@Payal... Thanks...Congo... u first again... yes, YC ka charm hi alag hai...Silsila, Chandni, Lamhe, DTPH...đ...
ye mera pehla Ariya effort tha... aur jaise maine kaha tha full fledged ArNi nahi likh sakti lekin Roshni ko Arjun ke dil ki awaz bana kar ek chhota sa conversation likha ... I hope wo tumko pasand aaya hoga...
Roshni... nahi... usko bhulana itna asaan nahi hai... isliye to abhi Arjun Riya ko sirf Like karta hai... Love hone mein abhi time hai đ
Banner... maine pehli baar koi edit banaya... Thanks ... i'm happy ki sabko achchha laga... đ
Annu-Sam ki drive... haan...maine socha ki aatey hi dono ko milwa dete hain... đ ...
Song... unbelievable... tumko pata hai... maine yehi song dala tha... isi jagah par... "pehle nazar mein kaisa jadoo kar diya" ... par Ariya part bhi join kiya to update bahut bada ho gaya... isliye mujhe wo song hatana pada đđ...
mushkil sawal wala part likte time to mai bhi bahut hasi thi đ...
case ke thru mujhe ek social message dena tha...đ
Riya ke Laddoo... of course tumhare liye koi tumhari pasand ki cheez laye aur wo tumhe apne boss ke saath share karni pade to gussa to ayega hi đ
Aur itna bada update likh ke mai thak gayi hoon... next update thoda chhota hoga đ
So wait n watch đ
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@AnjuRish... Thanks...Please don't do this... ur boss will kill me... đłđł
... did u post that love paragraph on FB... gimme the link đ
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@Marnali04... Thanks... but I already replied to you... its not Annu đ...
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@Zuby... Thanks... but to be very honest... it was not straight from heart... it was straight from Bollywood đ...
Arjun-Roshni... it was not actually Arjun-Roshni... it was Arjun's mind voice... the happy one... and he smiled and chuckled at his own funny thoughts imagining being with Roshni... he went into past... when Roshni was alive he was like that only đ
And yes... Arjun is a man from story book only đ ... it is impossible to find someone like this in real life...
Anwesha... definitely she was embarrassed that her sis's boss is coming all the way to drop her home, that too because of her sis's stupidity...đłđłđł.. And the guy lives alone... he will reach home late... and its really boring to be alone... she too lives alone... so she understands that...so she assumed that he will have dinner with them..đđđ... and anyways for courtesy too she had to ask him for dinner... right???? đđđ ... And if Sam had had his dinner he would have told her that I'm done with it... so she could have again informed Riya... But Sam was hungry too... us par se Annu dinner pe invite kar rahi hai...thoda sa embarrassment hai ...lekin "na" bolne ka to scope hi nahi hai đđđ... remember..."he liked her caring nature" đđđ
Sister bonding is always cute... u explained that very well with your sisters' example đđ ...
For banner... I made an edit for the first time... glad that u liked it...
And for Riya... Her Di is anyways coming, but last 2 days were really eventful for her...talking to Sam, talking to Arjun, basket ball... it was not easy to shrug off those thoughts so easily...
After these 3 big parts + the Note... i'm really exhausted... next update will be a short one...đ ...
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@unishaz ... Thanks đ
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@fatima15 ... Thanks đđ ... yes we are all filmy ... đł...
Yes... Arjun is smiling now... ummm... Roshni is not there now... remember my comment in red? ... it is actually Arjun himself... his happy mind... he himself knows that he is Akdu... đ ... he was telling himself that he need to change... but his current sad state of mind is in denial because his priority is to catch Sikandar and punish him...then only he will be able to change...
As of now... since Riya respects both Sam and Arjun, she is trying to make peace between them... She was just taking a chance and she succeeded to a great extent...And definitely she is falling in love with Arjun...
Sam... is a gentleman...đ always ready to help his team members...đ ... at times he shouts at them, scolds them but he cares for them...
Ofcourse Annu was a Zor ka jhatka for him... he didn't expect it...
Sisters bond is always special đ¤
Of course u wouldn't like to share ur favourite stuff with ur boss and then boss reading ur mind... u would feel like disappearing... đłđł
Sam is thinking about Annu...âşď¸... And Annu too was thinking good about him... she liked and respected him... but as of now... nothing more at her side...đ
New forensic expert... yes... not a very prominent character... a supporting one... đ
Thank you so much for loving the story...đ¤đ¤đ¤... when I thought of this concept I never knew I would actually write it and when I wrote it, I never thought I will post it on I-F... But now I feel it was a good decision... đđ
Your compliments and comments motivate me a lot and also add to my responsibility... that I shouldn't disappoint you all đ
Next update... would be short one...đ... wait and watch...
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@Pihu ... Thanks đ
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@Aisha... Thanks ...yes... we all have a little of Bollywood effect on us...đ
Thanks... u understood it correctly... eve I never Sam - Annu meeting to be in filmy or Ekta style... I had read a lot of stories where the guy and the girl first get into a fight and then fall in love... I didn't want to repeat the concept... it is not necessary to fight before falling in love đ ... a simple meeting in a parking lot of Airport too can lead to a love story đ...
Now a compliment coming from a film making student is something very very very big achievement for me...đ ... Thanks a lot...
I was so scared with that part... It was the most risky part for me to write...It was a big time experiment for me... I really didn't know if that concept is going to work or not... readers will connect with it or not... my message will be conveyed or not... For other characters, it was comparatively simpler...
Riya and Sam didn't have such conflicting minds... their thought process was straight...
Annu is in a little depression and has conflicting thoughts but she doesn't have any aim in life to stick to... she is moving with the flow of life... more abput her past life will be coming up in future updates đ
But Arjun has a mission in life... to catch Sikandar.
In addition to it, his love for his dead wife is not allowing him to move on in life... ... so I tried to use his love, his happy memories with his wife to help him realize that he shouldn't feel guilty for being happy...
but i'm really really really happy that it worked đđđ...
Your compliment means a lot to me...đłđł
For Riya's mission, its easy to guess, I took it from Aisha's efforts in actual serial... the way she tried to talk to Rathod and he responded positively...
Sam - Annu ... it is another risky part...i'm trying to make it more realistic nad believable... hope it turns out to be convincing ...
trying to update soon đ
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@Naina... Thanks đ ... hugs to you too đ¤
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@Christee ... Thanks đ ... Sam-Annu are my favourite too... that's whe they are my hero and heroine đł... will update soon
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@Vidya ... Thanks...đ ... Yes... I had to kick start Ariya track too ... But Arjun has just developed the liking towards Riya... no love as of now... but they will get more chances to spend time together now... so things might move forward...
And yes... you can expect some stark changes in Arjun's behaviour... đ ... this part was actually meant to prepare the readers for it... they shouldn't be shocked at his changed actions... đ...
For Annu deciding about dinner... I have already replied to Zuby above ... have a look at that... Riya ki stupidity ki wajah se Sam ko usey drop karne aana pada... to dinner offer karna to banta hai... bechara akela rehta hai... koi khilane wali bhi nahi hai... đđđ and Annu to hai hi "Mummy" figure... sabki fikar rehti hai usko... đ
Her past is not as tragic as Arjun...
Sometimes something just happen in our life... call it destiny or what... we don't have control over it... it happens because it has to happen... but sometimes we tend to hold ourselves responsible for it and depress ourselves... we blame ourselves for no fault... it is just a state of mind... we know somewhere back of our mind that we are not at fault, but we make it a habit to think like that...
Annu is going through one such situation for long. She has closed herself in a shell. And definitely Sameer would play an important role in bringing her out of this shell đ
More to be revealed in future updates...
The forensic expert is a supporting character... not a prominent one... đ ...
will update soon đ
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@Manali James Bond đ ... Thanks... đđđđ ... nahi... mai writing to nahi karti... but unki filmein bahut dekhti hoon...
And ye story pe un sab movies ka bahut impact hai...
Thank you so much for loving it... it is a very big encouragement ...
will try to update soon
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@Leki ... Thanks... I know Ariya fans do not like it when he scolds her... but things are changing... hope u like the future parts too...đ. sisters are always loving...đ
Yes... Rathod got a shock... and he was happy...đ ... yes Annu too has a past... see my reply above in the same post to Vidya... I have given a little details bout her state of mind...
it will be coming in future parts...
will update soon...
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