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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part...
thoughts and inner turmoils of 4 entirely different persons... awesome... 👏
lykd arjun-roshni convo... atlast arjun took first step and accepted his feelings for riya...
lvd riya annu bonding...
sameer ws shoccked to see HER...
lvd it...
note u mentioned, lykd it 😊 beautifully written...
nice banner...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updates...loved both parts. Enjoying the story, continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Di pichle 4times se me first dis is unbelievable
lol
sng i knw di :p
yup i like d arni convo
n in btw take ur tym di..
yay dne di..
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Posted: 12 years ago

I loved this part:
kayi log humari zindagi mein aatey hain... kuch humari zindagi mein apni jagah bana lete hai... aur kuch humare dil mein... kuch humari zindagi mein humare saath reh jaatey hain... aur kuch humari zindagi se chale jaatey hain... par jaane wale log apni yaadein humare dil mein chhod jatey hain...achchhi, buri, khatti, meethi... har tarah ki ...

After all it is dil-logical.😉
Awesome song which is one of my favorite & apt to the updates.😃
You have beautifully penned down Roshni-Arjun's convo.Riya's efforts to bring back the 2 long lost buddies is such a sweet gesture.👍🏼😃
Coming to 2 part.Sameer Rathod is a thorough gentleman & there is no second opinion to this.👏Then came Anwesha-Sameer's meet & their convo.Very natural.👍🏼I liked the part wherein she decided to make sameer dine with them.😛
Then came the sisterly bonding.🤗

In short,2 beautiful updates with 2 beautiful conversations😃
Lastly,the banner.It is beautiful👍🏼
Edited by ll-Farheen-ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
diii hugs 🤗🤗

me back

I know main apki PRO hu fir bhi itni late comment kr rhi hu

ab apko wajah to pta hai hi...


the note is awesome...

typical filmy...and i luv bollywood movies...wo hota hai naa.. k lead k intro me to voice over hota hai...ek dum ussi tarah ka note tha...



coming to the both parts

hehehhehe arjun k time se jaane pr sabko shock lga 😆😆😆 bechare wo bhi kya kare...aise surprises ki adat jo nhi hai unhe 😆😆

ye riya naa arjun se pange lene k alwa kuch nhi aata...but jo bhi hua accha hua...riya ne rathore ka thank you msg arjun tak aakhir pahucha hi dia 😉😆😆

but baad me arjun se daant kha hi li...iska bhi naa arjun ki daant k bina mann nhi lgta 😆


Arni convo was too good..luved it...

aise scenes likhne me kafi risk hota hai...but apne beautifully likha scene aur arni ki dialogues awesome...


Aise scene padh kr naa mujhe TUM BIN movie k scenes yaad aate hai


and one more thing : ARJUN K DIL KI AWAZ ROSHNI...ko banaya...to good diii...accha concept dala aapne bich me⭐️⭐️⭐️

ye riya ki bacchi...apni badi behan ko kaise bhul gyi😡 aur kitni jaldi ise yaad aaya k ise apni behan ko lene airport jana hai...jb 5 min baki the 😡😡😡 but kehte hai naa jo bhi hota hai acche k liye hota hai...rathore ka call sahi whqt pr aaya... aur usne annu ko airport se pick krne k liye khud hi offer kya...ahaan kya baat hai...Itna cooperation...good good...


riya ka khali whqt me ek hi kaam hai arjun ko yaad krte rehna

ye riya ko kuch nhi ho skta



but kanya khus hai k arjun use basket ball sikhane k liye mann gya hai...


ye dekho pehle to ACP sahab issi kanya ko dhund rhe the soch rhe the kash uss se contact kr pata...ab kanya saamne hai to dimag chalna band ho gya ACP ka😆😆😆

ACP ne pehle se pehle hi apna ghar bata di...jab marzi aaye ghar aa skti ho 😆😆😆 aur ye bhi bta dia banda single hai...ACP ki gadi ek dum sahi track pr chal rhi hai 😆😆😆


aur annu bhi sahi hai...naa pucha naa bataya..sidhe riya ko order de dia..k rathore unke sath dinner karega...

dii...rathore aur annu k dialogue girl crime ko lekar...superb...

riya abhi se jealous kr rhi hai rathore se...bechari ko kya pta abhi to use apni didi bhi rathore se share krni padegi😆


ye rathore bhi naa...pehle khud hi kanya k bare me soch rha hai...fir khud hi khud ko daant raha hai...


hehehhhe isko bolo chk up karwayega...aur waise bhi doctor hai annu 😆 iss bahane aur milna milana ho jayega😆😆😆



ab ye annu ka bhi koi past hai...ufff pr har kisi ka past hota hai...to iska bhi hoga hi 😊 arre annu rathore k bare me socho...sochne pr tax thodi hi lgta hai 😊😉







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Posted: 12 years ago
@Zuby... Thanks... but to be very honest... it was not straight from heart... it was straight from Bollywood 😃...

Jhoot boley kawa kaatey & all that🤣 I know its been very long since you made that cuppa tea yourself😉😆
Arjun-Roshni... it was not actually Arjun-Roshni... it was Arjun's mind voice... the happy one... and he smiled and chuckled at his own funny thoughts imagining being with Roshni... he went into past... when Roshni was alive he was like that only 😛
And yes... Arjun is a man from story book only 😉 ... it is impossible to find someone like this in real life...

I do that.All the time.😕 Put my funny/happy thoughts into the The Man of the Moment (currently Arjun/Shaleen, formerly Patil Saab) & have endless bantering & soulful discussions.Nothing beats daily stress of pointless existence like this does.And here I thought only I was looney!😆 I so wish to see this on screen There is always an aura of purity & magic in Arjun-Roshni scenes.There is the two of them & a deep & soul reaching love.Nothing else.
Anwesha... definitely she was embarrassed that her sis's boss is coming all the way to drop her home, that too because of her sis's stupidity...😳😳😳.. And the guy lives alone... he will reach home late... and its really boring to be alone... she too lives alone... so she understands that...so she assumed that he will have dinner with them..😛😛😛... and anyways for courtesy too she had to ask him for dinner... right???? 😉😉😉 ... And if Sam had had his dinner he would have told her that I'm done with it... so she could have again informed Riya... But Sam was hungry too... us par se Annu dinner pe invite kar rahi hai...thoda sa embarrassment hai ...lekin "na" bolne ka to scope hi nahi hai 😉😉😉... remember..."he liked her caring nature" 😉😉😉

Even if Sam had eaten dinner two times over not in a million years would he have refused an invitation from the lady who had straight out of his dreams just crash landed into the passenger seat of his SUV 😛😆 Remember that scene from Rab Ne Ban Di Jodi? Sam's expressions would be priceless🤣
Sister bonding is always cute... u explained that very well with your sisters' example 😉😉 ...
For banner... I made an edit for the first time... glad that u liked it...
And for Riya... Her Di is anyways coming, but last 2 days were really eventful for her...talking to Sam, talking to Arjun, basket ball... it was not easy to shrug off those thoughts so easily...
After these 3 big parts + the Note... i'm really exhausted... next update will be a short one...😉 ...

Why? But koi nai! This story is meant to be savoured slowly😊 I'll wait!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ek duje jje vaaste <3
I love this song :$
The introduction was very very sweet!!
LOL Trio shocked to see Arjun leaving early :P
so Arjun had scolded Riya..
LOVED the way you wrote the Roshni part, as Arjun's minds voice..it was so very beautifully written <3
LOL even Rosh thinks he is an akdu :P
So Arjun is attracted towards Riya :)

And so Sam and Anwesha meet <3
Sam is surprised to see 'HER' :$ their covos were super sweet..


Taking about crimes against women, theses kinds of heinous have become so normal theses days, every now and then we get to read about it in the newspapers..and that's just so pathetic and shameful..and not just in Delhi its happening in every damm place, its just some cases gets noticed, and some don't..and then there are sick minded people who will blame the girl and her clothes and everything else except the guy🤬

ok lets not get into this, coming back to the story
Even Anwesha remembers him from the party!!
awwie Anu di and Chinki bonding is adorable!!!
LOL Riya is jealous to share her sweets :P
And Sam is reading her mind lol!!
Ahaan Anu thinking of Sam!! and yeah girl he is single ready to mingle :P😉😆
Guilt?? so it seems that she also suffers from a past!!

Sam attracted to wards Anu :$ oyee hoyee <3
awww he had dinner with a family after such a long time...
He sees the diffrence between chirpy riya and soft and sweet Anu <3
Hayee lagta hai Sam ji fultu fida hogaye😳

New forensic expert for Riya to gossip with lol :P Shrree Chotu are too cute!!!

awesome update!!loved it <3

do contd soon :D




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Posted: 12 years ago

And She arrives - Anu😉

Rathore ka dil goes latto 😆😆..
Coming to the parts brilliant ones - Arjun ji mind voices ho actually Roshini ki tarah baat karte hain ...finally knocks some sense in him...
What i absolutely Loved was the Anu - Rathore meeting ...Rathore ki jhatka ki she is Ri Sister and then ofcourse how smoothingly they both started to talk ...sharing of Laddu and matri absolutely hilarious 😆😆😆main bhi share nahi karti ...
But Anu ka kya past hai😕...
New Forensic Expert ...gossip girl session hoga ab toh
Edited by sips_crazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
@nakshatra92 ... Thanks...😊... yes... it was really difficult because first I had to think like all 4 of them 😛 ... Roshni is Arjun's happy mind voice... jab usne purane Arjun ki tarah socha... to usey realise hua ki wo Riya ki pasand karta hai... Pyaar abhi nahi hua hai...😉 ... jab tak wo Roshni ka badla nahi le leta... tab tak uske liye aagey badhna difficult hai...
hmmm... Ab dekho... Sameer - Annu ki ye pehli mulaqat aagey kaise badhti hai 😉
Will update soon 😊
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@DesiiiDivaaa Thanks...😊
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@Payal... u r my rockstar 😊
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@Farheen ... Thanks 😊... yes... its Dil-logical 😉 ... Arjun-Roshni was my favourite too 😛... Currently in show... Aisha was trying to re-unite R-R... here in my story I thought of making Riya do that...😊
Sam-Annu and Riya-Annu bondings are very special to me... they were the base of my story when I thought about this concept 😊
And definitely Annu had to invite Sam... he came all the way to drop her, because of Riya's stupidity, he lives alone, it was late... and anyways Annu is a "Mommy" type person... always caring about others 😊...
More would be coming in future parts on their relationships 😊
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@Ila... Thanks 😊 ... par wo kya tha jo tumne likha tha? 😳... but anyways... jo bhi tha... Same to u 😳😳
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@Annu ... yippie... my PRO is back... don't worry dear... I know the reason for you not being active... and i'm so happy for you 😊
Haan... wo voiceover ho tha...😉... ki sabko samajh mein aaye ki agey kya hone wala hai... sabko jhatka nahi lagna chahiye ki ye achanak 😛 kyun ho raha hai
Arjun aaj khush tha... Sam ke saath Basket Ball jo khela 😉 ...
Riya... arrey usko Arjun ki daant khaye bina neend nahi aati 😆😆😆... par wo to bechari dono friends ka jhagda khatam karne ki koshish kar rahi hai... bechari ka sandwich ban raha hai... par ab sab clear ho raha hai😉 ... waise Arjun ke liye koi nayi bat nahi thi ki Sam ne guess kar liya hai ki Halwe ke bare mein usi ne in teeno ko bataya hoga...
Yes... Arni Bahut bada risk tha... aur wo chal gaya... wo ab tak ka mera favourite part hai 😛
Ab Sunday ke din case aa gaya to mood kharab ho gaya bechari Riya ka... aur der tak kaam bhi kar rahi thi... nikal gaya bechari ke dimag se...
But ek baat note kar lo...😉 ... meri kahani mein agar aisa kuch bhi gadbad ya bura dikhe to samajh lena ki ussey bhi kuch achchha hi hone wala hai...😉😉
Aisa agey bhi hoga...😛
Ab dekho... Riya bhool gayi... Sam airport ke bahar hi tha... to Sam - Annu mil gaye na? 😉😉
Agar Riya nahi bhoolti to Sam-Annu kaise miltey?
Yaar... Riya ki life 2 din se itna kuch chal raha tha... pehle usne Sam ko poke kiya... fir Arjun ko poke kiya... fir Shree - Chhotu ko pata kar sports club le gayi bahane se...waha R-R ka involvement hua jo usko mushkil lag raha tha... fir Arjun uska coach ban-ne ko bhi taiyar ho gaya... to fir usko Arjun hi yaad ayega na... didi to aa hi gayi hai 😛😛
Dekha... Riya ki galti aur ACP ke gentleman hone ka faayda... aa gayi na Kanya khud hi samne 😉😉
ACP to bas dheere dheere chance le rahey hai... abhi safar bahut lamba hai 😛
Ab Annu hai hi itni sweet ki bula liya ACP ko zabardasti dinner par... is sawaal ka mai jawaab pichhle comment mein de chuki hoon Zuby aur Vidya ko... wo dekh lena ...😛😛😛
Crime against women ka issue maine dono ki natural discussion ke saath uthaya... ab wo dono directly "hello Hi bye bye " to kar nahi saktey... to kuch official sa hona chahiye... jismein personal touch ho...😛
Didi to wo share kar legi... par Laddo aur Mathri... hee hee hee ... of course usko gussa aaya 😉
Rathore ke dil ke andar ka teenager abhi baahar aane ki koshish kar raha hai... aur ye ACP usko chup karwane ki koshish kar raha hai... par kab tak chalega ye... kyunki "Mitwaaa... Ishq pe Zor nahi" 😉😉😉
Rathore ko Annu se milne ke liye chk up ka bahana nahi chahiye 😉 ... unki next meeting bahut badi hone wali hai 😉 ... ek tarah ki unofficial date 😛😛
Annu ka bhi past hai... tragic hai... par Arjun ki tarah koi badla lene ki kahani nahi hai... it was just destiny... jiske liye wo khud ko dosh deti hai... ... agey ke updates mein ayenge details...😳
Aur wo Rathore ke barey mein bhi sochegi 😉... thoda aur intezar karo 😛😛
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@Zuby...will reply to ur reply with your quoted reply 😉
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@SilentSilver... Thanks 😊... ummm... a little clarification... there is no Roshni now... its Arjun's own mind. And its not Roshni but Arjun himself who knows that he is Akdu and Khadoos 😉 and he likes Riya and he should not keep on shouting at his team members and fight with Sam unnecessarily 😉
Yes... Finally Sam-Anwesha meet ... I wanted their meeting to be a simple one... a casual one... not a planned one 😉... and since they didn't have anything personal to talk, there had to be something common... so took up the case ... which gave a personal touch to their meeting...😊😊
The sisters bonding... Annu is more like a mother to Riya. 🤗... and Laddoos part 😆😆... who would like to share such stuff with his/her boss... 😳😳😳
And boss is smart enough to read her expressions 😎
Hmmm... ACP is single and ready to mingle with Annu only 😉... so she better catch the signals that he is sending 😉
Sam to hai hi full tooo fida... isliye to itna observe kiya 😛😛😛
Are you reading Shree's mind? Because Shree says the same thing when Chief announces that a girl would be joining as forensic expert 😉😉...
Shree-Chotu are always cute...😛... trying to post the next part very soon...😊
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@Sips_Crazy ... Thanks 😊 ... before anything else... Like SilentSilver ... are you too reading Shree's mind... he too gave the same comment ... gossip partner for Riya 😆😆😆
Finally Annu has arrived and landed directly in Sam's heart 😉😉😉
Arjun... well... pyaar ka itna to asar hota hi hai... that we tend to think like or from POV of our beloved... same thing happened with Arjun...he himself has realized many things... 😛 ...
For Rathore-Annu meeting... I had mentioned in my reply to a comment in my previous post... I wanted to portray that how a simple meeting in the parking lot of airport lead to a love story ... the concept of Love after the misunderstandings, fights and bickering has become very old... and didn't want to repeat it... 😛😛😛
Laddoos and Mathris... no one would have shared..😆😆😆... but Riya didn't have an option.. 😳😳😳
Annu ka past... wait n watch...😉 I had given a little details about her state ofmind in my previous reply... and to Annu above in this post...
Trying to update soon 😊
Regards,
Bhavna
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Carrie-

@Zuby... Thanks... but to be very honest... it was not straight from heart... it was straight from Bollywood 😃...

Jhoot boley kawa kaatey & all that🤣 I know its been very long since you made that cuppa tea yourself😉😆
Joke of the century... wanna know my Love and Marriage story? It was nothing like a YC movie that I described in a filmy way in my note 😉😉😉😉😉
Arjun-Roshni... it was not actually Arjun-Roshni... it was Arjun's mind voice... the happy one... and he smiled and chuckled at his own funny thoughts imagining being with Roshni... he went into past... when Roshni was alive he was like that only 😛
And yes... Arjun is a man from story book only 😉 ... it is impossible to find someone like this in real life...

I do that.All the time.😕 Put my funny/happy thoughts into the The Man of the Moment (currently Arjun/Shaleen, formerly Patil Saab) & have endless bantering & soulful discussions.Nothing beats daily stress of pointless existence like this does.And here I thought only I was looney!😆 I so wish to see this on screen There is always an aura of purity & magic in Arjun-Roshni scenes.There is the two of them & a deep & soul reaching love.Nothing else.
Enjoy...😉😉... Dutta Bhau is out of action these days... but Arjun is there na... he will give u good company in your thoughts 😉 and that's not being looney at all Tongue
Actually all i'm writing is what I have always wanted to see on screen... and i'm really happy to know that others(including you 😉) too want to see this in the serial...
Arjun-Roshni are always cute
Anwesha... definitely she was embarrassed that her sis's boss is coming all the way to drop her home, that too because of her sis's stupidity...😳😳😳.. And the guy lives alone... he will reach home late... and its really boring to be alone... she too lives alone... so she understands that...so she assumed that he will have dinner with them..😛😛😛... and anyways for courtesy too she had to ask him for dinner... right???? 😉😉😉 ... And if Sam had had his dinner he would have told her that I'm done with it... so she could have again informed Riya... But Sam was hungry too... us par se Annu dinner pe invite kar rahi hai...thoda sa embarrassment hai ...lekin "na" bolne ka to scope hi nahi hai 😉😉😉... remember..."he liked her caring nature" 😉😉😉

Even if Sam had eaten dinner two times over not in a million years would he have refused an invitation from the lady who had straight out of his dreams just crash landed into the passenger seat of his SUV 😛😆 Remember that scene from Rab Ne Ban Di Jodi? Sam's expressions would be priceless🤣
Hee hee hee hee...😆😆😆... yes I remember that scene... but there SRK was madly in love with his wife... Here Sam is still confused...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed but yes... I didn't think of a situation if Sam had already had his dinner...here he just came out of a meeting and before that he was busy in an investigation TongueTongue
Sister bonding is always cute... u explained that very well with your sisters' example 😉😉 ...
For banner... I made an edit for the first time... glad that u liked it...
And for Riya... Her Di is anyways coming, but last 2 days were really eventful for her...talking to Sam, talking to Arjun, basket ball... it was not easy to shrug off those thoughts so easily...
After these 3 big parts + the Note... i'm really exhausted... next update will be a short one...😉 ...

Why? But koi nai! This story is meant to be savoured slowly😊 I'll wait!
I need a break from this track actually... while writing this I had to think like all 4 of them... And it was stressful... I wonder how professional writers take that much of pressure 😉
Don't worry the wait wont be longer... will update soon 😊

Edited by bgargate - 12 years ago

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