataya ki updates prologue ke takkar ke they ya nahi?😉
awww... hum hai na sisters... hum yaha I-F par ho masti kar lenge 😛
And yes...even I was confused between ek duje ke vaste and Raabta... ubt then for Yash Chopra I chose Ek Duje Ke Vaste 😊
song... 😳... maine us situation par wohi song rakha tha...par ye update bahut lamba ho gaya tha... isliye song hatana pada 😛
awww. ... don't thank me for this... I should be thanking you for encouraging me 😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Friends,

I'm back with Part 5. It is a small one. Another love story to begin. Lets see inka kya hota hai 😊
But before that, lets meet our new forensic expert:
Dr. Navika Sharma
A Forensic expert in the team. She is from a simple middle class family. She became a forensic expert only because of the sad incident happened with her sister. Her sister was burnt alive by her husband for dowry and he could be nailed only because of forensic evidences. She has a mission in life that a criminal should not get away just because there was no evidence against him.
(What a coincidence, today's episode highlighted the dowry issue😊)
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Monday, 4 March
Anwesha joins her project. Riya joins her duty.
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ETF office
9:10 AM
Sameer enters the office.
Arjun notices him and looks at the watch.
9:30 AM
In the conference room.
Sameer: Team, jaise ki aap sabko pata hai ki humara naya Forensic lab set up ho chuka hai... aaj ek nayi forensic expert humein join karne wali hain...
Shree(whispers in Chhotu's ears): team mein ek aur ladki... chalo Riya ko company mil jayegi gossip karne ke liye ... waise bhi ladkiyan aur karti kya hain?

Shree and Chhotu chuckle.
Riya hears this and she glares at Shree.
Around 9:45 AM
The new forensic expert, Dr. Navika Sharma, a chubby, cute girl, wearing pink framed spectacles enters the ETF office and asks for ACP Rathod. The receptionist directs her to the discussion room.
She enters the discssion room.
Navika: ACP Sameer Rathod?
Sameer(looks at her): yes?
Navika: Good morning sir... I'm Dr. Navika Sharma...(giving her appointment letter copy to him)... ye mera appointment letter... as a forensic expert...
Sameer(takes the letter): Oh.. yes Dr. Navika... Good morning... welcome to the team...
He introduces her to the team.
Sameer gives her the directions to the lab and she goes to check the lab.

Shree is smitten looking at her. He somehow manages to smile when Sameer introduced him. He keeps on staring at her.
Chhotu and Riya notice this and they continue to look at Shree. After Navika left the room he casually turns his head and find Riya and Chhotu giving him suspicious look.
Shree gets nervous but tries to cover up.
Shree (whispers in Chhotu's ears): pink colour ka chashma... impossible...(thinking) par ispe suit kar raha tha (smiles)
But both Riya and Chhotu raise their eye-brows and make a note in their mind to take this up with Shree later. To avoid their gaze, Shree turns to his laptop, but not to complete his pending work, but to check Navika's profile.
After some time Navika comes back to discussion room after checking the lab.
Sameer: Navika... lab dekh liya tumne?
Navika: Yes sir...
Sameer: koi problem ho to mujhe contact kar lena... koi equipments, chemicals ... kisi bhi cheez ki zarurat ho to bata dena... mai approve kar doonga...
Navika: Yes sir... Thank you (smiles)
Shree(thinking): itne din se bol raha hoon... mera portable lie-detector machine approve kar do... approve karna to door... ulta mujhe hi daant diya... ki uska naam liya ... to saare upgradations cancel karwa doonga... huh... Khadooos... Hitler
Sameer and Arjun have to go to Commisioner office for a meeting. They leave.
By this time, Shree has checked her profile in the system database. She was gold medalist topper in MBBS and her post graduation in Forensic sciences.
Shree is impressed
Shree: Navika, tumne top kiya tha na MBBS mein?
Navika: haan... aapko kaise pata?
Shree: wo abhi maine tumhari profile dekhi.
Navika is surprised. Riya and Chhotu chuckle as their doubts are slowly getting confirmed.
Shree(a little embarrassed): wo tumhari professional profile... system database mein...
Navika: ohh... ok...
Shree: Itne achchhe marks they tumhare... to tumne Forensic sciences jaisi field kyun chuni? I mean ... tum to koi bhi dusra specialization kar ke ek bright career bana sakti thi... kisi bade hospital mein achchha high paying job mil sakta tha tumhe...
Navika: Sir! aap sahi keh rahey hain... mai aisa kar to sakti thi... par karna nahi chahti thi... aise bahut se cases hotey hain humare yaha jismein mujrim pakde to jatey hain... par kayi baar jurm saabit na honey se wo bach nikaltey hain... aur aaj ke zamane mein Forensic science ki uski madad se jurm saabit hone ke chances badh jatey hain... aur agar sab hi ek high profile, high paying job ke bare mein sochne lagey to ... humare samaj se aise mujrimo ko saza dilwane mein police ka saath kaun dega... (smiles)... Humare bahadur police officers apni jaan par khel kar in mujrimo ko pakadtey hain... aur jurm saabit na honey par ye log chhoot jatey hain... to agar hum jaise doctors unke saath milkar apna thoda bhi contribution dete hain to ... 100 % to nahi lekin kaafi hadd tak jurm ko control kiya ja sakta hai...
Everyone looks at her with appreciation.
Shree is impressed. Shree too had similar thoughts. He too could have got a high paying job as a software professional in US, but he chose to join Police force as technical expert for the same reason.
Shree: Tumhari lab to tumne dekh hi li hai... Ab chalo mai tumhe baki ka ETF office dikhata hoon...
Riya and Chhotu look at each other with raised eye-brows surprised at Shree's dare.
Navika feels a little awkward.
Shree: arre... zyada tension mat lo... tumhe kahi aur kaam nahi karna hai... mai to bas Canteen, Coffee machine, pantry area dikhane ki baat kar raha hoon... aur saath hi mein coffee bhi pi lenge...theek hai? chalo ab...
Navika: OK sir...
Shree: BTW Navika... u dont need to call me sir... tum mujhe Shree bula sakti ho...
By now, Riya and Chhotu are having tough time controlling their laughter.
Navika(hesitantly): Ok Shree
Navika looks at Riya and Riya is looking at her and she understands that Navika is asking her to join them for coffee, but she doesn't want to disturb Shree.
Riya: Nahi... mujhe abhi coffee nahi peeni...
Navika: Chandrakant sir... aap chalenge coffee peene...
Chhotu doesn't realize that she is talking to him. No one calls him "Chandrakant" here ...and "sir" ... never even in dreams.
Shree: Aye Chhote!!! tere se kuch poochh rahi hai Navika... jawaab to de...
Chhotu (snaps out with a shock): haan... kya? mujhe kab kuch poochha...
Shree: Chhotu... abhi abhi usne kaha Chandrakant Sir... ab yaha Sir ka to pata nahi... par Chandrakant to tu hi hai na
Riya giggles.
Chhotu: oh!!!! aye... Navika... mujhe tum Chhotu hi bulao... usi ki aadat hai mujhe...
Navika(a little embarrassed): par mai aise kaise aapko Chhotu bula sakti hoon...
Riya: Jaise sab bulatey hain... aur mujhe bhi Ma'm mat bulana... dont worry... itni formality ki zarurat nahi hai... Formality sirf chief aur second-in-command ke saamne hi rakho...
Chhotu: waise tum kya keh rahi thi?
Navika: wo coffee...
Chhotu: nahi... mujhe coffee nahi peeni... tum dono jao...
Navika: OK...
Shree and Navika leave the conference room. After making sure, they are away... Chhotu and Riya burst into laughter giving each other a hi5.
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Shree was smitten looking at her. Though he made fun of her pink spectacle frames in front of Chhotu and Riya, he actually felt that they suited her. And after checking her profile and knowing her thoughts, he was impressed and he observed her more closely.
Shree is actually friendly in nature, but today he got a strange feeling. When he asked Navika for coffee, and she asked Riya and Chhotu to join them, Shree was praying that they should refuse.
He wanted to go alone with Navika, but he didn't know the reason why. He felt a little guilty at this thought because Riya and Chhotu were his best friends.
Shree shows her the office, his desk and his gadgets, canteen, pantry and then they have coffee together. Shree is lost looking at her.
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Later in the evening, while leaving
Shree: Chhotu, ek kaam kar... tu Riya ko drop kar de... mai Navika ko drop kar deta hoon...
Chhotu is about to say something but Riya chips in.
Riya: theek hai Shree... bye
Navika feels a little awkward.
Navika: nahi... mai chali jaungi...
Chhotu: arre Navika... der ho gayi hai... akeli mat jao... Shree tumhe chhod dega...
Riya: haan... wo mujhe bhi drop kar deta hai aksar... jab mai apni gadi nahi laati hoon... he is a good company...
Navika gives up.
They bid good bye to each other.
(Later this becomes a routine for Shree to drop Navika)
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For next one week, life continues with Anwesha's project work progressing and ETF getting busy in the cases.
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Saturday, 9 March
11:00 AM
Riya goes to Arjun to ask about Basket Ball practice.
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So how was it?
Please excuse the spelling mistakes...
Let me know your views...
Pre-cap : Basket Ball practice begins, Arjun notices Sameer's weird behaviour. Those who wish to receive the PM, please add me to the Buddy list and don't thank me for the PM 😉
Regards,
Bhavna

Edited by bgargate - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
that gal is der in some serial na??
shes cute ...will luk good with shree
wat will happen now at basket ball court will ariya fight again?
aila i am desperate yaar to know kya hoga ??
pls update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
superhot super cute dhasu update
that navika chick is der in some srial na
i am eagerly waiting to see wat happens now in the basket ball court
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part...
lykd dr navika...
shree was impressed wid her...
precap sounds interesting... basketbal match... looking forward to it...
update soon...
Edited by nakshatra92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ah love story blossming in ETF... Shree is completely smitten by Navika... loved their interactions... Rathore ws late for office*shocked*... intresting precap... update soon
Loved Navika's CS
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update. ..
love each single word ...
continue ur gr8 work... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part.
Wow Navika as a forensic doctor, superb choice 😊
Loved it. Eagerly waiting for the next part...precap sounds so exciting 😉
Continue soon 😊

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