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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Bhavna..

Welcome to the writer's land, I'd say.. Life will never be the same ever again.. 😉

The Character sketches were self-explanatory.. So Sameer and Arjun have always been opposite poles; both in the past and even today..
Yet, they had been the thickest of friends.. I would love to read more on their past..

Keerti Nagpure opposite our Rowdy Rathore is a brilliant move.. Somehow I always end up picturing a soft and sweet woman opposite him coz that's how he is from within.. (Not that I don't like Rayesha.. Adore them to bits!)

Just finished reading all parts..

Ahem!

'Love is in the air'.. 😉

This is such a refreshing and light story, very well penned down by you, dear..

Arjun-Roshni's relationship in the past is just how we imagine it to be.. Innocent, pure and adorable..

The rest of the ETF-ians are similar to their on-screen avatars yet with your special touch which makes them even more likeable..

Anvesha Mukherjee is surely ' a match made in heaven' for our Khadoos ACP.. She's pretty, mature, sweet and just what Rathore needs.. Lookin forward to their interactions in the future.. I'm sure they'll be a treat to read.. 😃

Riya, here is similar yet drastically different from the on-screen version and the change is what I loved the most.. She isn't afraid of speaking her mind, yet knows her boundaries and is just as lively...

Arjun Ji ke baare mein kya bolun? His on-screen version and various FF avatars steal a part of my heart every single time.. And your Arjun seems to be a little mellowed down, which is a change I really appreciate and like.. Varna, inki love story# 2 start karna mushkil hi nahi, namumkin hai.. 🤪

But.. But the cherry on top in this beautiful story of yours is undoubtedly Arjun and Sameer's friendship.. And kudos to you for having described that so well.. 😃
Their scenes in the past were absolutely delightful and the present is just as sad.. But I'm sure with the presence of two lovely ladies in their lives, things are about to change for the better..

The latest entrant, Navika seems to fit in perfectly as well.. Aha.. Shree Sir.. Ab aayega maza.. Bring it on! 😛


Sorry about being late.. I promise to be a regular now on.. 😉

And please PM me when u update.. Thank you for all the PM's..

Good luck.. 😃


Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super duper amazing update...loved it a lot.Arey wah...
Humare Techie expert toh Forensic expert ke upar fida hogaya...
Aww...
Navika is so sweet and cute...
I just loved her thoughts.
It was really very true...
Loved the way she introduced herself infront of the whole team.
Shree toh pehle di mein hi baazi mar gaya...
Shree checked her profeessional profile to know more about her...
Shree has fallen for her...
Riya and Chotu exchanged glances and also made sure about it to talk to Shree...
Shree showed her the full ETF. Pantry area,canteen,his cabin,his gadgets.
Loved it when Shree was mentally cursing Rathod...
Haha... It was truly very funny...
Anvesha is busy with her project work,while ETF is busy with their cases.
Shree offered a lift to Navika.
Wow...
At last,she went with Shree...
Yay...
Riya tells Arjun about her basketball practice session...
Precap is interesting...
Arjun sensing weirdness in Rathod bhai's behaviour.
Hope,nothing is serious...
Thanks for the pm,Bhavna tai.
Loved it a lot.
Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤣🤣

What's happening to these ETF men?😕😆 One by one each falling through like balls in the basket.Mass chemical attack by Cupid!Nice!👍🏼

Loved Navika👏 Mom watches her serial though not for her.There's an older couple in the show looks like.Lovely choice.

Shree ki toh nikal padi😉.Our Forum loves naam karan of jodis.😆 This couple would be ShriKa I guess😛

Wow! The two hotties will soon cross swords on the basket ball court Wonder what Arjun's reaction will be when he sees Sameer Rathore is now Sameer Romeo😈😆

Waitinggg for more...
Edited by -Carrie- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
m liking this new girl...
wat happened to shree😲 shree was praising navika coz of her specs...and navika ko dekhte latoo ho gaya 😆 log aankhen dekhkar impress hote hai shree chashme k frame dekhkar impress hua😆
navika ki baaton se shree k sath sath main bhi mpressed ho gayi hun😉
itna kyu chance maarne ki koshish kar raha hai shree😆
rofling shree-riya and chotu🤣
lovely update di...dil khush ho jata hai padhke😛...precap is interesting...continue soon😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part dear.. Loved ur update..
Payal_156 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Di itna late update !
huh mera record tod diya apne :'(
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Posted: 12 years ago
Di
mis samjun bro here :(
chotu n sir omg 🤣
aww my sam bro hitler wah hehe
navika ke equip par ha n shree lol...
haww!
chiya was cute..
shree dekha jo navika ko dil me bji guitar 🤣
Ekdum flat
yahan bi long drive yay
annu di busy rhoge :p
sam bro weird apki wajah se :D
amazing di
next part want arjun bhaiya
sys lol
🤗
Tc..
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was such a wonderful update :) loved it
love the girl you chose for the role of navika
oh no her sister got burnt alive by her husband :(
awww shree is already smitten by navika <3
and shree thinks pink color glasses suits navika :)
khadoos hitler 😆
shree has already checked navika's whole profile interesting
loved riya and chotu's reaction seeing shree like that :)
chotu didn't even realize that navika is calling her 😆
how sweet shree showed her the whole ETF
and shree dropped navika home :)
precap seems interesting
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue very soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shree toh pura latoo hogaya navika par
loved his eagarness
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
chavanni aka Navika as the forensic expert!ahaa i like her and she would look absolutely adorable with Shree <3
her sis was burst alive cause of dowry issues
So Shree ji is smitten by her already :P
😆😆awwh lie detector machine approve nahi hua :P khadoos hitler LOL
so shree checked out her profile too..kya baat hai😉
loving Chotu and Riya's reactions...the trio are adorable <3
Chandrakant sir😆 chotu ko samjh mai bhi nahi aaya😆
Shree shows her the ETF building and also drops her home <3
Lovely and very sweet update <3
do contd soon :D

Edited by SilentSilver - 12 years ago

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